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congratulations for ua first story.. that was cute story.. simple yet lovely.. of course I'd love to read Maan's side of story.. since we know geet's side.. do continue..

congratulations for ua first story.. that was cute story.. simple yet lovely.. of course I'd love to read Maan's side of story.. since we know geet's side.. do continue.. ..

Originally posted by: Divi...A_SS

congratulations for ua first story.. that was cute story.. simple yet lovely.. of course I'd love to read Maan's side of story.. since we know geet's side.. do continue.. ..

Thankyou for reading and for your precious comment.

Originally posted by: dqno1

beautiful portrayal of emotions

the story seems incomplete without the view from the other end 😃

Do add it to satisfy all the romantics out here 😃

thankyou for your feedback ! It means a lot.
And about Maan's point of view i am thinking on it. I know as a reader how incomplete feels. Will try my best.

Originally posted by: Commelina

thankyou for your feedback ! It means a lot.
And about Maan's point of view i am thinking on it. I know as a reader how incomplete feels. Will try my best.

I am sure you will do fine😃

lovely os

There is something really beautiful about the way you write. This is not very high on emotions or romance yet it's quite heart-warming. Keep writing and I'll keep enjoying your works

Originally posted by: -Crayon-

There is something really beautiful about the way you write. This is not very high on emotions or romance yet it's quite heart-warming. Keep writing and I'll keep enjoying your works

😃

thankyou ! You have no idea how happy these words made me. In fact it made my day.:)

Originally posted by: Madhuri53

lovely os

very well written

keep writing 😊

thank u . I m glad u liked it.