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The Myth


The test of a true myth is that each time u return to it , new insights and interpretations arise.


A saying Or belief Or fact Or superstition Or Myth ... these words play an important part in ppl's life ,, many blindly believe or live their lives on some belief nd myths ,, from d time of d bith of a child to till his/her end some belief never left them ,, those ppl trust a priest who himself a human being nd it's also said that human is a bundle of mistakes ,, then how cn a priest be trusted blindly ? Does a priest's words r more important than an innocent child ? If yes then where is humanity , love , care nd family bonding ? Where r relations nd their warmth ? Where is Truth nd Reality ?



Note... This is a fiction inspired by some facts and incidents from our surroundings . If someone find any resemblance in d title and story line , they r welcome to leave their comments on my page (plzz don't pm me)with d link . I'll try my best not to touch any body's work. Need ur love and support to make it an interesting SS.





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Part - 10


It's said that ... when things went wrong , don't go with them ..

It's not written in any golden book that elders r always right ..No ,, they too go wrong nd this thing happened with Handas ,, once they gave d time ,day nd date to their priest they never checked that himself ,, it was d priest who read d Janam kundli of Geetika , which was written in pure Hindi nd sanskrit,, they didn't get that there was a big mistake in d time of birth ,, at d time of birth Daimaa was with Rano nd Mahi in hsptl so she knew d time nd in casual talks she mentioned that to Geet ,, Daima nd Geet never saw d kundli bcoz that was with Rano .

The major fault which d priest did d time nd then whole things cd be wrong .. in hsptl records baby's birth time was 12:18 am , ***day ,, 15th Jan,, when Pummy asked about d time of birth to give pandit ,Mahi who was in tension nd visited home after 2days for few min said in hindi .. ** Var, 12 bajker 18 min , 15 janvary nd Pummy narrated that to pandit who thought that baby born at 12:18 of **var, 15 Jan ,, but d baby born at mid night 12:18 nd clander changed after 12:00 nd d time after 12 was mentioned as(am) morning, but generally nd in villages ppl count whole nyt with last day nd next day with sunrise ,, priest mistook pummy's words nd made d khundli according to d birth in day time ,, he made kundli in pure hindi/SKT,, 12 was Madhyaahn ( noon), nd 12: 18 means apraahan (afternoon),, MU in describing d proper time created d big disaster for ever ,, now there was 12hrs gap in birth time ... damn it.

Daijaan disclosed : Geet born in night not in day ,, it was 12:18 of night nd d pandit took that of day's 12:18 ,, bcoz date nd day wr same so he mistook that nd made d janam kundli,,I don't know why u all didn't see that ,, Geet nd I saw this just now ,, we never saw d kundli before bcoz it was with malkin ( saying that she went out deeply hurt )

All wr stunned at their place with d truth ,,it was minor MU but it destroyed a life ,, all wr in guilt nd worries ,, gap of 12 hrs was a big thing nd it cd be possible that d baby(Geetika) wdn't have Manglic or any doshas ... babaji !! it was a blunder .

Rano nd Mahi wr at verge of crying ,, they too never checked that , nd now d other prob is she married to a Manglic boy ...

Khuranas too wr shocked with this fact ,, everything went wrong with lil mistake Or cd say a very big mistake ,, Handa's priest was not there ,,, he left for HP in d mrng , nd now who wd reply ? d situation was totally mess nd out of controle ,, no one cd change d time now ,, there was only regret .

Geet nd Daimaa pecked their all things nd came out ,, Geet became cold ,, daimaa was trying to make her undsrstand d intensity of situation ,, living here in Delhi she cd achieve her dreams of higher edu or job,, Geet was running her mind too nd thought to stay in KM for some time bcoz by living there she cd dig out more about that Maanveer Singh .

Ashmed , feared nd regreted Khauranas came back with Geet nd Daima ,, for d respect of their family Geet 's presence was needed ,, Handas wr too speachless, ashamed , regreted nd feared ,, they wr not able to look at each other ,, facing Geet was next to impossible , they openly said that now she belong to Khuranas not to them ,, Darji's venomous words ended everything , even they wr not in d position to say her final Goodbye .

Kahuranas said sorry to Geet nd arranged their OH for her nd Daimaa ,, Geet clearly asked everything related to Maan , his college , his phone number ,, she had a good amount in her name nd Daima's saving wr also enough for their surviving ,, she contect her profs nd asked them to help in selling d land of HP which was on her name ,, day nd night she was busy in settling down d things ,, she went with Daima to HP to bring back their other stuff , nd to clear d formalities of land deal ,, she got a huge amount of money after selling that land ,, she closed d HP chapter forever nd after that started her next move .

Days wr rolling down ,, Yash , DM nd Reema visited OH to meet them but Geet talk very less,, they wanted to gave her monetary help but she outrightly rejected ,,Khuranas wr hurt that Geet stopped wearing marriage signs too,,they cdn't force her ,, Daima was worried for Geet bcoz she talked very less nd remained busy in her laptop ,, she didn't know what Geet was planning ?

Far away in a diff place of this world ,, it was a quiet big furnished room nd a couple was sleeping cuddling to each other under a soft heavy quilt ... Maan nd Sam ,, both started living together after reaching here ,, few days they lived in hotel , roamed few places near their college nd then started their efforts to get a comfortable place to live , though they cd live in college hostel but there was time to start their session ,, in hostel they cdn't live together so search a small home to live together near d college ,, it was good one bedroom full furnish flat with all facilities , even well settled kitchen ,, Maan liked it nd locked ,, there wr many students who lived in those areas ,, 3-4 more students also lived in same apartment ,, there wr sep -sep portion to give in rent ,, Maan nd Sam shifted here nd now both wr living as live-in partners which was quiet common there ,, this was what they wanted nd planned , but wishing nd planning is very easy , d reality nd d coming situations proved that what they planned nd did was right or wrong ,, Sam who lived a free life in hostel away from family didn't know responsibilities nd household works ,, Maan who lived like a prince in KM nd spend money with open hand didn't know d responsibilities nd d value of money ,, he spent lots of money from his AC on admissions , airtickets , on roaming , shopping nd enjoying in this costely city ,, they wr dining out all d time nd now spend a good amount for this flat ,, d money from his acs wr running nd he was careless about it ,,after a separation nd that marriage issue both wr feeling miserable ,, getting free life nd all time togetherness blinded them more,, now they wr floating in d pool of love , passion nd satisfaction having each other ,, Maan sent only one mail to his Dad ,, he didn't talk nd replied back to avoid endless Qs from his family ,,

There Geet checked that there wr online admission process in many uni of abroad but d session wd start in August nd Maan went very early ,, she had her GMAT nd GRE score in hand nd applied in Canada Unis too ,, she was sure that there she wd get admission easily if she got in US ,, now she wanted to go Canada after him ,, some of her prev prep helped her now ,, two yrs back she sent Daimaa for Huj nd applied for her passport ,that time in craze she applied for her too ,, that was her good decision nd helped her now ,, she got her admission approval from few college nd she choosed spl one ... Maan's college ... S***** School of Business , Uni of BC ( Vencouver),, she smiled that day thiking .. Now where he'll go ? She'll live in front of him to torture him all d time ,, Geet told Daimaa that she got admission for MBA nd now have to apply for viza ,, she told her not to share this news with Khuranas as they never share any news regarding their son Maanveer Singh ,, she didn't trust them nd she was very right here to judge Khuranas.

Khuranas didn't know what Geet was planning nd she didn't know what they wr hiding ,, d shameful blow which Maan gave to Khuranas was hurting Yash ,,he sent only small mail of reaching safely nd after that he didn't even talk nd sent any msg nd mail to any one for many days after reaching there so Yash started his efforts to know about him ,, he called d bank manager nd requested him to give bank statements of Maan's AC ( for ITR),, bank manager knew Yash Khurana well so did that easily ,, Yash checked his money transfres nd payments ,, d main thing which he got shook him entirely , even he didn't share that with anyone in d family ,, in those statements there was d payment for college fees nd not only for Maan but for Sameera Reddy too ,, Maan was paying for her admission too nd she was in d same college with him ,, this thing cleared Yash that Maan was with Sameera in Canada ,, he lied nd cheated d family ,, he said that he try to forget her slowly but here he was with her ,, there wr many entries for sweeping money from cards too from diff places/hotels/shopping centers of Canada .

Yash was hurt nd angered ,, he cdn't stop Maan's ACs but he had d power to stop d money which sweeped to Maan's AC from KC's AC every month for his expenditure ,, Yash blocked d KC's shares which wr on Maan's name ,, now no more money transfer in Maan's ACs ( he had 2 ACs) ,, to teach him a good lesson Yash took d most effective step bcoz for money he wd deffo contact him till then he had to wait, thought Yash cd go to Canada but he wanted to make Maan contact himself nd then to open d truth .

Geet nd Daimaa did d viza's formalities after getting clearance from college nd after few days got that ,, Daimaa witnessed that Geet's health was falling day by day ,, she was not eating well nd gen ordered to Dominos for eatables ,, after coming Delhi she had started eating cont. foods ,,she asked her .

Daimaa: Geet beta after coming here u started eating these useless things ,, see u r getting week ,, eat our desi ind food beta .

Geet: Daijaan ,, we didn't get these things in HP , but here I m getting so let me eat , I like it ,, aap bhi try karo .. achha hei .

Daima: kya hei ye ? sookhi si moti roti with kacchi-paccki sabji ,, kuch healthy kha beta .

Geet: Daijaan ye Peeza hei , world famous .

Daimaa: ye bhi koi famous hone wali cheej hei .. phitey muh ,, apna alloo paratha esse lakh accha hei .

Geet: O Daijaan ,, khane do na ,, bachpan se wahi to khaya hei ,, duniya mei aur kya-kya hei wo sab bhi to janna aur taste kerna chahiye na... jaisa desh , vaisa bhesh .

Daijaan : kha , jo jee chahe ,, dekhna fir royegi pet pakadker jab dard hoga .

Geet: no prob ,, aap ho na sambhalne ko ,, accha daijaan packing start ker do ,, we have to go lil early bcoz we have to search a good place to live nd need time to search d place before starting my classes .

Daimaa: hum ,, theek hei ,, Khuranas ko kab informe kerna hei ?

Geet: jane se ek din pahale aur kaha nki US ja rahe hein ,, I have doubt on them daijaan.

Daimaa: kya doubt ?

Geet: they never give us news about their Son , didn't they talk nd contact to their son?

Daimaa: u r right here ,, if he informed them for his departure nd they wr backing him, then deffo they have contact , but what do u want to know about him ? Do u want to meet him ?

Geet: not now Daijaan ,, let me find out everything about him , after that .

Daimaa: Geet, I m worried for ur future beta ,, kya hoga ? He is also in Canada .

Geet: don't know Daijaan ,, 1st I want to see what he was doing there ?

Daima: hummm ,, dekho kya hota hei ? ticket book ki ?

Geet: haan , abhi ki .

Daimaa: kab ki?

Geet: coming Sunday, early mrng ,, mid nyt nikalna hei , checking mei time lagega .

Daimaa: hummm ,, theek hei , kuch jaroori cheeje mai yahin se le chalungi ,, wahan kahan milegi ?

Geet smiled: OK , as u wish .

Daimaa went out for making tea for her ,, she started thinking what she had to take with her , though she knew that in Canada lots of Indian lived but fot them that was an unknown place nd they didn't have any known single person in that country for help.


Peeping ----- new entry ... someone find precious ...


Part - 11



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FIRST POSTION MAAR LI MAINE
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awesome update
geet going to canada.
yash blocked maan's accounts...
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😊 Updated ...pg... 109



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ohh no maan living with sameera
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awesome part.. maan need a great lesson from geet
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nice update...
best part is geet is not a sehmi types or those serial type girls whose always shown depended on others... its very rare to find where they show geet with such strong character...😊

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