Short Story ~Hazaaron Khwahishein Aisi [Plz see Pg 1]

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annirogc

@annirogc

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#131

superb part.. maan bikd was broken down..he was sad because of office and now bike .. waiting for next part

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Alpha01

@Alpha01

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Posted: 10 years ago

#132

Interesting update. Maans bike broke down and he received a phone call from his uncle. It was a very unusual but funny conversation especially about the weather. Maan doesn't listen to everything and cuts the call thinking he's not ready for marriage yet as he is not happy with his life then how can he keep his wife happy. On one hand I have to agree with his line of thinking but on the other I'm thinking maybe a wife would be someone to confide in and who can help encourage you when you're down.

Waiting to see what happens next

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love2_soma

@love2_soma

Stunner

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#133

abb maan babu kya karenge...

nice update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

eagerly waiting fr d nxt prt...

continue soon plz...

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Flame_of_Forest

@Flame_of_Forest

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#134

Part 7

haha, wrong timing for the rishte ki baat..Maan is already annoyed due to the unfairness dashed at him in the office, now the bike is not working..may be he wants to settle down well, achieve his dreams of doing a good carrier before saying yes for the marriage..and he hardly remembers Geet..so like Geet it is going to be a new start for him as well..

Edited by Flame_of_Forest - 10 years ago

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meravigiliso

@meravigiliso

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#135

loving the pace of story . I am loving the way how the story is building .Maan life is upside and down and above all marriage pressure too . going great ,continue soon

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Flame_of_Forest

@Flame_of_Forest

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#136

Originally posted by: Commelina
@ Flame of Forest : sorry for raising your hopes and not getting them married this weekend. Samajh lena sahi muhurat nhi mila.:D

You do not need to be sorry..hum to yahi hain, chahe muhurat koi bhi ho..take your own time, we can wait..

PS - seems you update from mobile, hope you have a backup of your work in a soft copy (on computer - word or text file)

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BloodDiamond

@BloodDiamond

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#137

Chapter 1

Geet looks up her result only to find she did not get selected to be a doctor
Loved the way you wrote the part ❤️

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BloodDiamond

@BloodDiamond

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#138

Really feel sorry and bad for Geet
Her parents were counting on her passing this time
But that di not happen so the last resort is marriage

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@Endgame

Inactive

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#139

lovely update marriage proposal for maan n thats too with geet but he is not ready for marriage first he wants to grow his career nice part thnx 4 update