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The Myth


The test of a true myth is that each time u return to it , new insights and interpretations arise.


A saying Or belief Or fact Or superstition Or Myth ... these words play an important part in ppl's life ,, many blindly believe or live their lives on some belief nd myths ,, from d time of d bith of a child to till his/her end some belief never left them ,, those ppl trust a priest who himself a human being nd it's also said that human is a bundle of mistakes ,, then how cn a priest be trusted blindly ? Does a priest's words r more important than an innocent child ? If yes then where is humanity , love , care nd family bonding ? Where r relations nd their warmth ? Where is Truth nd Reality ?



Note... This is a fiction inspired by some facts and incidents from our surroundings . If someone find any resemblance in d title and story line , they r welcome to leave their comments on my page (plzz don't pm me)with d link . I'll try my best not to touch any body's work. Need ur love and support to make it an interesting SS.





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This was d very awkward situation for handas ,, Darji nd Rano called Daimaa in HH nd told her about Geetika's marriage ,, daimaa was stunned nd staring at them ,, she was sad nd hurt , feeling low nd disappointed , bcoz it was she who was bringing up geet from d day one ,, this family discarded her but she cocooned her nd showered her love on her like a mother nd she was deeply attached with her but these ppl didn't even talked to her regarding her marriage nd fixed that ,, they didn't even know what their daughter want nd what r her dreams ,, still they wr thinking only to send her away forever to break all their link from her , bcoz after marriage she wd belong to other family nd wdn't effect Handas in future,, she thought about her too ,, what she wd do after Geet ,, she wd become all alone again ,, daimaa's eyes turned wet , but she cdn't voice out her feelings .

Rano told her to bring Geet in lawn so that they cn talk to her regarding d marriage ,, daimaa nodded sadly nd went back with heavy heart ,, she didn't know how Geet wd react ?

At eve Daimaa brought Geet in lawn saying to have a walk nd some fresh air ,, they wr walking nd geet was telling her about her friends future plans nd some replies from diff well ranked colleges for her MBA too ,, daimaa was listening quietly with a faint smile but her heart was crying ,, then they came Mahinder nd Rano ,, seeing them Geet turned to go back home but daimaa held her hand nd pleaded .

Daimaa: geet beta plzz for me stay here nd listen what they want to say ,, they r ur parents beta.

Geet: only sending some money at d name of their duties don't make them parents ,, there was a lots of diff what they r doing for their sons nd what they did to me , they rejected me nd now I m rejecting them .. simple ,, If u want to listen them then cn stay here , but spare me .

Rano: plzz ,it's for ur future .

Mahi: we did everything for d happiness of family ,, we r helpless to do so, u won't understand .

Geet: I don't want to , now leave or let me leave from here otherwise my shadow cn harm u nd ur family .

Rano: we want to talk imp here ,, this is last nd then u r free from all bad omen ,, after marriage u cn live ur normal life with family .

Geet: what?? marriage ?? Oh now u want to throw me out from this house too ,to get rid of me for ever , right ?

Mahi: it's not like that , plzz try to understand us , after marriage u'll belong to other family nd then these graha doshas won't affect u nd all ,, we find a boy of same kundli nd he was a good match for u nd then u cn live with all ,, u'll get ur own family .

Geet: u r doing this only for u nd ur family ,, d main reason is to throw me away for ever ,, what I want nd what r my dreams don't matter to u ,, I don't believe u nd ur so called superstitious story ,, sorry...

Rano: u have to ,, we cn't avoid d things ,, it cn be dangerous for d family ,, u r manglic nd had few more doshas ,, u have to marry only with a manglic guy ,, very hardly we get this match ,, they r very nice nd educated ppl ,, they won't stop u to achieve ur dreams like we never stop u ,, we provided u all d facilities nd education ,, we wr bounded nd helpless to keep u away for d happiness of rest of d family nd for ur father ,, what wd u get if something went wrong with ur father ,, who looked after this whole family nd business ,, who wd came to give u all these good facilities nd education to fulfil ur dreams ,, today u cn think for ur future bcoz he gave u opportunity ,, still we r ready to give u everything but we r bounded nd doing all this for ur good future ,, it's not only good for us but for ur coming life too ,, u'll be free from this curse of Manglic ,, daimaa plzz make her understand not to put whole family in trouble .

Daimaa: malkin i'll talk to her ,, she won't turn my words .

Geet: daijaan u too ?

Daimaa: geet beta there wr few things we cn't avoid ,, they r part of our life , we'll talk later .

Mahi: geet beta I cn only fold my hands in front of u ,, plzz let us do this nd then live ur life like u want ,, I m sorry I was helpless nd still I m helpless too ,, u cn accuse me , but trust me I want only ur happiness .( Mahi folded his hands in front of geet which startled her )

Rano: we cn't avoid whole family ,, we cn't go against Darji ,, we have many responsibilities as a heir of Handa khandaan ,, we r bounded ,, we knew it was painful for u to live like this but we also bear this pain ,, u'll understand my plight when u become a wife nd mother ,, we cn only beg u ( she too folded her hands) plzz say yes to this marriage nd make u nd us free ,, after that u cn live with us ,, after marriage there is no fear of harm ,, that family is very good nd keep u happy ,, plzz say yes nd make all happy .

Geet: if I don't nd leave this place for ever.

Daimaa: what r u saying beta ? a single young girl cn't survive in this cruel world all alone ,, I m d live example beta ,, I saw d life ,, it's easy to say but impossible to face ,, it's ur luck that u have roof over ur head nd a family for namesake ,, this lady don't give u love but she gave u life .

Geet: nd now wants d return with interest .

Mahi: no , we want only ur good future nd happiness for rest of d family .

Rano: daimaa knew everything nd knew what we bore nd how we saved u ? we wr not ur enemy , but we wr helpless .

Daimaa: aap jaiye , mai baat kerti hu geet se ,, i trust my upbringings ,, she won't hurt anybody .

Geet: Daijaan .

Daimaa: plzz Geet beta we have to think nd talk , come inside .

Daimaa held geet's hand nd came in d house ,, Geet was annoyed not believing all those things which forced her parents to discard her ,, she had her points to show that those thinking r baseless ,, that day Daimaa shared her past with Geet, how she faced a tough life after leaving her husband house ,, she was abused badly ,, live hungry for many days ,, her dignity came on stake when she went to ask for work in a small factory ,, she run from there nd she was suffering lying in half conscious stage when her mother saved her ,, bring her here nd respectively gave her shelter , work nd food ,, her mother was not a stone heart woman but she was helpless bcoz she was a DIL , wife nd mother ,, d pandit told to leave u in orphanage but she didn't nd begged me to become ur daimaa ,, keep in front of them ,, gave all d facilities nd never interfere in our life only that she was able to give her best education ,, they wr helpless bcoz of their faith in those things which she didn't ,, she had her point of view nd they had their ,, daimaa nd Geet argued for long but Daimaa too begged her to go with her parents wish ,, daimaa cdn't go against d family wish ,, she was obliged .

Geet: Daijaan , do u regret that u left ur house for ur self -respect?

Daimaa looked at her painfully: geet some time I felt that I did wrong ,, at least I was safe in those brick wall but after coming here nd getting u I felt I did right ,, it was only time which conclude what was wrong nd right ,, ur parents decision cn be good for u beta ,, u cn get ur own good nd caring family ,, we know that there r many baseless things but for some ppl they r very imp nd they trust them ,,we cn't avoid it.

Geet: u r confusing me Daijaan ,, i'll do what u want nd there is a condition for that.

Daimaa: what ?

Geet: u'll be with me always nd i'll carry on my study.

Daimaa shocked: how cn I beta ,, that is a diff house ,, I hope they won't stop u as ur parents said that they r very nice nd educated .

Geet: if I cn live in a diff house then why cn't u ? rahi baat education ki to kya handas educated nahi hein , aur wo bhi to etne hi superstitious hein tabhi to apne bete ke jaisi ladki chahiye ... Manglic.

Daimaa: that's why I said it's d matter of belief ,, they do nd u don't .

Geet: I have logic , but they don't ,, they r believing a normal human being like a God ,, they cn be wrong ,, their calculation cn be wrong ,, when time is changing then how cn things remain same ,, it's not me but they cn be harmful for me ,, who knows ?

Daimaa: these things have endless arguments beta nd at last we have to go with them ,, we cn't take risk bcoz if something go wrong then there is only regret nd apologizes ,, so plzz go with ur parents wish nd make u free.

After that geet argued many times but daimaa always pacified her ,, Rano nd Mahi came to talk nd requested her to co-operate ,, Darji only warned her that they won't tolerate if someone raised any finger at his family bcoz of her ,, Geet was not participating in any preparation ,, she was not interested ,, helplessly Daimaa doing from her side ,,d days of wedding come nd all d Handas along with Pummy nd her family had to go Delhi ,, a resort was booked for them nd for d wedding in NCR ,, ,, engagement was a small family ceremony in resort hall .

Maan arrived at d time of engagement nd formally met with all ,, his was quiet all d time only Dev was talking ,, Maan occasionally giving fake smiles ,, he didn't even gave a proper look to Geet ,, Dadima nd maan's mom covered d damage saying that he was very shy nd isolated person , hardly mix with d ppl ,, ,, Next day all wr gathered at KM for sangeet nd mahandi ceremony ,, darji strictly told Rano, Pummy nd Daimaa to keep Geet lil away till d time of Kanyadaan ,, Panditji wr doing their diff poojas before all main rituals ,, Handas brought many expensive gifts for all d Khuranas nd spl Maan ,, even for Geet too Mahinder nd Rano did their best ,, from jewellery to dresses ,, from car to bank balance nd land too ,, Geet was least interested in all these things ,, she was quietly doing her whatever daimaa nd rano said to her ,, guests praised Handas for their simplicity nd Geet for her beauty ,, everything was going well from both sides ,, d wedding day arrived ,, Maan strictly ordered Dev to keep d media away ,, guests reached at venue ,, it was beautiful nd organized arrangements ,, at d time of jaimala Maan nd Geet saw each other nd both praised each other inwardly ,, Geet was in wedding dress nd jewellery looking like a princess nd Maan like a prince in green sherwani nd pagdi .

They got married With all rituals ,, Mahinder nd Rano did her Kanyadaan happily,, now she was belong to Khurana ,, now her new life was going to start ,, Handas did their best ,, with heavy heart they did vidaai ,, daimaa nd Geet's eyes wr shedding tears nd finally Khuranas returned at KM with their elder DIL ,, Dadima nd Maan's mom welcomed bride nd groom with all rituals ,, Maan nd Geet wr doing everything quietly ,, Geet was observing Maan with lowered eyes ,, she didn't find him happy bur she shrugged her thoughts bcz she too was in same situation nd may be he too didn't like all these poojas nd superstitions ,, both wr totally unknown to each other so there wr only speculations not trust ,, there was a long way to know each other ,, 1st they need a talk which was also very far .

After few grha pravesh rituals girls of relatives brought Geet in a room ,, it was a king size bedroom nd beautifully decorated ,, they settled Geet on bed ,, whispering nd giggling with each other nd then left ,, it was mid night nd all wr tired so went to sleep in their respective rooms ,, Geet was sitting nd dozing in that dimly lit room ,, she was restless nd anxious .. how two totally unknown person start their talk , share a room nd then bed ?


Peeping ----- is it really a new beginning ...?


6th part on next pg ...😃


sorry for mistakes ...



Edited by singh24 - 10 years ago
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Nice update
how they can be like this 😡
for their familie happiness they didn't even care about geet's dream
maaneet praising both inwardly 😕
loved it! !
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awesome😊
marriage is done
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😊 Updated ... Pg..75

coming up 6th part too 😃



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Interesting part. Daimaa convinced Geet for marriage. Maan's unwillingness is observed by all but ignored as both sides want this marriage. Now Geet is hoping to have a talk with Maan, let's see what's in store for her.
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awesome update dear, poor geet feeling sorry for her
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😃 updating 6th part too ,, will PM later with both d link ...


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