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Posted: 10 years ago
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hi sporthy
nice strat ..a different one ..
maan had memory loss ..now he met a girl and thinks her to be his gf ..
dadimaa ki storysar chad ke bol rahi hai ..

yahan pe bhi geet anjali ...kay baat hai ..tumhe anjali name geet ko dena bahut pasand hai kya ??😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Last part!!


Gazab ka hai din socho zara
Yeh deewanapan dekho zara



The continues ringing of door bell woke her up it wasn't even 6 wonder who was on the door...

As she made her way to the door her mobile started to ring on the same time

Looking back she was confused in her sleepy state..so deciding she opened the door first there was some delivery on her name... Giving him an angry glale she snatched the bags from his hands n walked back to her room

Come on who on earth comes to service at such an hour. .. gadha!!

frustrated with the ringing of the phone she picked it up to yell at who so ever to ring her n for not having patience of waiting

WHERE THE HELL WERE U!! She heard someone roar on the other side.. not sure who it was she tried to recognise the no atleast then she heard an other roar

NOW SPEAK UP WILL U that's it poor her all her sleep evaporated in thin air

Er... who's speaking... sorry I didn't recognise u

Anjali stop it now... it's me maan

Maan??

Maan... oh shit maan!!

Glad u recognised me atleast now... I know u can't be mad at me for long...

Acha Anjali. ..

Geet it's Geet...

Hmm listen I hope u got the delivery by now... there are few dresses n jewellery in one n there's a small box in it which has my credit card have them with u until we get married u can use those cards after that we can open a joint account ... Hain na...

But Mr.

Ohoo y are u so angry for... chalo we'll go on a date in the evening

Evening!!

I know u will miss me but got some work Anjali. ..

Geet

Hmm so will see u in the evening. ..

Hello... are u there Hello. ..

Oh he thinks the call is cut... let me cut it then... he babaji what was that!!

She dumped all the stuff on the bed...her whole bed was a mess... n such an expensive stuff... geet now this is getting a bit too much. .. he said evening right ok then evening it is..

She carefully put all the stuff back into the bags n locked the cupboard safely. ..



Tum ho akele, hum bhi akele
Maza aa raha hai kasam se.. kasam se


She entered such a classy restaurant for the first time in her life. .. the decor n the ambience was out of the world. .. one of the writer asked her if she was miss Anjali n that broke her trance..rolling her eyes she nodded in approval... he lead her to the poolside where he was already waiting for her

As the waiter left u are late Anjali

Geet she mumbled under her breath. ..

U very well know how busy I'm still u do it...

Ya right she knows him.. janam ka nata right... still she tried to put up a smile for him..

Suddenly there was an uncomfortable silence between them taking the opportunity she thought now she should clear the air. ..

Mr.maan. ..

Maan kaho na jaan

WHAT!!

Wait this is getting on my nerves now... listen Mr who ever... u are mistaken me for someone else...n I'm seeing you like second time in my life after yesterday... better check ur facts

Anjali!!

GEET!!

Ok..ok... sorry to make u upset. .. now that I've arranged all this we can at least have food right after all wasting food isn't good!!

Ok on one condition no Anjali business. ..
She said narrowing her eyes at him...

Ok cool... so shall we I'm starving. .. he said making faces...

Ok... she reluctantly agreed still doubting his intentions

so tell me about u... don't look at me like that it's just a casual question. .

Hmm I'm working in a private firm...

Okay ...That's it... done... wow... let me tell u about my self then I'm Maan Singh Khurana the MD Of Khurana constructions. ... this u know already. .. but Anjali what shocked me is ...

Geet...

N he went on...Apart from his Mental imbalance he seems to be a decent guy...

Ok so Mr.maan it's getting late I should get going... oh yes I forgot this the bags which u sent... sorry they reached the wrong address she winking at him tried to lift the bags as they are sitting too much close to the pool she lost her balance n thud!!

Into the pool!!

Hero did try to save her but he could only save the bags...

When she tried to climb up the pool he jumped in carrying her out in his arms...


Dekh lo humko kareeb se
Aaj hum mile hain naseeb se
Yeh pal phir kahan
Aur yeh manzil phir kahan


Maan put me down please I can swim n moreover the pool isn't much deep for me to get drowned!!

Don't be mad Anjali it's my duty to protect u

Sorry did u say duty... put me down ... put me down now...

Anjali... Anjali. ..Anjali. .. im fed up... what is all this for the nth time I don't know u...

Anjali did u hit ur head somewhere

What MAAN!!

Ok come with me... he drove her to his manision. .. she looked at him suspiciously

Its my home... Lets Talk to Dadi n sort out all our differences

Babaji kaha phasa diya...

Dadi Anjali is here...

It's Geet!

Will u just shut up!! He said glaring at her with his big eyes. .

Dadai did explain everything patiently which left maan aghast n embarrassed n geet n dadi couldn't stop laughing at his plight. ..

Later that night he dropped her back at her place apologising for his behaviour... n all the trouble he caused...

When she explained the situation to her mom her mom broke into fits of laughter along with rajji who listened to the whole story. ..

N maan couldn't stop thinking about her...



kya kahoon mera jo haal hai
Raat din tumhara khayal hai



Anjali he thought with a smile n slept off dreaming about her...

Even though every girl wishes for a prince charming but she know he was someone she could never match... Slowly she drifted off to sleep



Phir bhi jaan-e-jaan,
Main kahan aur tum kahan


Only to wake up by a shrill of her phone...

Hello...

OMG Geet

Maan??

Geet I'm in love with you!!

Babaji not again. ..




The end!



Next os I'm not sure if u will like it...
So lets take a break😊

This one's for tabby😆
Idea was from your comment😉
Edited by sporthy_smile28 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#23
Maan arrangd date nd sent gifts 2 geet nd tld her dat he hv arrangd date😃
Finally daadi explaind everything which made maan 2 realize wt mistake he did nd geer daadi geet's mom nd rajji ended up laughng🤣
Nw maan is in love wit geet👍🏼
Fab update👏
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: mishtypie

Maan arrangd date nd sent gifts 2 geet nd tld her dat he hv arrangd date😃

Finally daadi explaind everything which made maan 2 realize wt mistake he did nd geer daadi geet's mom nd rajji ended up laughng🤣
Nw maan is in love wit geet👍🏼
Fab update👏


Thank you😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: diyadecember

Cutest everevereverever!!!!!!!


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Posted: 10 years ago
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U came again with an os.. Isn't it??..I loved it soo soo soo much dear...hehehe.. Maan baby made joke of himself bcox of daadi..lolx..what I was thinking... If according to the drama.. Means maaneet married.. This n that but if daadi loses her memory.. It will be a change too.. Think about this sort of thing
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Posted: 10 years ago
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wonderful update! well written! Maan sends her stuff ! Geet stunned! he calls her Anjali n she corrects him! Dadi explains n he realises! he nw loves Geet!
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Posted: 10 years ago
#28
WOW !!!! Daadima's soapy serials did get Maan into a embarrassing situation thinking that some girl is his Anjali but again it was fate right
as when he learned the truth he phoned her and said Geet I love you
wow that is just awesome

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Posted: 10 years ago
#29
Perfect ending 😆
loved it!! 😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: doll.12

U came again with an os.. Isn't it??..I loved it soo soo soo much dear...hehehe.. Maan baby made joke of himself bcox of daadi..lolx..what I was thinking... If according to the drama.. Means maaneet married.. This n that but if daadi loses her memory.. It will be a change too.. Think about this sort of thing


Memory loss wala hogaya no repeat stuff😉

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