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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Snow_Angel

that's actually good too.It mean we able to connect with us story emotionally 😉

yes ..that's nice too 😉
Getting attached emotionally
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: GC_TheKing

Nice update. Geet thought Maan is her illusion but later she came to know he is real. Geet took promise from Maan they he will never come back at her place.Oh no now what will be their future.

their future is bright 😉😉
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Posted: 10 years ago

ha abhi 😈
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Posted: 10 years ago
OK update on the way ..just for u 😛
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Posted: 10 years ago
Thank u so much guys ... keep posting ur lovely comments and do hit likes 😛

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Posted: 10 years ago
PREVIOUS : PART : 08
RECAP : He looks at her for one last time ... His own eyes get watery ... He didn't want to leave her specially now , n this way , when he was sure that he can't live peacefully in his own world without her ,he went of to never come back again


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PART :09 ...

All his way back home he kept thinking y she did this , he had everything , he could purchase anything with his money but today he felt helpless ...

"Don't know what she think of herself , if she want this ..OK !! I will not come here again" ...

But Convincing urself is the hardest thing ... So was it hard for him ..

" She asked me to go away n didn't even find it necessary to tell me reason ?? M I that unimportant for her ?? "

he comes to his room and sits on the floor .touching his back with bed post... . Everything was meaning less ..


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When he left she kept sitting near water for some more time , there was burden on her heart ... But she didn't cry , living there for long time she had control on her own self .. She promised herself not to get attached with anyone ... That's y she lived there aloof from outer world .

. She goes into her hut , sits there sadly ... Her hand touch something. .. She looks n it was his wallet.. She picks it up , she opens it , it had his pic and now she couldn't control , she breaks down holding it close to her heart ... She cried her heart out ... For too long she kept crying and fell off to sleep ...

Next day she gets up with puffy eyes , his wallet was there beside her , she opens it , seeing his pic , tears again start rolling her eyes , she didn't know y she was crying for him , she didn't even know his name ... She sees his credit card n id " Maan singh khurrana " .. finally she knew his name , but what striked her was " khurana " , did she hear this before ????

She decides to go herself to return his wallet as he must need it , now she knew he will not return ,... after having some fruits she starts going towards road ... after many days she was going out again ,once she was near road she looked at herself , how could she go to city this way in her inners ? she pluck some wide leaves and arrange them in a way to to tie them around her waist ... now she was bit covered ...

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Maan woke up but today he was super angry , on her and on himself too .. and result was the bad day for staff , he went to office early morning ..

" sasha arrange meeting with handas in the evening , and aadi I don't want any mistake in the project "

"MK , ...

" its sir , u r employee here not my friend "

" but Mk , I always ..."

" from now its only sir for u too , n now go ,I don't want disturbance whole day ..." .

" yes ! sir... " both go off n he make himself busy in different files... .

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She was on road, at some distance she see a loaded truck , coming from other side ... instead of waving she used her own way like always , once truck was two steps away she ran and jumped to ride it and was successful in her attempt , now she was riding on it

" wow , super geet ,tu great ha "

" ab yeh shehr ki taraf hi ja raha ha " [ now its going towards city ] .. she looks at the boxes in the truck , her evil mind wanted to check what is in them , so she tear one with knife which is always with her ..

" oh shawls , super ... shehr k liye theek rahay gi ," [ shawlss !! this will be good for city ]she takes one out ..

After sometime she could see some more cars and vehicles , " iss ka matlab hum kareeb hain , is truck se neechay b utarna ha " .[ it means we r near , i have to jump down from this truck too ] . truck was bit slow she jumped down ..

She covers herself with shawl , n remove the leaves , shawl was large enough to cover her body and she settle it properly to cover each part ... She looks at the card , it had khurrana constructions address .. She decided to take cab , n pay from his wallet ... else she will not b able to reach there .

Once she was outside his office , she looks at the building ,she was awestruck ... everyone passing was glares at her ..She looks at herself , body was covered then y ??? She looks at people and get to know , all were in professional attires .. She goes to entrance ... Guard checks her from top to bottom ... First time he was seeing someone in shawl outside khuranas ..

"Abbey aisay kia dekh raha ha ?? " [ why r u looking at me like this ? ]

" who r u ??"

" kun btaoun ?? Tu boss ha yahan ??" [ why should i tell u ? r u a boss ? ] Guard was numb ..

" chal hut , muje ander jaana ha " [ get a side , i wanna go in ]

"But u can't go in ,"

"Kun muje hero se milna ha " [ y ? i want to meet hero ]

""hero ??" Guard was confused .. " hero , naam kia ha us ka ?? [ hero ?? whats his name ?]

Haan Maan hai us ka naam ... Muje Maan se milna ha " [ maan !! his name is maan .. i want to meet him ]

Guard thought she is some new fan of MSK .. Many girls come to meet MSK daily and he knew how to deal with her ..

" he isn't in office today , he is in Canada with family "

" Canada chala gya ?? Kab ?? " [ he went to canada?? when ??] guard was surprised at the way she was addressing Maan Singh khurana

" 1 week se "

" jhoot to theek se bol , rehne de main khud mil lun gi, usse bol dena car k paas wait kar rahi hun " [ u dont even lie properly , leave it .. i will meet him myself .. tell him that i m waiting near car ]

she guessed right , they wont let her in so decided to wait outside only ..

she goes to parking lot and see his car , same BMW parked there .. " sham ho gai ha , ab to office close honay ka time ha , kuch der main a jaay ga " [ its evening , now its the time to close office .. now he must be coming ]

" us ko wallet de k wapis chali jaaon gi " [ i will go off after returning his wallet] she stands there with her back touching his car ..

Maan was in the meeting with handas .. Once meeting was over , he went back to his cabin .. He was informed that some girl is waiting for him near his car which he ignored , it was normal for him , few rich bimbos come to his office daily claiming themselves his GF ... He started working on another file but somewhere he was feeling her presence .. He felt like she was near him .. But engrossed himself in work again ..

Geet was still waiting for him , when she saw someone .. Coming towards parking area .. Ohh ! She recognised him in a second .. She wanted to go and hug him , after whole 14 years she was seeing her bro .. Brij handa , how they both used to fight and play , he was elder still he played with her ... Her eyes filled up seeing him here , he was so near , she hides behind car .. He may not recognize her coz she was changed a lot , still she didn't want him to see her .. He starts his car and go away ..Geet keeps looking at him , till he was out if sight .. She smiled sadly ..once again he went away for ever ..

Maan winded up his work , he wasn't able to concentrate .. He comes out n at exit guard tell him that the girl is still waiting .. He orders them to throw her out before he reach his car ..

She was standing there in her own sweet memories of her bro , guard came to her

" leave this place within a minute , else u will b responsible for consequences "

She comes back to present "haan ???"

" go away else u will b behind bars for bugging MSK "

" muje hero se milna ha " [ but i want to meet hero ]

" he don't want to meet u "

" usse pata hai main yahaan hun ??" [ do he know i m here ? ]

" yes , n he ordered us to throw u out , so if u wont go urself , we will use other way"

She gets sad , he hates her ,now he don't even want to see her , is she that bad ? maan was coming from back , he saw her back , he felt she is his baby , but then chided himself coz , she couldn't come here ..

Seeing her standing still guard thinks she isn't going herself , and maan was also near so he hold his arm and start dragging her , she struggles and guard's hand slip , she falls ,while her forehead hit his car bit too hard

" ahhh " she place her hand on forehead ,.. maan recognized the voice ...

, shawl was mis placed and was slipping from her shoulders , she was feeling dizzy , wallet falls down from her hand , maan looks at his wallet ,its his, before gurad touch her again , he comes and settles her shawl in place ..

" baby , r u alright ?? he hold her both arms and asks keenly , she looks at him with questioning sad eyes ..

" mujh se itni nafrat karta ha ??" [ do u hate me this much ?]

" no , no I don't " .. he cups her face ...

there was blue mark on her forehead ,

" sorry , m really sorry " he hugs her ...

Guard was stunned , first he said sorry ,secondly he is hugging her , , that too in parking area...

" muje pata ha tu muj se nafrat karta ha ,issi kiye mujh se nai milna chahta na ?? main phir kabi nahi aaon gi ,kabi nai ... promise ," [ i know u hate me .thats y u dont want to meet me .. i will never come again .. promise ]

" don't say this ever again , it hurts ... " he hugs her more tightly , ..

she was loosing her consciousness , in his arms ..

" are u OK " .. She was no more in her senses ... two three media people start clicking the pics , afterall the maan singh khurana was hugging a girl so possessively in parking area .. It was not possible to stand there anymore now ..

He picks her up , and make her sit on his lap instead of passenger seat , n starts driving ... Her face was hidden in his chest , so none saw her face nor in pics it appeared


Next : PART : 10 ...

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Enjoy reading guys .. post ur reviews regarding this ... and hope my english translation isnt that bad 😆... i m really bad at it 😆



Edited by abba12 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
damn pinch me iam first that's coincident me being late latif 😳 yipppieee but iam so happy 🥳🥳🥳🥳🥳
lovely part yippie she all the way come to give her wallet and he is with him now not to worry
she found her brother interesting 😳
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part 8-
its painful why they part away that to so early what will happen now don't make them suffer
again amazing part dear lovely 👏👏
Edited by sadumaneet - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago


hi abba
nice update but painful specially for geet
geet was missing maan so went to see him and gave hiswallet but there she saw her brother ..if brij is her brother then why geet alone is in jungle ..i am very curious to know why geet is all alone ..her family is handas why she is not there with her ..
last finally geet met maan but she fainted ..

thank u for update
waiting for next
Edited by tabby999 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
fabulous update :)😊
no words to express 🤗
thnq so much fr the update 😊

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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome update
Maan don't leave her no
U r written superb

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