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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: KasiKasi

Nice update
loved it
Thanx for pm

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Posted: 10 years ago
nice pt
3'4
maan came back and don't want to rest
daadi prayed fr give him some laziness
Vicky comes down wen maan went fr jogging
Vicky adked wat maa eaten in his birth time
that he is so workaholic daadi Vicky and Maan
talk was awesome
geet having crush on maan she having his pics
maan want to shifts to their prev KM bcuz of gym
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Posted: 10 years ago
Part 5
Geet-YOU!
Girl- finally Geet u r here, tell ur sister to stop calling me geet... and guess my name
Nishi-geet?
Geet- nishi i'm here , now put pressure on ur brain and guess who is she?
Nishi- guys i'am getting fed up now ,can we please stop this game for god sake
Girl- no first u guess my name or accept ur loss
Nishi- see whoever u r i'm not interested in all these stupid games so kindly spare me from all this ..
Girl- Nishi u r still the same boring, dull , nerdy girl, u really don't know how to enjoy life..
Nishi- i'm happy like i am! now leave me...
Girl- as u wish! saying this she removed her hands from her eyes, nishi was fully frustrated now she turned around to blast on that girl who tried to waste her precious time but after facing her all her anger
vanished in thin air SAMEERA
Nishi- oh my god Sam! you here, how come ?( out of happiness she hugged sam)
Sam- i thought to surprise u all , but i didn't know that u welcome ur guest by behaving rudely with her
In the meantime naina too came there geet and nishi u both are back, so how was the surprise?
Nishi- maa we already knew about sahil and rajji are coming back from HP but how come Sam is here?
Naina- actually Sam told me not to tell u and geet about her arrival as she wants to surprise u both...
Sam- yes! and thank you aunty for doing the same
Naina-my pleasure dear! now u all enjoy i'm going to prepare dinner and if anyone need anything ask me..
after naina went away..
Sam- so how r u both(geet and nishi)?
Nishi- i'm good..
Geet- i'm good too..(she smiled slightly)
Sam- geet r u still that much shy like u were 5 years back?
Rajji- yes Sam di, Geet di is still same she behaves like a scared cat in front of others but behaves like loiness in front of us...
after hearing this from Rajji , Geet glared at her
Rajji- look look right now she is doing the same...
Nishi- Rajji stop it u know geet's nature na , she takes time to be herself in front of others
Sam- oh my god ! everything is still the same Rajji and Geet fighting and nishi defending geet as always..
and Geet i hope u will not behave like an outsider with me as in a way i'm ur cousin like nishi only haina...
Geet- hmm yes !
Sam- that's it chalo let's have a talk, i have to make u comfortable with me first
sam side hugged geet and took her away , nishi smiled at this , she too took steps to go away but stopped as she heard Sahil
Sahil- i'm not playing this game now, no one noticed me(angrily he said this)
Nishi- opps! sahil sorry kiddo everyone was welcoming Sam di she is here after such a long time that's why..
Sahil- whatever i hate her , she told me to sit on sofa silently for a while then she will buy me my favorite toys but look she went away with geet di and geet di too ignored me today..
Nishi- aww..my baby come with me let's go for an walk and i will gift u ur fav chocolates, come..
Sahil- no! first promise me what if u too do same like sam di..
Nishi- oh ho ok promise now come ... and holded his hands and took him away with her

night around 8pm
naina was preparing dinner for whole family when landline rings she goes to answer the phone
Naina-hello

naina- ji! how r u? i'm missing u , when will u return this time?

naina- oh, ok! i'm fed with all ur works eveytime just busy , no time for family...

naina- yes yes i will ask her and tell u..

naina- try to come back soon! hmm bye..


In Geet's room

Sam- so geet how is everything going in life.. all well?
Geet- yes, everything is going well..
Sam- yaar geet! why u talk so less i'm not ur enemy right or u don't like me?
Geet- no it is nothing like that , u know i'm bit reserved type of person and it takes me bit of time to get comfortable with other people apart from family, so i'm sorry if u r sad from my behaviour i didn't mean to hurt u, sorry!
Sam- geet u know this is the longest line u have ever spoken to me, good i'm progressing a bit , good that my studies are not geting waste i have learnt something..
, would u not ask me how i am, about my life , studies, etc etc??
Geet-(she smiled a bit) so how is everything going miss would be doctor ji?
Sam- finally u started..

nishi saw all this from outside she didn't wished to disturb so moved towards kitchen to her mother to help her..
Nishi- what are u planning for dinner today anything special?
Naina- hmm i'm preparing palak panner, fried rice, a vegetable of potato and in sweet i will prepare kheer...
Nishi- such a heavy dinner and that too all geet favorites..
Naina- na all these are sam's favorite too!
Nishi- oh not again, maa they are so similar in their habits and all other stuff.. if by chance anyone sees them together they will say they are sisters!
Naina- yes not even in habits , i found them similar in looks too have u seen their eyes they are perfectly similar without any difference, same height , same hair texture..
Nishi- still maa how can they are so similar?
Naina- u know na sam's and geet's mothers were twins and both sam and geet have inherited same traits like their mother specially their eyes!
Nishi- (chuckled at this) yes maa, if u make rajji , sam and geet stand together sam and geet are more similar than rajji and geet, sometimes nature surprises us with its mircales!
Naina- that's because rajji have inherited her father traits more...
Sam too entered in kitchen..
Sam- what's going on between mother and daughter?
Nishi- nothing important we were discussing about you and geet that how similar u both are are and etc , etc..
Sam- oh for ur kind information we are not so similar, its just our eyes which look similar that too because of our mums and rest of things can match up with anyone, right plus we are so different i our behavior geet usually is reserve type and takes time to get comfortable with others but my case is different i'm usually too much talkative and i love to make new friends, see so much difference!
Nishi- ya ya i agree! now don't give me any lecture..
Naina- do u know sam i always wish geet to be like u like how easily u talk with others and make them ur friends, i hope this quality geet to develops
Sam- aunty for this u can blame ur daughter, she doesn't allow geet to stay away from her!
Nishi- what!how can u blame me for geet's reserve nature?
Sam- because u r the one who has to be blamed , because of ur protective nature she is like this, if u were not there for her always she would have made friends, she would have started to interact with others, she would have become bit of social , u see...
Nishi- do u have any prove?
Sam- nishi , do u have any memory loss problem, have u forgot by profession soon i'm going to a be doctor that too a psychiatrist
Nishi-(she glared her)hmm, but i never stopped her for making friends,i have not even acted as some psyco possessive friend to her
Sam-(laughed) nishi i'm not saying that u r psyco or something its just that u were always there for her from childhood , in school and now in college in every phase of life its just that she never felt the need to make friends because for her u were always there...
Naina-oh know i'am getting worried now..
Sam- oh ho aunty there is nothing to worry , geet is just reserved person not some mentally affected person she is normal and if she gets response from other side , she can easily interact with that person , that's it nothing to worry..
nishi- hmm, i'm going to study...
Naina- nishi is too much sometime she talks like chatterbox and then apparently remember her studies and go away...
both sam and laughed at this!

AT dinner table
Sam and Geet(together)- wow ! dinner was so tasty both looked looked at each other and laughed
Sam- aunty u r soo good!
Geet- yes chachi,u r best cook in the world!
Nishi, Rajji, and Sahil(together)-yes we agree!
Naina- oh ho so much praising , i'm getting embrrassed now..
all laughed at this
sam- i'm full i have eaten too much, will anyone come for a walk with me..
Rajji- i will..
Nishi- me too , i have eaten too much today!
Sam- geet?
Geet- no, i'm not feeling that heavy..
Rajji- sam di its a normal diet for her, geet di is used of eating this much
Geet- shut up! i'm not coming because i thought to help chachi a bit ...
Sam- aww geet u r so helpful, rajji learn something from ur sister(at this geet smiled at sam ) let's come girls
Sahil- chachi i'am feeling sleepy i want to sleep...
Naina- aww my sweeto must be tried after such a trying day, go change to night dress i'm coming after few minutes...
geet will u help to put all these plates in kitchen?
Geet- yes why not!
suddenly naina remembered something ..
Naina- oh no i forgot such an important task
Geet- what happened chachi?
Naina- geet actually few hours back ur bade papa have called .he asked me to take an appointment from savitriji , would u please ask her for appointment from her as ur bade papa needs to have a meeting with her regarding some offical work..
Geet- that's it , i thought it is something big, ok i will ask her..u go make sahil sleep till then...
geet went to landline and called her..After few rings she picked up..
Dadima- hello, who's speaking?
Geet- namaste dadima! i'm geet..
Dadima- am i dreaming geet beta u ! its so rare to hear ur voice, how r u my child?
Geet-i'm good dadima, how r u?
Dadima-i'm fine dear..
Geet- dadima actually i called u to ask for appointment as bade papa wants to have a meeting regarding some project which ur company is taking care of..
Dadima- sorry dear i can't give u any appointment..
Geet- why dadima, is there any problem??
Dadima- no dear there is no problem, its just now i no more handle business , all these stuffs are handled by maan now, so for appointment u have to ask for him not me..
Geet(hearing maan's name her heartbeats increased)- but dadima , how can i,,i mean i don't have his number..
Dadima-that's not a big problem , i will provide u with his number,his no. is 986543... , call him...
Geet- ji dadima , thank u, good night..
Dadima- good night dear!

geet puts the receiver down when naina arrives..
Naina- geet u asked for appointment?
Geet- no chachi , actually now dadima don't handle any business matter and now everything is handled by her elder grandson so for appointment u have to ask him.., and here is his no.
she showed her hands where she have written his number with pen.. naina dials his number and calls him, geet move towards her room
she is staring continuously on her mobile screen , where she recently saved his number a dreamy smiles appear on her face... 😳


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Posted: 10 years ago
updated part 5
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Posted: 10 years ago
Lovely update
oh that girl is sam..
is she good or vamp 😆
so i think Mistaken identity of sam an geet
Geet stored Maan's number
Geet is reserved type
loved the update
thank you for the update and pm 😳
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Posted: 10 years ago
nice part,geet and sameera both are looking same.. wahting for next
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Posted: 10 years ago
Feisty Update

Sam getting Geet to indulge more in conversation was awesome
I somehow get the feeling that Geet perhaps likes Maan but does he know her

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Posted: 10 years ago
nice part so that girl is sam geets cousion she is smiliar like geet but opposite to nature their taste is also same aww geet got maans number lovely part thnx 4 pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awww.. Got it got it... Now I know... Confusion has been cleared out. ... Me happy...ok.. That girl was Sam. Aka sameerA.. And geet isn't sad or feeling hatred for her.. She is fine with her bcox of her reserved nature... Both have same eyes..same taste.. Same liking..now the title perfectly suits on story.. But still whom maan gonna fall in love??.. Geet or Sam??.. I think with geet.. As her reserved nature and shyness will be liked by maan and then Sam. Entry will be... I think or vice versa.. first confusion was cleared now more confusion has take place what to do... Eagerly waiting for it.. Soo much sooo much sooo much

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