MY INNOCENT SURRENDER 2 #3 LAST THREAD ADDED - Page 63

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Posted: 10 years ago
wow grt update dear😳
so Dev took Maan to Pune for later's treatment. Maan on the other hand thinks that DEv is enjoying his condition and taking revenge.
While tarvelling Dev contacts Meera but she tells him rudely that she is in office and busy. But in reality she is chcking up with doc.
On the other hand, Dr Asthana is not here and Dev is instructed to meet Dr Naina regarding Maan's case.

Lets see what will happen next.

Thanks a lot updating two parts😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
I felt maan an sudhar jayega but no he is too egoistic to listen anyone
Wow loved dev he loves Maan a lot
He listens all his venomous talks and doesn't even reply him
But Maan he don't understand anything
They are in pune now
Who is doctor Asthana
And has a daughter named Naina
Who is she
Dev worried abt Meera
Talks with her but She is so rude
Dev frustrated with everything
But why is Meera in hospital

Waiting for another one
Thanks 4 this one
Lovely update
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Posted: 10 years ago
Fabulous updates dear
They were awesome
Dev is still so good with maan..
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice update
maan is still d same n blaming dev..
Where is geet??? I know she's alive, hope u ll make her re-entry soonn!!!
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Posted: 10 years ago
wowww maan is paralized still jis ego no change
poor dev have to be with him
what meera is doing in hosp???
N who is Dr.Naina???
eager for the next update
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Posted: 10 years ago
loved it
he is still ignorant of his wrong deeds
will Maan ever relaize wht he did to others
Dev is in so much pain but he has no one to share his suffering
but he has a big heart to not abandon Maan when he had given him every reason to do so
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Posted: 10 years ago
hi thanks 4 da pm! read Part 16 n commented! js read Part 17! wonderful update! Well written! Feeling 4 Dev! Maan hasn't changed! he is so rude! Dev is there 2 help him despite wt he did! Maan is so arrogant!wen will he realise? Dev js wants 2 leave bt cannot! he wants Maan 2 b fine so he can go! Dev calls Meera! he is worried hearing she is in the hospital! bt she lies 2 him! Maan being treated by Dr Asthana n his daughter Dr Naina! update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
thanks for the double treat dear😊wonderful updates 😊poor dev is caught up in such a situation one side maan's anger and frustration and on the other side meera's ignorance. Maan in this condition also is not ready to leave his ego and cooperate with anyone but why do I have a very strong feeling that Dr.Naina is non other than geet herself and she will be treating maan and he will listen only to her for his treatment 😃eagerly waiting for more 😊
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Posted: 10 years ago
Maan had to suffer bcoz he had made geet suffer so much for none of her mistake
Now just waiting to see how he has a paradigm shift...n geet accepts him n loves him back



Already he was not inself after Geet left him and now his body. His frustration was at peak. He wasn't ready to accept this. This helplessness. It was hard blow on his ego. Dev entered in his room with doctor. Both glance each other.


"Why you are here?"Maan yelled.


"for you and our companies." Dev replied straight.


"huhh... Not for me. You came here to overtake my companies. You want revenge." Maan cursed him.


"you know everything then why asking?" Dev pissed off and snap back.

"dont you dare." Maan tried to get up but failed as his lower part not supporting him. But he dont give up and wants to hit him. Seeing him go wild doctor signaled his compunders. They hold his arms firm and he filled he injection quickly. After giving him injection all left the room.


"doc how much time he will need?" Dev get impatient.


"you see how his temper is. If he goes like this then i can't give u any assurity. He is not ready to cooperate and it will only harm him." Doc told him clearly,not giving any false hopes.



Dev tensed more. He wants to run away as soon as possible but cant leave responsibilities he had on his shoulders. 3 months passed. Maan's body wounds recovered but he was on wheel chairs. His pralyzise problem was same like before. Infact his right arm not even work properly. For his situation he cursed Dev only,when ever he saw him. His rage,his anger only increasing day by day. Whenever he open is mouth only spitt venom on his servants, doctors and his brother. Dev alone bearing all the torture of facing is wrath and suppressing his anger towards him. No one he have in his life with whom he can share his pain and turmoils.

"Doc pls do something and cure him at any cost." he pleads for his freedom.


"we tried our level best. But he is not supporting at all. Now this case is out of our hands. We did everything. This case of your brother now only be cured by Dr. Asthana." he told,giving ray of hope.


"then what are you waiting for? Called him. I will pay any thing for his treatment. Bas bro ko theek kar de."Dev want him cured as soon as possible.


"Dr. Asthana yaha nahi aayenge. He is very different man. You have to go to him. Wo apna hospital chhod k yaah nahi aayege. We have to shift Mr. Khurana to his hospital." He told him clearly.


"ok i am ready. You ask him and we shift bro there." Dev agreed.


"but his hospital Institute is not here. We have to shift him to Pune."

"no issue." he agreed.

"alright then. I will talk to him."Doc assured him.

When all arrangements done he informed Dev. He complete all the formalities and reached hospital to took Maan from there. Staff helped him and they reached to their private plane. "you are getting relief seeing me like this. Hai na. That time you were helpless and today i am. You must enjoying my condition." Maan again spitt venom on Dev.


Dev gave one magzine in his hand. "bro read this. I have some work." he moved to other side. After landing on their private aerodrome,he took seprate car, want some peace. Its been 4 month when he last saw and talk with Meera. Some where he missed his friend who understand and help him at every weak moment of his. Dev was looking at his phone. Not sure about his reaction. Last time she mistook him. He flipping his phone between his fingers. But he need to share his going through with some one so he dialled her no. Doubts were there. Wheather she take his call or not. Ring goes on but no answer. He was about to dump the call when he heared soft voice on other side. "hello... Meera..you there?" he asked.

"Dev you called, any thing important?" She asked casually.


"how are you?" he disappointed hearing her tone but hold himself calm.

"Dev i am in a office. If you call to ask this only then we talk later." she replied rudly.


Dev hurts and cursed him for calling her. He wants to through his phone out. He just bear abusive words from Maan and now she to treated him in a same way. He roamed his finger to cut the call when he hears one more sound from other side. "Meera come. Doc is calling you." it was her friend Sophie's voice. Hearing the word Doc his ears alerts.


"you lied. You said you are in office. Then why doc calling you." Dev suspects and interrogate strongly.


"no...wo...i am not lying." she was stammering. "actually in our office every employe need to give medical fitness test,half yearly. That's why doc is here. I have to go Dev." she told briskly and cut the call,before he asked more.Same time his row of cars stops.They reached to Hospital. His driver informed him. "Sir we reached." Dev's attention diverted to Maan again.


One junior doc and some staff came with them. He contact with the staff of hospital and they all took Maan carefully. Dev got busy with all and forgot about his conversation with Meera. Now his priority was Maan.


One junior doc came to examine him and for other paper work. He took other doc came with them and Dev with him.



"Excuse me Dr. I would like to meet Dr. Asthana first." Dev demands.


"Sorry mr. Khurana he was out of town due to one seminar." He informed Dev and his face turn gloomed.


"What? He wasn't here. Then why you guys don't inform us. Now who will treat my brother? We only came here and now you telling me that Dr. Asthana is not here. Wow." Dev get hyper on their unprofessional behavior.


"Please sir don't get hyper. Your brother will get best treatment here. He wasn't here but his daughter Dr. Naina is here and she will handle this case. Dr. Asthana ko emergency me jana pada. Halaki previous planned hi hote hai seminars but college need in urgency and dr. Asthana had to left. But don't worry he will come back soon and in meantime Dr. Naina will handle this case. Trust me she is very good doctor. I am sure we get some positive results with her treatment. Or tab tak to Dr. Asthana aa hi jayenge." He assured and tried to calm him.


"Alright."



"But sir we need you here. You have to talk Dr. Naina because she needs patient's family members to study his case."


"I will meet her. Where is she?"Dev agreed and Doc show him the way to her cabin.






NOTE: I updated two parts back to back. Now I want 200 likes at least on both updates if you want next up of MIS. When Both parts 16 & 17 get 200+ likes then I will update next part.
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Posted: 10 years ago
very nice part dear ... maan is so frustrated and pouring out his all anger on dev .. now dev got maan in pune to cure him ...i feel smthng went wrong with meera.. lets see kya hota h..

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