Shayad .. Maine pyaar kiya...... last part / pg 53 - Page 8

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Posted: 10 years ago
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hi thanks 4 da pm n terrific update! Well written! Maan worried seeing the ring! Maan is in love with her bt yet 2 realise! Meera upset seeing him say meri Geet! Maan goes 2 find her as she recalls their first meeting n what she sed! update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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PART 1

INDU DI

AAPNE toh start mai hi jhatka de diya

poor geet I could literally feel her emotions di...the letter was so touching

aap itna emotional scenes itne achese se kaise likh lete ho ??mai 😭 shuru kar deti hu

But anyway m eagerly off to the enxt chap..phew thank god i started reading when u had posted the 2nd chap..

wait nahi karna pada😃
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Part 2

Ohhh... their first meet 😳

Maan is a doc ❤️ ka doc hi hoga 🤣

lekin geet her thinking is totally diffrent

Chalo maan knows ki geet kaha hogi...


But phir usse meera se hi pyar hai toh now y is he worried for geet???

uff yeh maan na meri samjh k bahar hai

btw i loved " meri geet "
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice updates
Congrats for new story
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Posted: 10 years ago
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congrats for new ss
wow start se hi jhatko pe jhatke,,,,,
pehle maaneet ka divorce...then the letter...
the letter was so touching...geet ne apne sari bate jo wo nahi keh sakti khat me likh diye...
maan doc n geet gao ki gori...
phir missing diamond,,,,,
thank god maan ko akal aur yaad dono aayi...
usse yaad to aagaya geet kya sochti hai kaise sochti hai...
ummm meri geet maan babu ab tak aap kis dunia me khoye hue the!!!
Edited by CrazyEyes - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Part # 3




Maan - main jaanta hoon woh kaha hogi... woh nadi ke uss paar... Gurudwara ko dekhte hue baithi hogi... park mein...


Meera - tum toh usse itni ache se jaante ho Maan...


past...


Maan again met geet after three days from that incident... the person who used to work for MAAN has to leave for some other place for few days and he sent geet in his place... geet used to do all Maan's works... cooking cleaning... everything...


she used to take lunch for him to his workplace... one day he asked...


Maan - ...what's your name... mera matlab hain... tumhara naam kya hain...


girl - ji... mujhe English samajh mein aati hain... and my name is geet... Geet Handa... she said...


Maan - acha... kaha tak padhayi ki hain tumne...


Geet - ji.. kuch zyada nahi... bas school complete kiya hain...


Maan nodded... and observed her... she is beautiful... especially her eyes... he found something in them... they are just pulling him towards her...


Maan - umm.. tum yeh sab Kaam itne ache se kaise karleti ho... khana toh bohut acha banati ho tum... he said praising her...


Geet - jab Ghar mein koi aur na ho toh sab seekhna padha hain saabji...


Maan - matlab... kaun kaun hain tumhare ghar mein...


Geet - main aur mere darji... bas ...


Maan - aur tumhare Mom aur dad...


Geet - nahi rahe... main bohut choti thi jab woh chalegaye... tabse main aur darji hain bas... kuch din pehle tak darji hi Kaam karte the.. par ab unki umar hogayi hain... aur main yeh sab seekh gayi... haalaat bohut kuch sikha dete hain Saab...


Maan nodded...


Maan has been watching geet for nearly a month.. he was still in hoshiyapur ... and treating the villagers... he used to visit other villages around hoshiyapur... Geet would pack his lunch.. make his breakfast... and dinner and even washed his clothes.. and tidied his house... Maan was impressed with her works... she did everything with efficiency... her way of talking with elder.. her showing respect.. and he saw her cheerful ness also.. when she was with kids... his fav watching geet became his fav pass time...


Savitri Devi went to hoshiyapur to meet Maan... as Maan would always be busy with his hospital she thought she can buy some time with him in hoshiyapur... dadi arrived by evening and Maan was in the nearby village... she made herself settled and waited for Maan...


Geet came and prepared dinner for Maan not knowing about his dadi... when she went inside the house to make his dress and bed ready she saw Savitri Devi... she greeted dadi... and did her work... and went away to make extra rotis...


Maan came tired and was greeted by dadi... it was a surprise for him... Maan felt happy ... she is his only family and he loved her too much...


Maan freshened up and came for dinner... Geet served them their dinner and went away...


dadi - Maan... aaj aap ko mere sawal ka Jawab dena hi hoga...


Maan - dadi.. abhi nahi dadi...


dadi - abhi nahi toh kab Maan... hamari bhi Umar hogayi hain... pata nahi kab tere dadaji bulale ...usse pehle main aapki Dulhan ko dekhna chahti hoon...


Maan - aap aisi baatein kyun Karti hain dadi.. aap ko kuch nahi hoga..


dadi - ummed hain jab tak aapki shaadi na ho.. hume kuch nahi ho...


Maan - dadi... theek hain... aap meet gayi aur main haar gaya... jo karna chahti hain woh kijiye...


dadi - sach mein Maan... aap hume bewakoof to nahi Banarahi haina... Yaha se bhagana ke liye...


Maan - nahi dadi.. sach mein...main tayyar hoon...


dadi - theek hain... main aapke liye ladki dekhna shuru karleti hoon... ab boliye kaisi ladki chahiye...


Maan - dadi.. woh sab aap hi jaane... mujhe toh nahi pata... par aapka khayal rakhna wali hona chahiye... bas...


dadi - yeh kya baat hui... shaadi aapko karni hain toh apni pasand se kariye... hamari baat baad mein...


Maan was about to say some thing but stopped seeing geet... she came and severed them lassi in big tumblers...


Geet - ji.. yeh lassi... aap ke liye and handed it to Maan... then she gave to Savitri Devi.. aur yeh aap ke liye.. bina shakkar wali...


dadi was amused... aapko kaise pata hum shakkar nahi lete...


Geet - ji.. Doctor Saab ne ek baar bataya ... mujhe yaad hain...


Maan was shocked... he didn't even remember him telling geet all this... he shared personal details with her... he didn't remember... Geet went away taking the dished and plates...


Maan looked at the way geet went ... he turned to dadi and said... dadi, kya aap kam Padhi likhi aur gaon ki ladki ko pasand karenge mere liye...


dadi - yeh sab aap dekhe te hain Maan.. aur hum unki dil ko dekhte hain... aur hamari Nazreen kabhi dhoka nahi khati..


Maan - jaise...


dadi - jaise.. abhi abhi jo ladki ... Maan supplied.. Geet... dadi continued... haa .. Geet... woh... Dil ki saaf wali hain...main usse sham se dekh rahi hoon... uski cehre ki kuskurahat kabhi nahi gayi... bohut pyaar bachi hain... mujhe bohut pasand aayi yeh ladki... pata nahi kiski kismat mein likhi hai yeh...



Maan shocked dadi ... saying ... mujhe bhi dadi... main isse tab se dekh raha hoon jab se Yaha aaya hoon... bohut achi hain... aur kya aap isse apni bahu banana pasand karenge...


dadi was excited... she was already impressed with geet and she approved instantly... and in two days they went and asked for Geet's hand from her darji... who is her only family and he readily agreed knowing about Maan... and soon they were engaged... and within a month they were married...


marital life was bliss for geet... Geet completely fitted into maans life... she was a dutiful wife to Maan and lovely daughter to dadi... Maan was happy... and he came back to Delhi... to look after his hospital and dadi... he looked after geet, spent time with her.. showed her around... and even took her to his hospital... he arranged a dinner in the hospital for whole staff... Geet was very happy with Maan and dadi... everything was going fine.. but after six months of their marriage... Geet's darji had a heart attach and he left everyone... Geet was shocked and it pained her loosing her only family from her side...Maan had taken care of her as a true husband and she was recovered to her true self ...


Maan and Geet even celebrated thier marriage anniversary in the most romantic way abroad and came back... Maan again was busy with his hospital and Geet and dadi... they were happy in thier own little world...



but one day suddenly... Maan had to attend an emergency case... and he was shocked to see Meera in that state... she met with an accident and was brought to Maan's hospital...she was given treatment and Meera came into conscious after nearly 24 hrs... and them she saw Maan... she hugged him happily and cried... she was very happy seeing him after a long time... they were in the same collage...



precap.. Meera's suicide attempt





Edited by -indu- - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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part-2

awesome part dear ... maan is worried for geet safty... hope she would be fine..

part-3

..very nice part dear ... so sari history hi pta chl gyi maaneet ki .. how they met ,how they married...curious for next part dear..

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Edited by Monikaarora - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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omg mujhe to laga maan geet se pyaar nehi karte. i dont understand why maan want divorce
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Awesome part and story..soo cute meeting soo lovely Maaneet..
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Maan got marry for daadi's happiness and he think geet is ideal bahu to look after him and dadi, they were in love was never mansion ,but it was typical arrange marriage , now came meera his past love and he lost her some how and sh came back in his life phir kya hua batau? ya mai nahi aap hi batayenge, update soon.

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