THE LOCKET REPOSTED (5) *** Epilogue pg 115 ***

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Posted: 10 years ago

#821

Chpt 98 part 3

Kabir kisses Megha unknowingly seen by a shy Poonam who has to be direct in order for Chandan to understand why he can't enter the room😆 Chandan explains the reasoning behind the naming of his company and Poonam is overcome emotionally. He has always loved her.

Finally Geet and Maan are married in front of all and are now officially a wedded couple. It was a lovely read.😃

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Chpt 98 part 4

Ohh chori chori chupke chupke stealing kisses first time after their wedding😉

Another wonderful part of how each couple thinking of how they came together at this wonderful point in their lives.

Pinky is also unknowingly showing maturity and for the first time has put Adi in front of her needs.

Kashish and Sujal dreaming dreams.

Dadima understanding the impatience of Maan and quickly winding things up before the couples escape.

What a lovely thing Maan does. This is one man who will move heaven and earth to ensure all of his loves desires and wishes are fulfilled.

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Chpt 99

A lovely start to the beginning of their wedded life. As a true partner Maan realising Geets nervousness diverts her mind and then his naughtiness starts but by then Geet is lost in his passion😳

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Posted: 10 years ago

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Chpt 100

Congratulations for competing 100 chapters.👏

This story has been a dedication to true love. Both have had ups and downs and misunderstanding in between the long road they have walked down but finally the trust and belief they had in their love for each other has made it possible for them to overcome everything. The romance is hot and passionate and may it last for eternity 🤗

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Originally posted by: Alpha01
Chpt 100
Congratulations for competing 100 chapters.👏

This story has been a dedication to true love. Both have had ups and downs and misunderstanding in between the long road they have walked down but finally the trust and belief they had in their love for each other has made it possible for them to overcome everything. The romance is hot and passionate and may it last for eternity 🤗

@underlined: Thank you😃

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Posted: 10 years ago

#826

chapter 85
it was such a cute and sweet update
maan ne geet ka mazak udaya aur geet bechari usse maar bhi nahi payi
lagta hai megha hipoonam aur chandan ko kareeb laayegi
uff this brij tara aur megha ko kidnap kiya
vinash kale viprit buddhi
yehi haal hai brij ka

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Posted: 10 years ago

#827

Part 99-so hot passionate update finally they became one by all means again maan just thinks about her n her comfort he makes her fogets everything their love making was very passionate loved the part

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Part 100-beautiful update oops maan became possisseve because of rain now he is here rain cant touch his giit they can get enough of each other amazing part

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loved both parts thnx 4 pm

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a memory from last year

Originally posted by: mishtimohabbat
99:
How does One define the physiology of Love?
I always wondered how the writers of our forum can so easily glide their way through its writing. And I am still wondering because Avi you have done a fine job of it!! Generally I hear readers say please include 18+ or hot moments... but today I realized that you neither need over the top description of every crook and corner touched nor do you need elaboration on the euphoria of emotions that bursts in those moments... Personal muse but as a reader... I just want to feel this sense of celebration between the two lovers, feel the warmth of their love but not exactly their love making!
And this is what I felt, the comfort zone which Maan created for his Geet using his gentle caresses, her innocent care and giving meaning to the solah singhar' his lady love has done for him.
All was almost similar to what I felt while reading.. Not a moment was awkward or unabashed for me.. for that I thank you Ji.. Because honestly.. You and your story has become very close to my heart.. I look forward to reading it all so much .. that I wouldn't want to hold anything sour /bitter in this Mishti filled memory of mine.. well the only bittersweet is its end.
Every woman wishes for a bed of roses, when she stands to take vows with the man heavens have chosen for her...but not every woman gets it and more importantly not everyone woman deserves it...But your Geet deserves every petal that was showered on her.. Almost childish to say but I know you will understand this Jazbaati Mishti Avi; though its fictional but I wish the scent of those roses to whisper and linger for the rest of their life... Almost non-fictional too because in each of these characters...and their moments...lies pieces and memories of the person behind the name Avi/Dqno1... and for that beautiful married young working woman living abroad away from home and yet who made her own home with the Dev of her Life... I wish the same too.
PS: All this sounds like a conclusive comment... But it isn't, since a century is on its way... but there are many more centuries to come from Your way ahead!! ... will never let go the writer in you... take a break but you got to come back for us.
Mishti Love 99 times more than before.. a century less than the one to come ..Hehehee

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Just managed to write this comment while at work and you have posted the centurian chapter... Will read tonight and hopefully comment will follow straight after ..
thank you Ji for giving us such frequent number of chapters.. 🤗 😳