ONLY MINE#2 part 20@103 on 13th august 16 - Page 46

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Posted: 10 years ago
really vo date pr gye the ya camping krne.. maan ko sudden ka hua trust sun kr.. n he left geet in the middle of jungle
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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome
strange reaction of maan he is angry bcoz she trusts him weird
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Posted: 10 years ago
What the hell? What he wants ? He was such a fool poor Geet feel v sorry for her
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice update
maaneet date in jungle :P
nice idea maan...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nyc update. .. but I really feel bad for geet all people around her r insane except for her dad n daadi...
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Posted: 10 years ago
gr8 parts..
cont.soon

thanks for pm dear,,
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Posted: 10 years ago


i know now a days am gayab from commenting

but here i am... and i will make sure i come and comment when ever u update from now on...

myserious and dreamy hain maan where as geet a gal full of dreams ... uff kya combo banaaya hain and ye kaisa date hain😆

jungle tent and all was giving ghsp feeling... but maan was just staring at her and she was busy having pizza😆

but gentleman types hain... was waiting for geets eshaara...😳

mystery solve karo...y maan is having so much issue with the trust word,.. has some one in past trusted him and he was not able to keep it ??

bechaari geet akele... hope he realises and come back to geet...

thanks for the update dear
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Posted: 10 years ago


waiting for the next
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Posted: 10 years ago
amazing update...
maneet on a dtae..but what happened...
where did maan go??
hopefully geet is fine...
waiting for the next part...
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Posted: 10 years ago


hey guys just wana thank u all..for supporting me..

just keep loving my stories...and i will try my level best to update asap


PART 17- KISS

My lips trembled...as I clenched my eyes...

I couldn't fathom he actually left me all alone in this dark forest...

Inspite of being that state.. My heart and mind..was replaying his face... his expressions..which portrayed something else ...

I snapped my eyes.. open... His eyes which showed misery and anguish didn't leave my mind...

" Maan...cant do this to me..." I stood to my feet and wiped my cheeks...

"no...no..." I shook my head... My heart wasn't ready to consider him guilty...

Thus I decided..to find out what happened out of the blue which led this...

Somehow I managed to creep out of the forest... and luckily found... a Cab.

I just hoped he must be... home... . As the cab drove...towards our lane.. more tears formed in my eyes...how can something as weird as this can happen in a flick of a sec..

I reached...my lane and scurried down..

The lights weren't on..So I assumed he wasn't here.. I saddened...immediately.. Maybe I wont get my answers today...

I decided to leave... And as I turned a loud thud noise..roared.. making me shriek..

"maaan..." I gasped..widening my eyes... And ran inside the house...

After searching for him all over the house like a maniac .. I dragged my feet in the basement...

My hands...were trembling as I grabbed the door knob...and twisted it..

I felt the world around me... slipping...and fading..into a dark hole... As I tapered my eyes on him..

"maaan" I screamed... loudly...

He was bare bodied.. performing kick boxing... He held a hard wooden stick... and he placed it...on the stand..and then kicked it...so hard which made his knuckles bleed...

His whole body had bruises...all over...some were bleeding too..

I ran to him..and gripped...his hand..which was bleeding...

I caressed his hands...with tears in my eyes.. I was..stunned looking him in this condition..

maaan...maan" I whimpered...staring his hand

I could hear him..groan... and then he forcefully withdrew his hand...

He walked ahead and gripped another stick...

I was at loss of words... I had no idea what led him to do this... Was this his way to remove his frustration... I could feel his pain.. it was all over the basement... his lips were mum but his..pain and anguish...were screeching ..everywhere

I couldn't see him like this... I hugged him through back.. I myself was trembling in fear... As soon as.. I hugged him.. he tried to struggle and pry me off his body.. But I kept still..

The more he violently shook his body.. the more tears fell from my eyes...

I had my eyes closed...and hugged him as tight as I could... I placed a soft kiss on his bruise...not to hurt him...

After that instant... I felt him..grabbing my hand..and spinning me. He pushed me..to the wall...and hovered me..

His hand...curbed me from either sides... and eyes...dangerously thinned at me.. I said nothing.. just let him...stare in my eyes..

His eyes were furiously...searching something in my eyes... I could see it..

He placed his wounded hand...on my waist and pulled me closer...I hissed..feeling his blood dripping down my waist..

I was breathing unevenly and so was he...as he moved his face closer to mine... My eyes dropped close...feeling his breath on my lips...

The next moment ...I felt his lower...lip touching mine... After brushing my lips..and making me..shiiver... He placed his body over mine... N framed my face... He licked..my lips... And then.. slowly plunged them..silently demanding me to open my mouth..

I did not hesitate... The feeling of his lips..on my lips...had created havoc in my senses..making me forget everything ..

His tongues...throbbed inside my mouth...touching my soul . Just one kiss and I felt my myself,..floating in heaven..

I had never felt such a urge to give in to anyone's demand... His passion..was visible in his kiss... I gripped his shoulder. Piercing my nails...on his body..as his.. tongue found mine..

I gave in whatever little control I had... My hands went into his hair..gripping them... He held..me..in such way... I was in air..with my legs around his waist...

Our kiss...was desperate, intense..passionate...but it was yelping in pain too...

Our saliva dripped out our chins... I was going breathless... But I dint want to break the kiss..

I felt Maan slowly parting ... He gave me.. one long smooch..before he parted... and we both thumped down.. on the floor...

I was calming my erotic..heartbeats.. there was a red hue across my cheeks..

I felt his fingers...caressing my cheek... I smiled... a little bit dint open.. My eyes...

He kissed my both eyes one my one... and then my forehead...

His hands... embraced me... and I felt the same feelings all over again... Though his lips dint say a word.. I knew he reciprocated my feelings...

We stayed in that position for some time... And then... I realized his hand was still bleeding..

I held his palm..and looked up in his eyes with tears..

He smiled. Faintly...assuring me he was fine..

I shook my head...and silently demanded him to let me bandage..it..

He blinked again...

After I bandaged..his hands... I went to..wash my hands...

When I retreated back... he was on bed... I looked at him and he patted the vacant space next to him...

I did not feel...that he was being naughty.. I just felt he was needy .. he wanted me to be there..with him.. I knew.. there was something he was hiding..but I decided to give him time.. to let me..knw about that.. For now... I just wanted him.. calm..

I slipped besides...him... And turned my back...to him..

A moment later..his hands...drew me closer... and he spooned..me behind..

A tear rolled down my hear..feeling his care...as he brushed..my hairs..

He then...kissed my hair...whispering goodnight..

Certainly it was a good night..with me in his arms...








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