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Posted: 10 years ago
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Thank you all for liking and motivating me...😊
Edited by GurTi123 - 10 years ago
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Part 4
Next day early morning...
around 5am

Geet was in her deep sleep which suddenly got disturbed due to continuous ho huh kinds of sounds followed by some kind of breaking sounds.
All these sounds were continuously disturbing the beauty sleep of geet , she started tossing in bed , she tried to block
the sounds by covering her head and ears with the help of pillow but they proved to be useless as geet was now awake ...
Geet-(in her half sleep) aah! who the hell is making these kinds of weird sounds , nishi (not getting any response) she looked towards nishi's
bed but she was absent from there , then she looked towards washroom, lights were on and sound of running water was also slightly audiable to her
miss nerdy is already up!, looks like i myself have to check who is responsible for breaking my sleep

she got up went towards balcony as all the weird sounds were coming from that direction only...
as she come out from room a soothing cool breeze touches her body and awake her from her half sleep.. now she was fully awake and sounds were more
clear and loud because they were coming from another balcony which was few metres away from her own balcony but what caught her attention was the
presence of greek god who was actually performing his daily workout without caring about others that all these sounds can disturb someone's sleep at this hour

Geet was spellbound by seeing him the yellow light from the ceiling was falling on his body giving a golden shine to his sweaty body, he was well built tall
man with big muscles , six pack abs, sexy long fingers, now Geet gaze was permenantly fix on him she has no fear of getting caught because it was still dark outside and in addition to that her balcony's lights were off too so unless someone not observe clearly it is hard to figure out that someone is standing there...
so without any tension she again started her drooling session ...
now Geet's gaze started moving upwards to his broad shoulders, long neck , stubbled cheeks , perfectly m-shaped lips, straight long nose than to that magnetic eyes , they were deep like oceans , they have already strated pulling her towards them , geet was totally lost in them...
she was still in her dream land when he picked up his towel and went away from there...
Geet too returned back in her room in her hypnotic state at the same time Nishi too came out from washroom , she was surprised to see geet awake at this time
Nishi- wow geet! u r already up! looks like u have started a new trend to surprise me daily by getting up early nowdays ... and today u broke all ur
previous records, i still cannot believe ... anyways go get freshened up quickly , we will study together today go...
getting no response from geet she waved her hands in front of her .. this brought geet back from her dreamland to real world!
Geet- ya.. what happened?
Nishi- are u still in ur sleeping state geet?
Geet- n..no...
Nishi- good , now go and fresh up !
Nishi and Geet studied for 2 hours continusouly , oopps sorry only Nishi not geet as she was busy in her own world , she was just staring at her book nothing else...
Nishi-(strecting herself a bit , nishi relaxed ) i completed one more chapter today , now one more is left.. Geet what's ur state?
Geet- i have just started...( gave silly smile to nishi)
Nishi- seriously Geet , just 3 days are left for internals , what will i do with u... anyways i know my lecture have no effect on u so i better don't waste my time in that , now get aside i 'am going to take bath..
geet moved a bit , nishi stepped out from bed and after taking her towel she went away...
After assuring herself that nishi is now busy in taking bath geet jumped from her bed moved towards the old bookself which contained all
old stuff incliding their old school books, school magzines and other stuffs. she pulled a old school magzine and started to search someone of her interest , finally finding him a broad smile appeared on her face , she kissed the pic and said finally i found u again and hugged the magzine tightly.
The sound of running water stopped which indicated that Nishi's bathing session is over, geet hided the magzine in her book self and went away..

AT Khurana's house
at breakfast table:-
Maan- dadima i am thinking why don't we shift back in KM again???
Vicky- why bro, don't u like this house?
Maan- no its not like that , this house is good but i don't have a proper gym room here due to which i have to practise in balcony...
Dadima- maan for such a silly reason u want us to move to km again..
Maan- (holded her hand) dadima i very well know why u shifted here from km because km was making u weak emotionally , all the past memories were not allowing u to move on haina...
Dadima- ( her eyes were bit moistened now) maan if u already know than u r u asking us to move back in km again
Maan-(smiled a bit) because along with that i also know that how much it is important for u, how lovingly grandpa built km for u dadima, can't we go back there... i agree lots of past memories haunt u there but can't we get back there and create new memories, hai dadima?
Dadima-(chuckled a bit) i didN't know that along with workoholic , u can emotionally blackmail others too, interesting talent maan(Vicky too smiled at this)
Maan- and u have a talent to make anybody smile in any situation
Dadima- maan life teach us few things , anyways if u insist then i'm ready to move back in km
Maan- ( he smiled after hearing that and hugged her) great dadima, ok i will ask adi to start renovating km...He picks his phone and went away...
Vicky- sometime i feel bro is suffering from personality disorder..
Dadima- (laughed at this) why so?
Vicky- he can be sometimes emotionless like rock and sometimes he behave like he can give tough competition to that lead actresses of daily soaps which u watch...
Dadima- (laughing) oh my god vicky but beware of maan if by chance he hear u saying all this, then only god can help u!

IN evening Geet house...
Nishi has entered inside the house after returning from college someone covered her eyes and asked guess who i'm?
Nishi- geet have u lost ur mind or what! i can very well recognise ur voice ok
Rajji- no di u have guessed wrong
Nishi- Rajji u r back , how r u and sahil and where is that naughty boy?
Girl- uff Nishi, first guess who am i?
Nishi- geet stop being stupid and leave me...
Girl- how many times should i tell u i'am not ur shy geet, ok!
on same time geet too entered in the house and was surprised to see the scene inside her house, Sahil was silently sitting on sofa having fingers on his lips like he is the most obedient child of the class , her extra smart sister Rajji was grinning like a fool while looking at the guessing game played infront of her but what shocked her was the presence of another girl who was covering Nishi's eyes
out of shock geet uttered you?


Edited by GurTi123 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
updated part 4
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He hoo.. Thanks for the update..so geet at last saw him.. And started her drooling session which wasn't noticed by maan..maan wants to go back to km.. Bcox he doesn't have gym lolxx.. I liked their convo. From inside he still have feelings as he sometimes behaves rude.. geet had a crush on him from so long..ohh myy.. She have kept his pic in her books.. Great start...so who is that girl??..
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superb part.. geet was drooling on maan.. is she already know him.. who is that girl geet seen .. waiting for next
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nice part geet saw maan n lost in him looks like she likes him for long time she kissed the megazine but hide it seeing nishi maan wants to go back to km dadima also agreed raji came but who was that girl thnx 4 pm
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Posted: 10 years ago
Interesting updates.. Read again all 4 chapters..Nishi is concerned about Geet and her studies but Geet pays little attention.. It seems Geet has a crush on Maan from long ago.. Loved it .. Waiting for the story to unfold..Thanks for the pm.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice update
geet drooling on maan while he was doing taichi😳 ...who s d gal in d end?
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Posted: 10 years ago
Mistaken identity is the new girl
am i rt!

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