Os: Unwanted Hero!! (last part pg.4)

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Posted: 10 years ago
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I was quite a busy day people were tired n returning to their respective homes after a tiring day n she was standing at one such place to catch a taxi n head back home...

She never liked to travel in public transport coz she had to bear the creepy looking co passengers n their indecent touches... but every day wasn't a lucky day her scooty being at repair she was left with no option. ..

And as expected looking at her standing alone few useless creatures of our society gathered around her...

Looking at her dressing sense people often miss took her to some nave n timid girl... But she very well knew how to handle such situations she was a black belt in self defense!

As she felt that's it n her patience level giving up she carefully took her position... it was getting nasty n she was about to hit someone when out of nowhere a sleek black car stopped beside her...

A man in total black attire stepped out removing his goggles in slow motion... even before she could open her mouth to say something he smashed all of them to ground...

When he turned around to see if she was fine he was horrified to see someone attacking her with a weapon... before he could make a move she effortlessly handled him n with a single shot she was lying unconscious on the floor. ..

He quickly composed himself n rushed to her checking if she was ok or hurt some ware...

Giving him a weird look she stepped back creating a little distance between them...

Anjali! He raised his voice scaring the poor soul. ... she turned to look around if he was referring to someone else but they were alone...

Er.. excuse me thanks for ur help but I better get going. ..

Please don't go... what will ur maan do without u...

Huh... ur I mean my maan!! She made a bitter face hearing it n gave him an awkward smile to him...

I know u are upset... but atleast listen to me once...

Look what did he say his name oh yes maan look mr.maan its getting dark n my mom must be worried about me so please excuse me

But Anjali. ..

Geet...my name its Geet!!

He was stunned n rooted for a moment...

Its really late n u won't be able to find a cab at this time so let me drop u ... he pulled her to the car without waiting for her consent

Looking at him from the corner of her eyes she found him staring at her... quickly turning to the driver she gave directions to her house n got down few blocks away

Before she could move out he pulled her phone from her hands n saved her no. Giving her one of his dashing smiles he drove away...

Taking a breath of relief she turned around only to face her mom who was looking at her with a question mark written all over her face...

She hugged her mom n walked to her block narrating the whole scene...

Oh so u don't know him..

Hmm but mom y are u sounding so disappointed she asked suspecting her intentions. ..

Nahi geet he has such a bada car n lookes so cool too ...

U marry him! She said getting exited. ..

What! Mom please get a grip he just helped me... n most probably mistook me to someone else so chill...

I'm not hungry u have ur dinner n if rajji has any doubts ask are to mark them in the note book will help her tomorrow. ..

She slumped on the bed immediately drifting into sleep

On the other hand

DADI!!

What is it maan y are u yelling ...

I met her! He said looking straight into her eyes...

What a grandson at this age he expects me to solve riddles. .. met whom beta she asked extra sweetly

Anjali!

What!! where?? n how did u recognise her...

Dadi according to ur story she was my soul mate n if I don't recognise her who will?

But maan

Dadi she even changed her name... I was so shocked I mean how can she be so angry that she even failed to recognise me...

According to ur flashback she left me coz I didn't provide her luxury right... how innocent n nave she is if she marries me then she will automatically own every thing right. ..

Dadi u don't worry I'll explain her every thing clearly bring her back as a DIL of Khuranas

God this memory loss stuff has messed up my love life too...

I better take things in my hand!! Mumbling to himself he made his way to his bedroom. . Leaving a tensed dadi behind!!


Ohoo what love life he never had time to take a break from his work to find a girl for him ... It's all coz of me n those stupid telly shows...

She clearly remembered the day he got back from the hospital... they were discussing the story of one of the daily soap where the hero leaves his love thinking she was too greedy n wasn't understanding her state etc etc... n her super active grandson implied the story to himself owing to his amnesia he thought he forgot memories related to her!

Ab Baba Maan Singh Khurana ko who will explain that there is no Anjali in his life!!

I pity the poor girl who entered his life...





To be continued. ..



Last part pg.4







Hay pep!!
The song n the fun is pushed into the last part
Till then hold on... n the intro is straight lift from the show with tiny miny changes

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Wow...superb storyline and superb start.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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hi congrats on the OS! lovely update! Well written! Maan helps geet! he assumes she is his Anjali! Maan has amnesia! dadi worried! update soon! TC
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: aparna3011

superb concept

very interesting
continue soon


Thanks for reading Aparna! 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: neetr91

Wow...superb storyline and superb start.

Thank you😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Super start... Dadi n her story... Take cre...
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Originally posted by: khwaishfan

hi congrats on the OS! lovely update! Well written! Maan helps geet! he assumes she is his Anjali! Maan has amnesia! dadi worried! update soon! TC


I hope everything is clear agar nahi hai tho next part would be more confusing!!😕
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Originally posted by: saro

Super start... Dadi n her story... Take cre...

Thanks😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
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I really loved it
Last few lines were bit funny. Wondering what will be geet's reaction

waiting for your next😉
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Interesting start. So there is no Anjali and Maan because of his memory loss made her up. Let him meet Geet again and she is going to give him nicely if he continues with his Anjali puran. 😆

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