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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: aparna3011

very nice update

maan is very hurt as geet says not to come back
geet also sad that he is not coming back but finding his wallet she decided to return it back
went to kc
there she saw her brother brij handa
after wating almost full day geet sees maan n become unconscious

thanks ... 😛
y she is unconscious , u got it right ...she waited for whole day 😛



Originally posted by: nishamna

It's amazing. Geet is very upset after maan's exit. Maan is angry on geet as even she didn't tell her the reason behind her rigorous decision. Geet went maan's office for returning back his wallet which he forgot in jungle. Geet has a brother who is so much rich than why geet is staying in jungle. Maan's guard throwed geet as maan's insteuct them. But he was unaware that.it's his own geet. He.regretted when he saw her injured. He hugged her to sooth her pain whilst some reporter took a pic of maneet. Waiting for next dear

thanks ..will update soon 😛





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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: sagorika93

Superb part . toh ab maan se Milne geet aagyi ...office hayeee !! Kya conection hai inka har roz ek dusre se milne aayenge n baad mei upset hoke chale bhi jayenge :p but m happy iss bar geet ko maan apne sath le gaya atlst kuch time ke liye hi sahi ...geet maan ke ghar toh rahegi ...hayeee !!! Continue soon...

thanks .. kabi aik aata ha to kabi dusra 😆.. pagal log 😆

Originally posted by: nakh5683

lovely update maan is helpless for the first time he cant get something even if he spend his every last penny geet is feeling bad but she has no choice as she dosent want to go through the pain of loosing someone maan had forgottn his wallet she came to know his name thought she knew it from somewhere decided to give him back as he would not come again maan was angry at geet he took it out on the staff geet was finally able t make it to kc but the watchman wouldnt let her in she decided to wait by his car she saw her bro after all theses years and became emotional guard started to drag geet away as maans order she thought maan hates her she got hurt in process maan was shocked to see her hugged her and sooth her wounds and took her away

thanks 😛
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Posted: 10 years ago
Part 9 awesome & little sad update
I really felt sad for geet & that watchman i want to beat him
so now on geet stay with maan na
waiting for next
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Posted: 10 years ago
Just came across this FF..n moi loving it...
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: dreams-reality

Awesome update

Loved it

thanks
thanks


Originally posted by: leena63

Part 9 awesome & little sad update
I really felt sad for geet & that watchman i want to beat him
so now on geet stay with maan na
waiting for next

thanks .. 😛

Originally posted by: taahir004

Eagerly Waiting
For Next Update

updating

updating

Originally posted by: namita25

Just came across this FF..n moi loving it...

thanks


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Posted: 10 years ago
thank u soo much .. likes r increasing i see 😉

and i replied all ur comments ..check previous pages 😛


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Posted: 10 years ago
PREVIOUS : PART : 09
RECAP : He picks her up , and make her sit on his lap instead of passenger seat , n starts driving ... Her face was hidden in his chest , so none saw her face nor in pics it appeared...

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PART : 10 ..


He drives to his mansion , n takes her to his room n place her on his bed .. He already called the doctor .. Her shawl was not in place , making her upper body completely bare ...

" Uff , kya karun main is pagal ladki ka " ..

He goes to Ani's room and bring a dress for her ... Doctor was already outside the room , he let him in only when he made her wear that dress ...

Doctor checked her... N told him that she didn't eat anything that's y she fainted .. After giving her an injection n a drip , doctor goes off telling him she will feel ok in some time .. and needs more rest ...

Maan sits beside her , caressing her forehead .. ..

He felt bad .. How long she waited for him and she didn't make him wait ever ... Her forehead had a blue mark too , her eyes were puffy ...

" I didn't mean to hurt u baby "

He tucks the strands of her hairs behind her ear , n kiss her eyes . she was stirring a bit ...

" I already told u don't close ur eyes ever infront of me , I don't like this " now she was trying to open her eyes ,

" talk to me , u look so good while talking " he wanted to hear her sweet naughty talks ...

she slowly open her eyes , n see him sitting near her , her vision was blur .. but finding herself on bed in a big luxurious room was not acceptable reality for her ,,,

" hero ??"

He instantly looks at her , it was bliss for him to hear this,

He kiss her forehead" kun karti ho mere sath aisa ?.. kun baat karna band kar deti ho ? kun apni aankhain band kar leti ho ?" [ y u do this to me ? y u stop talking ? y u close ur eyes ?]

" tu yeh sab nahi kehta na to muje lagta main phir se sapna dekh rahi hun " .. [ hadnt u said all this , i would have thought i m dreaming ]

" sometimes reality is more beautiful then dreams "

" yeh sub philosophy na , meri samajh main nai aati " [ i dont understand all this philosophy ] she tries to get up .. while he hold her before she do

" koshish b mat karna uthne ki , kya haal bana lia ha apna??" [ dont even try to get up .. what have u done to urself ?]

"ab main ne kya kia ? sub teri galti ha " [ what did i do ?? its all ur fault ]

" meri galti ??" [ my fault ?]

" haan to ... 2 ghantay main tera wait karti rahi , tera wallet dene k liye " [ yes !! i waited two hours to return ur wallet ]

He feels a bit sad that she only came to return his wallet n not to meet him but right now her care was more important ...

"wese , hero yeh tera ghar ha ,?? " [ hero . is it ur house ?]

"nahi tumhain padosi k ghar le aaya hun " [ no i brought u to my neighbor's house] he mocks ...

" baday classy hain tere padosi " [ ur neighbors r very classy ]

They both share a naughty look and burst out laughing ...

" aur family kahaan ha ?" [ where is ur family ?]

" Canada gay hain , ani wanted to go " .. [ they went to canada , anni wanted to go ]

anni ?? after how long she heard this name ..

" haan meri sister ani [ yes my sister anni]

" hmmm "

someone knocks ,

" main abi aata hun , utna mat ok ," [ i m coming back ..dont get up ok ? ] but who will listen to him , once he turned she got up . n started exploring his room ...

Maan took the cereal from nakul , but he didn't let him in .

" tumhain bola tha uthna mat , ab lait jao " [ i asked u not to get up .. now lay down] she was standing near window ...

" hero , tu to aisay behave kar raha hai jaisay school main teacher kartay hain , yeh mat karo, wo karo " .. [ hero u r behaving like teacher , who say dont do this , do that ]

He knew she will not listen ,so after keeping the cereal on side table he picks her up and place her on bed again ... " ab chup chaap yeh kha lo " [ now have ur cereal ]

" tu to bada strong hai hero , muje aisay utha lia " [ hero u r very strong , u picked me up like this ] she pokes his biscep ,

" strong hai yaar ,kafi work out karta ha na ?" [ u do alot of work out ??]

He was continuously smiling at her antics , what is she ??

" haan ,ab kha lo , nahi to phir se behosh ho jao gi " [ now eat , else u will faint again ]

" yeh koi movie to nai ha k heroine baar baar behosh ho jay gi , aik baar ho gya utna kaafi ha " [ its not a movie where heroine will faint again and again ]

Pheww ! she will never listen to him , he picks the bowl , fills the spoon and feed her ,,

She makes cute yucky face " iss se to jungle main apple acha hota ha " [ apple in jungle is more tasty then this ]

" haan abi yeh kha lo ,baad main apple le aaon ga " [ ok now eat this , i will bring apple later ]

" le kun aay ga ? main khud le lun gi .. " [ y will u bring ? i will take myself]

"abhi jab tak yahaan ho tab tak nahi " [ untill u r here ]

" yahaan hun matlab ?? main na yeh kha k jaanay lagi hun " . [ what do y mean ? i will leave after having this ] .. he gives an angry glare ,

" pagal ho gai ho ? [ r u gone mad ?]

" ho nai gai ,pehay se pagal thi , BJ b muje pagal kehta tha " [ not gone mad , i was already mad ... bj used to call me mad ] she had a sad smile on her face , she had only faint memories of golden days..

He puts down the bowl, first time she was talking about someone , he wanted to know where is she from , whats her name ,her past .. he wanted to know everything ...

" Bj ?? "

" haan wo ... Kuch nai muje chalna chaiye .. " [ nothing , i think i have to go ] she tries to get up again , but he don't let her go ...

" kon ha wo ?kia muje is kabil b nai samjhti k apne baray main kuch share karo??" [ who is he ? m i that unimportant that u dont share about urself ? ] he was not letting her go , was holding her tightly ...

" muje jaanay de hero " . [ let me go ]. she struggles to free herself ...

" main jaanna chahta hun , tumhaaray baaray main " [ i want to know about u ]

He was holding her hand and it was paining coz of drip , her eyes were watery .

" muje dard ho raha ha " [ u r hurting me ]

he realize that it was too much , its her life , and she hasn't given any right to him may b not now , but later he will surely get to know everything ...

" sorry , tum araam kar lo ,raat boht ho gai ha " [ sorry , u have to take rest ..its late]

" par muje wapis ..." [ but i have to ..]

" bilkul b nahi," [ no ..not at all]

" hero tu ne khana nahi khaya na ?" [ did u have ur meal ?] he could feel the concern in her voice .. ..

" haan tum so jao main kha lun ga " [ u sleep ! i will have my food ]

" nahi pehlay kha le na " [ no first eat ] he calls nakul and order him to bring his meal , which he brought within few minutes ...

she liked his presence , his care for her but she didn't want anything bad happen to him , so wanted to go back... but knew its not that easy to escape

he covers her with spread and sit beside her ..

" ab so jaao , doctor recommended rest " [ ok now sleep , doctor recommended rest]

" tu kahaan soy ga ?" [ where will u sleep ]

" dusray room main " [in other room]

"to ja na " [then go ]

He knew something is wrong , y she is acting weird

" nahi jab tak tum so nahi jaati tab tak nahi " [ i wont go till u sleep]

" main so jaon gi , tu thak gaya ho ga na ?? ja k so ja " [ i will sleep , u must be tired.. go and sleep ]

He thought its right to let her sleep , may b she isn't comfortable in his presence , after what just happened ..

"theek ha , tum so jao , agar koi cheez chaiye ho to main sath waalay room main hun " [ ok , if u need anything , i will be in adjacent room ]

" hmm ,good night "

He went to his room , after laying comfortably he again think about her , how his life is changing , the turn of events and everything .. he never felt like this before , his own concern for her make him wonder , he wanted to know why she asked him not to meet her that day .. .. in the pool of his own thoughts he drifts off to sleep


Next : PART : 11 .

Precap : geet back to jungle 😆.


Edited by abba12 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
hi abba
nice update
geet at maan's house..she needs rest ..
maan too concern abt her ..
i too want to know abt geet's past ..why her family left her ..do they consider her as bad omen ..
maan went to sleep ..i feel geet will go away without telling maan ..

thank u for update
waitring for next
Edited by tabby999 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Sorry ..will do format after some time .. Got busy
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Posted: 10 years ago
Wonderful part
Loved it maan took her to KM and made her sleep in his room he made her wear annie dress before allowing the doctor to check her up
Maan feeling bad seeing ner condition geet gain concious and found herself in her nero's house ...maan made her drink soup geet remembered about her biji maan wanted to know more about her but geet didnt tell him anything geet wanted to go back to her place but didnt allow he asked her to sleep geet finding it difficult stay here she dont want to out his life in danger so asked him to go and sleep in his room...I think she will once again leave maan and go fto her place

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