DEVIL'S POSSESSION updated EPILOGUE on 1-6-2015 / PG 44

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hottyangel

@hottyangel

Dazzler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#21

interesting... maan saved geet in the forest from that goons... he killed them mercilessly... he took geet to his mansion and and he stays in dark without allowing light to come inside... who is he????

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CookieMonster

@heycookie

Stunner

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Posted: 10 years ago

#22

Interesting concept :)
cant wait 4 more..

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sanum23

@sanum23

Sparkler

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Posted: 10 years ago

#23

seem interesting

geet running to save her dignity

she bumped on maan and begged

him to save her and fainted maan killed

both who behind hrr and took her to mansion

and she told him she is orphan and searching

fr job so maan offers hr job

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-Lehar-

@-Lehar-

Inactive

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Posted: 10 years ago

#24

congrats on the new story
nice start
geet running to save her dignity and bumped into maan she fainted before him maan killed thos two men and took her to his mansion when she woke up he offered her some water maan made her sleep in comfort bed when she woke up next day she found her self in different room..maan came to her and said he will drop her wherever she wants she told him she is orphan and in search of job so he offere her job...geet is affected by his closeness
maan's character is intriguiung waiting to know more about him

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vrinda22

@vrinda22

Stunner

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Posted: 10 years ago

#25

Maan saved geet

But he killed the men who were behind her

He took her home n offerred her job too

Both are affected with each other..

Y maan loves dark...n y he said she is n affected

Is he vampire

Interesting start

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GBR

@bhanu_rekhag

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 10 years ago

#26

Awesome start. ..is maan human or something supernatural. ..waiting to c maaneet interactions...

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@Endgame

Inactive

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Posted: 10 years ago

#27

amazing start looks like maan is like a cold dark prince wants just darkness in his life geet is an orphan came for work but those men r behind her he killed those men n now she will work for him nice start