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Posted: 10 years ago
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"HIDING GUILT"

Hello To all of you ManEet fans,I am too a Lover of "GEET HUI SABSE PARAYI"And I too disliked it very much when Maan doughted Geet's intention in episode 84,And Maan was feeling bad about doing so himself also but didn't exactly apologize to Geet so I have written this one-shot which describes Maan's feelings.It is a little changed and starts from Maan practicing Ti Chi

Hope you like it :)

Here we go!

Maan,har ladki Sameera nahi hoti!"He was practicing Ti Chi but couldn't concentrate as DadiMaa's words again and again hit his ears.He couldn't understand why
he let DadiMaa's words take over him.Maybe because he himself didn't know why and what he was saying when he accused Geet of trying to woo him for money,The words just came out and at the moment,he wasn't even thinking!"Kia mujhe waaqayi uss ki baaton se,uss ki adahon se farq padta hai?Shayad woh mujhe phansaana nahi chahti thi par main hi...tabhi main ne apni ana ki satisfaction ke liye usse qasoorwaar thehraaya."He thought and closed his eyes thing that maybe when he opens them again,the whole mess he created would be cleared away from his life.He quickly opened his eyes and said:"Nahi!Main ne Geet ke saath kucch ghalat nahin kia,waise bhi..in auratoun ka kucch nahi pata hota."He started started staring at nothing when he listened to himself.He again closed his eyes realizing his words brought a memory in his mind.But those closed eyes couldnt change the past in which "SHE" (Sameera) lived and just the memory of that woman hurt as a thorn pricks at one's heart.He suddenly felt bad for being in just with Geet but had enough ego to not let his guilt show...

Really sorry for it being too short :(

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Okay I agree with its too short but Fantastic OS

Because of Sameera , Maan falsely accused Geet but his ego is so big that it will not allow him to be guilty yet he shows tinges of guilt

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: taahir004

Okay I agree with its too short but Fantastic OS

Because of Sameera , Maan falsely accused Geet but his ego is so big that it will not allow him to be guilty yet he shows tinges of guilt



Thanxx alot for replying and liking😊,I 100% percent agree with you !
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Posted: 10 years ago
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superb emotional OS! Well written! Maan's feelings n confusion well portrayed! his past makes him easily doubt! Maan feels bad bt will nt admit it!
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: khwaishfan

superb emotional OS! Well written! Maan's feelings n confusion well portrayed! his past makes him easily doubt! Maan feels bad bt will nt admit it!


Thanxx alot for all ur beautiful compliments 🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Phir kisi ne sameera ki yaad dilayi😆
I was so much waiting for that character to make its presence but. ..

Well written!

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Well its nt easy 2 trust anyone when d person hv been hurt badly nd d trust which he had is broken nd as per daadi's wrds maan diff be4 bt sameera's wrng dong did him like dis nd ofcource who is nt aware abt MSK's ego bt he is d same MSK who said sry 2 geet superb OS dear hopng 2 read mre stories 4m u
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Posted: 10 years ago
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lovely os maans pov is well written how much he said he didnt do wrong somewhere his heart believe that he did n he is in guilt nice os
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Thank you so much :)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: spoorthi28

Phir kisi ne sameera ki yaad dilayi😆

I was so much waiting for that character to make its presence but. ..

Well written!


Thanxx alot for ur precious comment 😊

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