ERRONEOUSLY SEDUCED #8 Updated New Thread and P43 on Pg 133 - Page 50

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Posted: 10 years ago
Loved the bonding between maan and parth, seriouly always wanted to see such bonding now I can say maan will be the best father.. geet is really changing him.
Waiting do continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
Amazing update di... Its really so touching... Love parth... Donno who had commented abt parth as u said in previous note I think this update is their answer. Parth has not only changed maan but also brought maaneet closer. For him to escape geet's scoldings regarding parth maan is trying a lot. It was soo funny wen parth glared at maan abt icecream. Their game was gud but after the game was extraordinary. Maan is changing a Lott for geet. Hope evrything goes gud. Will be waiting to read more di...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Great bonding amongst all of them.
Especially how Maan is changing and accepting his feelings.
Please continue
Thanks
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Posted: 10 years ago
geet loves maan but doesnt trust him
maan knows that parth is right
how can something which is bad for parth be good for him
he wants to apologise but doesnt have the guts to face geet

geet refuses to let parth go with maan
will she relent
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice part.
Loved the new behavior of maan.
Hope maaneet won't separate in future.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Loved the update .. and loving the way how you are showing in each step how maan Is realizing his mistakes and putting efforts👏
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice update
Loved maan parth bonding!
Football ke baad maan aur parth ki baatein...loved it!!
Geet bhi dono ko dekhkar khush hai!!
Maan parth ka saath mein sono...very cute!!
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Posted: 10 years ago


PART - 40



PARTH become life of Maan's mansion. Sply to Geet. Her day starts with him and ends with him. She was habitual of doing his works along with Maan. Parth also giving his all love to both Maan and Geet. He gelled up with both now.


One pleasent evening Parth waits for Maan more than Geet. He was getting upset as Maan not coming home. Though he was much comfortable then before but still had a amount of hesitation or fear. He wants to call and ask when he is going to come back,but his fear of Maan stops him so he roamed and came back.


"Parth wait baby. I ll play with you." Seeing him gloomed Geet offered but Parth determined already. He only wants to play with Maan.


"no now i dont want to play." he grew angry and kicked his ball away,before ran to his room.


Maan's car entered in the premesis of mansion. Due to his meetings he was late ten usual. Though he tried to reach early because of Geet,but today he strucked. Maan straight moved to his room,where Geet was busy in setting his files and other belongings. Maan grabbed her and trying to kiss but she stopped in a way. Her finger shut his mouth before his lips lands on hers. Geet pushed him back.




Geet staring him. "where were you?" She asked strongly but not leaving Maan's mouth and he to stared her. Then only she realized and free him. "now ans. Where were you?" she asked again.


"Geet i was in a circus." He replied.


Geet shocked and stare him in confusion. "circus? Waha kya kar rahe the?" she asked innocently.


Maan release his breath sharp and clenched his eyes hard. "Gosh Geet you are to much."


"nahi pehle btaiye circus me kya kar rahe the? Or jana tha to mujhe or Parth ko b le jate. Bechara bachha kab se apki wait kar raha hai." Geet complaints not getting he was making mock of her.


"Geet i am a ring master na so i was in circus. I was there for work then how will i took you both there." Maan again shoot sarcasm.


Geet's eyes narrowed and her mouth fluffed,coz now she knew what he exactly meant. "to seedhe tarah se nahi bol sakte the. Itna ghumane ki kya zarurat thi." Geet burst and got one glare from him which lowered her voice same time. She taking step back which covered by Maan. Before she falls Maan hold her back in his arm. Geet gulp hard seeing his eyes which gazing her with intensity. "dekhiye i can understand that you were busy in your work,but Parth is a kid. He was waiting for you past three hours. Neither he ate anything nor playing his new video game which we brought for him." she couraged not to distract with his touch and eyes. And told him everything in a pace.


Maan pulled her to him. "where is he?" he asked nuzzling nose.


Geet breath hard. "in next room." she managed to voice out. "Maan s.." before she speak more Maan slammed his lips on her petal ones and started nibbling it. Maan nibbled her soft lips relishing its juice while Geet gasped for breath. She parted her lips to breathe when his tongue entered inside her warm mouth exploring the hidden treasure inside her mouth.Geet's face flushed and warm blood once again rushed inside her veins making her face more warm and Maan gently left her lips licking it one last time.


"you are saying something." Maan teased her.


"aap bolne kaha de rahe ho." she cribbed innocently and gave a chance to smirk. "he is angry with you." she told him finally.


"i ll see. Dont worry." Maan winked and left the room. He gradually entered in Parth's room. Where he found him sat on bed near his new unpacked game. Parth not yet opened it. Maan gradually went closer to him and sat next to him. But Parth was angry so he slipped away. His face was resting on his small fists and he pouts in anger. Maan smirked and slipped to his side.


"i am not talking to you." he said and maintain distance again.


"exact copy of Geet. When ever grew angry stop talking but not stop telling this." Maan babbled in mouth. He bend on his knees and came in front of him. "but why?" he asked.


"i told you in morning that we play this game together but you broke the promise." He told him the reason.


Maan grabbed his arms. "but i dont. See we both wait for each other to play the game together. You know i left my office in hurry to play this game. How excited it is and i am dying to play it. But if you dont then its okay. I will play alone." Maan tarpped him. He open the game and connect it with plasma tv. He connect it fully. Screen on and instruction starts,which attract Parth. Maan taking full advantage and attract him. He knew Parth couldn't resist long and happened same. He quickly came near to Maan grab the sec joy stick.


"chachu cheating. I wait for so long and you start playing without me." He again showing anger.


"no i wont. See i am waiting for you." Maan showed him the screen. He didn't start the game yet and Parth's eyes gleamed with both happiness and excitement.


Both start playing and Parth enjoyed alot with him. They only left the game after one hour when Geet came to reminds both for dinner. Though Parth doing tantrums but Maan handle the situation. Parth's giggles filled life to the mansion. Geet smiled unnecessarily along with him. He was a star of the house.


After dinner all moved to their room where Maan engrossed himself in his work while Geet was busy in telling him stories. But today he wasn't in a mood of sleeping. "chachi one more." he demands.


"Parth i already told you 5 stories." Geet not getting which story makes him happy.


"chachi pls tell na story which papa told me." Parth demands and made her confused.


"ab Dev sir konsi story sunate hai isko?" she asked to herself and thought to called Meera as he only wants to listen that story.



Maan smirked,hearing their conversation. "Parth come here." he called him and he to ran to him in a pace. Maan put aside his laptop and took him in his lap. "you want to hear a story of a warrior?" Maan asked softly and Parth nodded in pace with sparked eyes. Maan enveloped him and start telling a story to him. Geet to listening him carefully which amused her. By the story got over Parth was slept in his arms. Maan stood up and moved to their bed. He placed him gently on bed and both covered him. Then both laid on bed covering Parth from both sides.


"when ever i thought i start understanding this man,he surprised me and broke my assumptions." Geet talked to herself,while gazing Maan lovingly. Maan caught her and asked. "so you have this talent also." She asked in a surprised voice filled with excitement. Maan shook his head with a proud. "i never imagined that you can do this. But how come you know about the exact story he was asking for?" she was curious.


"actually this warrior story was told by our mom when me and Dev were of his age. She daily told the same story as we both loved it. So when he said papa wali story,i got Dev told him the same story and he was asking for this only." Maan calmed her curiosity ,telling her the truth behind this story.


"you missed your mom?" Geet asked in a pace which was not he expecting this moment. Maan turned blank for a while but then replied.


"not much. Dadima were there for us." Maan replied and laid flat on his back. "i think ab hume bhi sona chahiye. We too need rest." Maan turn off the lights.


"liar. Mom ki story yaad hai par mom nahi. Babaji why you made him like this?" Geet cribbed to God on Maan's indifferent behaviour towards all.


Next whole day passed calmly. Maan to came early from office. After dinner all are relaxing in hall when a row of cars entered in his premises. All alerts and staring at the main enterance. Soon Dev and Meera appeared with Dadima. It was a surprise for all as they don't informed any of them. Parth who was sitting in Geet's lap just jumped in a pace seeing his parents after so many days. He ran to them and Meera took him in her arms. She kissed him so many times and so Parth. After this he jumped to his father's arms. Dev snuggled him firmly. Dadima went to Geet and Maan. She blessed both. "kaise hai aap?" she asked to Geet and she smiled weakly.


"i am fine dadima." she replied meakly. The moment Parth jumped from her lap,she felt some one took her life from her. Her eyes subduded. She actually forgot the truth that he was here with her for few days only. In a few seconds her whole worlds turns ups and down.


"thank you Geet. Thank you so much. Infact thank you is a very small word in front of what you did for Parth. You know i am carefree only because i knew that my son was in safe hands." Meera showed her gratitude towards Geet. She kissed her on forehead and blessed her. Dev and dadima to gave thanks to her but Geet not react much only giving fake weak smile.


"you don't tell me that you are coming. I mean abhi to Parth ki packing b nahi hui hai." Geet was like a small kid who giving baseless excuses.


"oh that's not a issue. We only came to pick up him." Dev told and sabotage her hope to kept him with her. Geet knew that one day he will left but with his love and she forgot the truth.


Parth was also extremely happy,getting back his family. His parents,his baby sister and daidma. He took Alya from peggy and showered his love on her. She too responded to her brother.


"sorry bro we disturb you at this time." dev apolozised and giving thanks also for keeping his child with him.


"its okay." Maan replied shortly.


"i think we should leave now. Its already late." Dadima asked to leave and Meera once again gave thanks to Geet but it hardly reached to her ears.


They start moving but Parth came back and hugged Geet. He kissed her. "bye chachi." he kissed her on both cheek then moved to Maan. He called him down and whispered in his ears. "Chachu chachi ko dantna mat. She will turn upset. Only love her." He caution him before leaving. Parth kissed Maan to and his action amused all. Their eyes popped out. A man who hate kids not react on his kiss and also hearing hos talk calmly. Its truly a shock for all of them. After instructing Maan finally Parth left the Maan mansion...



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Posted: 10 years ago
parth enjoying maans company very much he just wanted to play with him even maan also liked spending time with her little shocked when MSK talked about circus he is really changed but all came back n took parth poor geet feeling so sad surely maan also will feel sad nice part thnx 4 update
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Posted: 10 years ago
superb part.. parth was so cute.. he want to play with maan but maan was late.. and showing anger to maan.. but maan easily manofied parth.. now geet was sad because parth was gone

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