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Posted: 10 years ago


Wow lovely omg thrilling actionful thud update..te way adi-sam-nattu seraching my maaneet and got shock to know tat dev took my maan and they fear recollecting geet's words was lovely thud..te way nt dragging geet and geet ki shock to see my maan and both felt relief seeing each other but tat b**** dev, ki words and action,without knowing abt my maan ki sherni he is playing with her omg geet give pounces and she giving his pay back for my maan , te way geet ki smartness and took te phone and stopping him my maan called sam and informs , her was lovely superb thrilling update..omg now dev took petrol can, but know who seeded will get te profit so dev-nt game going to end..i love te update yar with thud thud heart

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Posted: 10 years ago
geet wow...dev n nt u both r gone...

awesome update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

eagerly waiting fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

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Posted: 10 years ago
hi thanks 4 da pm n intense update! well written! Sam n Adi n John worried! Dev n NT r so disgusting! Maan helpless! Geet arrives with NT! Maan tells Dev 2 nt touch geet! his enmity is with him! Dev hits Geet! Geet fights back! brave n courageous Geet! she gets her phoe 2 Maan n tells him wt to do! Sam answers! Maan reveals wt happened n where they r! Dev angry! he wants to kill them! update soon
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WOW!! fantastic update dear...loved it
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Wow geet
Wgat a flight :P
Poor dev ek ladki k samne kuch nehi kar paya :v
N nt another coward hahahah
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amazing update
plz next part soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
superb update di .. geet fought back with dev ... now scene is becoming more dangerous .. lets see how would maaneet save themselves ...

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Edited by singh24 - 9 years ago
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The Bliss




The simple things of life can be blissful, if you can take the time to enjoy it. There is love in the air, everywhere... you just need to feel it, embrace and enjoy all that life has to offer.

Every moment that is enjoyed, treasured and relished is a store house of memories, that you can draw out, enjoy and smile with love. It is bliss..


Oh sweet bliss how did you find me in the dark with all my troubles

collecting like copper pennies in a fountain,
under pain concrete form,
a flower breaks
through the crack of my once solid shell.

Stay with me bliss ,
never leave me again,
for my need is great and my patience is plentiful.
Oh lessons I need not learn again,
forget where I have been.

Let me walk in the sweet embrace of a Sunday's morn
and not forget it tender kiss of compassion
for God had granted me another day with you.
Hold me in the arms of your unfolding grace
and we will put back all the fallen stars in the sky...


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Note..

This a fiction , all incident , medical terms , professional terms nd places r imaginary ,, plzz don't relate them with reality .


Note... This is a fiction inspired by some facts and incidents from our surroundings . If someone find any resemblance in d title and story line , they r welcome to leave their comments on my page (plzz don't pm me)with d link . I'll try my best not to touch any body's work. Need ur love and support to make it an interesting SS.





Part - 59



Part - 60

"Our intention creates our reality."

There was a tussle in that deserted place between d right nd wrong ,, between d truth nd injustice ,, this struggle was to save themselves , but there was a big diff in Intentions ,, one was greedy , wicked nd became a criminal to fulfil their dreams nd other was truthful , hardworking , honest nd righteous ,, none cn hide or suppress d truth for long .

That small msg was enough for Sam nd she disclose d truth of Dr Dev nd NT ,, Dr J was hell shocked listening that ,, Adi got DM call she was entering in campus nd already called d police ,, d PCR van was behind her car ,, Adi came out to meet her nd Sam forced Dr J to call police nd to inform d srs nd dean ,, they had to take action very fast bcoz lil delay cd be risky for MK nd Geet ,, Dr J called his Sr nd narrated him d whole matter nd said that he was calling d police ,, Dr J then called dean nd gave him d report ,, this act was like a stain on Insti 's name nd high authorities wanted to keep d respect of Insti ,, Dr J was busy in calles after calls nd angered Sam called d police , but d police was already there with DM ,, Sam rushed out nd Met with DM ,, Adi was narrating d whole matter to her nd d police SI nd constable wr listening that ,, Dr J too came there behind Sam nd informed his Sr that d police was there so they have to come .

Sam told d police where Dr Dev nd NT took MK nd Geet nd all started rushing towards d mortu .

In mortu Geet was struggling with Dev with all her force ,, defeated Dev became furious nd hit Geet in her stomach nd face , but geet was not ready to leave his collar nd hand ,, feared NT run towards petrol can witch horrified Geet ,, she was fearing for Maan ,, she shouted .

Geet: Maan , go out ,, go out Maan ,, fast .

Maan: no I cn't live u alone here , I ...

Geet: Plzzz ,, go out Maan ,, plzz go ,, I m stopping him .

Maan saw NT took d can nd this was really very dangerous for them ,, her next action cd finish him nd Geet forever ,, in a blink he took d support of his chair nd got up ,, he rushed towards NT who was opening d can but when she saw MK there, infront of her on his feet ,, she stepped back in fear ,, Maan snatched that can from her hand nd threw away ,, d can was half opened nd petrol started pouring out ,, Maan gave 2-3 tight slaps at NT's face ,, she fell down on floor ,, Maan was burning in anger .

Seeing this Dev too lost his remaining sense ,, seeing Maan walking on feet bewildered him , though geet too was shocked but she knew that Maan cd walk with d help of support , but right here he was walking without support ,, NT was lying on floor frightened nd defeated ,, Maan looked at Dev with red eyes nd started coming towards him ,, Geet was holding Dev nd now her courage became double ,, when Maan came close to them Dev tried to make him free nd lift his hand to hit Maan , but Maan held that in mid ,, now his one hand was in Geet hand nd one in Maan ,, Geet looked at Maan .

Geet: Maan , come on ,take ur revenge .


Maan nodded nd gave solid punches on Dev's face nd stomach ,, every pain , every wound alived in Maan's mind nd he was pouring out his anger on Dev , who was d mastermind of all his nd his family 's miseries ,, NT saw that nd got up ,, to save her she quietly moving towards door to slip away , but Geet saw her ,, she gave a punch on Dev's eye .

Geet: this is for having a bad eye on innocent girls ,, Maan held him tight .

Get left Dev nd rushed towards NT nd held her ,, turned her nd gave a solid slap on her face .

Geet: don't u accompany him in his last journey to jail ? very bad ,, when supported him in all his sins then why r u running now mrs Mahajan ,, don't want another combine degree .. a life time achievement award . Geet dragged NT in nd Maan's punches made Dev lifeless nd he knelt down on floor holding his stomach ,, blood was coming out from his mouth ,, Geet pushed NT near Dev nd held Maan .

Geet : calm down Maan ,, nd called police .

Maan: hummm .

Maan took out Geet's phone from his pocket , but they heard d sounds of cars nd nd then foot steps coming towards them ,, there police , Sam nd Dr J entered followed by Adi , DM nd Nattu ,, DM gasped seeing Maan ,, Adi , nattu nd DM rushed towards Maan ,, Maan hugged DM who had tears in her eyes ,, Adi nd Nattu checked Maan .

Adi: sir r u all right ?

Maan: yes Adi , thanks Nattu anna .

Sam nd Dr J wr surprised seeing MK on feet ,, then they looked around ,, there was Maan's broken laptop , his folders nd can of petrol ,, confused they looked at Dev nd NT who wr knelt on floor defeated ,, they never thought that their plan wd turn like this .

Seeing police Dev tried to play again nd started his drama.

Dev: we did nothing sir ,, it was he nd his GF ,, they wanted to kill us ,, he wanted to take revenge from me nd my wife ,, see he was fine nd making fool ppl that he cn't walk ,, it was all his nd this girl's plan.

SI: why u brought them here ,, these all said that u ndd ur wife brought them here .

Dev: no , they r lying ,, they brought us here to take revenge from me .

SI: why ?

Dev: bcoz after his acci NT married to me ,, she was his GF ,, he didn't like that nd now wanted to take revenge nd trap us ,, they brought us here , not we ,, we r innocent ,, plzz sir save us .

Dev pleaded in front of SI ,, police thought that it cd be d matter of failed love nd revenge so decided to take all in PS ,, police had to listen both d sides.

DM , Nattu , Adi , Sam , Dr J ,Maan nd Geet wr shocked listening Dev's words ,, Geet knew in anger Maan cd do anything wrong so came close to him nd pressed his hand .

Geet whispered : Maan , keep quiet nd let him speak , we have proof ,, lets go to PS 1st.

Geet: who wanted to trap whom that we'll porve in PS ,, inspector plzz take them in custody ,, there wr things which have their fingerprints ,, he broke Maan's laptop nd wanted to destroy his research work , nd then wanted to burn us ,, he did that before too ,, Maan's last acci was too planned by both of these B******* ,, I have proof .

SI nd Const looked all around nd saw d things scattered there ,, SI held Dev nd told other to come in PS for further investigation ,, SI ordered to const to captured all d things in his custody after taking pics of d place ,, Geet took her nd Maan's bag ,, kept d torn folders in bags ,, asked to SI if they want Maan's phone for fingerprints , Const took that ,, Maan was standing holding DM nd told Adi to bring out his wheel chair ,, he was now walking taking DM's support nd Sam was on his other side to give him support ,, d rain was still pouring ,, d 2 Sr dept ppl too reached there nd met with SI ,, they told Dr J to go PS nd tried to keep d matter under cover bcoz they don't want to spoil insti name , so insisted him to solved d matter without media interf .

Maan , Geet , NT nd Dev sat in PCR van nd other followed them in DM's car ,, nattu nd Adi wr on scooter ,, srs went back from there after lil talk to SI.

In PS Dev started his drama again ,, NT too backed his words ,, she accused Man that he wanted to take revenge from her nd her husband bcoz after his acci nd medi inability she married to Dr Dev,, Sam groaned in anger nd shoot angry glares at her ,, Maan was burning in anger on their lies but Geet was quiet ,, others wr confused ,, then Geet took out her lappy nd a USB cable ,, opened her watch nd attached her watch with d lappy nd placed that on table nd started ... d voice recorder started ns there was NT's nd her convo ,, pics wr not visible bcoz of darkness , but d convo bewildered Dev nd NT ,, SI nd other Police men too wr surprised seeing this smartness of Geet ,, then there was convo in d mortu which had some clear pics too ,, d convo in which Dev was threatening Maan nd Geet cleared all d doubts of police ,, Dev's nd NT faces turned pale ,, they saw their end near ,, then Maan to handed his watch to Geet for further proof ,, his watch's recording was enough to dig Dev nd NT graves in which Dev blurt out his last sin ... How he planned to kill Maan to make their way clean forever ,, All wr hell shocked listening that nd wanted to tore Dev nd NT right there .

Slipping everything from their hands , defeated nd lost Dev got up ,, he took SI's revolver from d table to kill Maan nd geet abusing them nd opened d holster but he was not that fast ,, d constables held him nd ,started beating him , even SI too ,then he ordered to threw him behind n bar ,, he made d mistake to snatch d gun of a SI in PS ,, that piled up his crime more ,, a lady police dragged NT nd locked her in a diff cell ,, SI ordered to his const to make 2 solid FIR ,, one from his side too for snatching his gun to kill ppl nd other from Maan nd Geet ,, it was a case of attempt to murder nd there was very tough punishment was waiting for Dev nd NT ,, everything went against them nd their rest of life wd end up in jail .


Precap ----- a partial confession ...

Part - 61






Edited by singh24 - 10 years ago
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