MG SS : BROKEN RELATIONSHIP teaser pg 49 jun 17 - Page 14

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Posted: 10 years ago
Read both chapters..Maaneet are married for 5yrs and now heading for separation...Geet is unsure if she had loved Maan truly..Maan has a GF now...Nice concept..Waiting for their story to unfold..Pls send me pm..
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Posted: 10 years ago
very nice part
geet is crying asking herself where she lack behind 😭
geet caught maan n d girl in a parking area n lashed out her anger on maan...he deserve dat 😡

waitng fr nxt
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Posted: 10 years ago
So Maan is having extra marital affair. Geet is broken. That's not done. He should have understood her. Sad part but interesting story.
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Posted: 10 years ago
different story
me want to read more

is coz of geet ignorance made maan to do this

she is lack coz she never think about her contribution in their relation

may be she is not emotional type

yaar please continue soon




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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: suhaaana

<div align="center"><font color="#CC0000" size="5">PART 1</font>



<font color="#CC00FF" size="4" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">No, this can't be true..You are joking maan.. Tell me this
is a prank.. This is one of your silly jokes..You can't do this maan.. Listen
to me maan why are you not answering me..Say something please don't stay quiet,
why are you not saying something..I swear I will kill you for this maan..Don't
test my patience
</font><font size="4" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif"> she yelled seeing him having no expressions like he was not listening,
he was having no interest in listening to whatever she was saying..He had
suddenly turned cold and this broke something in her.. She was not used to this
from last five years, he was always with her, listened to her then why all of a
sudden this was happening in her life.. She was so happy, she was more of
shocked..Her blood was freeze..The papers in her hand fell down and next moment
she grabbed his collar and asked him in the top of her voice.. She was breaking
minute by minute and his silence was adding fuel to her anger that would
unleash on the man in front of her, her so called husband..</font>

</i>

<font color="#CC00FF" size="4" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">WHY!!!!!!!! </font>

<font size="4" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif"><font color="#003300">It's all over..</font>
She just heard his words and the next moment he was given a tight slap on his
cheek that made her push him back but she didn't she couldn't she just crumbled
on the floor crying out loud..</font>

<font size="4" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif"><font color="#CC00FF">Leave.</font>.She again yelled but he didn't went.. She was crying
probably on her fate or her choices she made.. she always was a confident woman
but where did she lacked in this , she was confused but it didn't deter her confidence
, right now she was felling much disgusted and hating her own self.. she
somehow gathered herself and stopped him..</font>

<font color="#CC00FF" size="4" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">Wait, answer me first..Where did I lacked.. What was my
fault that I get this punishment..
</font><font size="4" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">She was trying to sound confident but came
as a whisper, her broken heart was already giving in to her vulnerability..</font>

<font size="4" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">He didn't wanted to..But he had too, he had to answer her..
he had to make their relation work again but was it possible if she wouldn't cooperate
.. He tried so many times but it didn't worked out and now he had no other way left
they have to move..They are meant to be parted..</font>

<font color="#003300" size="4" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">You never tried geet... and it is already dead , I can't bear
the baggage of this tattered relationship..i want to move on in my life and I believe
you too want..
</font>

<font size="4" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">This will be best for us..</font>

<font size="4" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif"></font>

<i><font size="4" face="Georgia, Times New Roman, Times, serif">*****************************************************& </font>



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awesome congrats on new one
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: suhaaana

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<font color="#CC00CC"><font size="5" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif"><font color="#000000">~BROKEN RELATIONSHIP~</font>
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<font color="#CC00CC"><font size="5" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">Part 2</font></font>


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<font size="4" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif">He left the room, leaving her she was all broken, where did
she lacked what was her fault..She still remember the day, they were married...
It was an arrange marriage..She had just gotten into a job, they were paying
her well and she never wanted to get married at that time.. But things were not
according to what she wanted.. Everything was fine when she got to know about
maan.. He was working in an MNC with a good salary and her family wanted her to
marry him.. </font>

<font size="4" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif">She was in a trance when her eyes went to the papers..She
somehow took the papers in her hand and saw that he had already signed the
papers and wanted her to do the same.. She didn't knew why she was feeling this
much low.. This frustration was making her lose everything she in her sheer
anger threw all the things that were in the room.. The vase lying in the side
table was broken. She was withdrawn geet didn't noticed but she walked on the
glass pieces hurting herself in the process..She doesn't know what to do.
Suddenly feeling so low and why just coz of the man she LOVED. but does she really ?? </font>

<font size="4" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif">Geet crumbled on the floor like a piece of paper.. She
wanted to cry, ask him why is he doing so..But she couldn't..They were so
perfect..so apt ..he loved her he does everything whatever she like then why he
wanted them to separate.. She never
thought that everything that she was reminded was of him and his loyalty to
their relation.. She never felt if she was also a part of the marital bliss
that they had..</font>

<font size="4" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif">Crying, sobbing she fell in deep sleep lying on the cold
floor with her blood flowing of her feet.. Trying to find the flaws in her, his
eyes, his gestures that she ignored were laced with a certain pain..</font>

<font size="4" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif">NEXT DAY </font>

<font size="4" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif">She was in the parking lot when she saw someone with him.. The
girl was hugging him close and she was whispering something in the ears of her
husband..geet wanted to kill him right now , her anger surged through her veins
and she marched up to them..</font>

<font size="4" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif">Girl: <font color="#9900FF">so when are we getting married maan.. You know it's
been a year now and I seriously need a commitment in our relationship..
</font></font>

<font size="4" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif">In a flicker of moment she pulled the girl out of his
embrace and he was given a tight slap...</font>

<font size="4" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif">Geet : s<font color="#003300">o this was the reason you want me out of your life..
You want this B**** maan.. Fine I will sign the papers and I want you to take
all your belongings out of my apartment right now.. I don't want any of your
shit with me..
</font></font>

<font size="4" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif">She was going on and on when maan pulled her to his hard
frame and gave her a piece of mind..</font>

<font size="4" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif">Maan :<font color="#FF0099"> you never had anything of me geet.. You were so busy
in yourself that you actually never noticed that I am never with you and stop
blaming me.. This girl..
</font> He pulled the girl in his embrace and warned her, <font color="#FF0066">dare
you say anything to her or you will see the MAAN you never encountered till
now.. You spoiled our relationship and dare you blame me..
</font></font>

<font size="4" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif">Geet : <font color="#003300">say it again.. I spoiled it..I AM NOT THE ONE WHO IS
HAVING AN EXTRA MARITAL AFFAIR MAAN SINGH KHURANA.. I AM NOT THE ONE WHO IS
BEDDING ANOTHER MAN WHEN I AM WITH MY HUSBAND..
</font></font>

<font color="#FF0066" size="4" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif">GEET!!!!</font><font size="4" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif"> His voice was laced with pain..</font>

<font size="4" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif">Geet :<font color="#006600"> <font color="#003300">why , felt bad.. But you know what maan , I am glad
we are getting this over.. You never
understood me and its better we both should part our ways.. Go and enjoy your
life with your so called girl friend maan.. </font>
</font></font>

<font size="4" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif">She left covering her eyes with the shades that were slight
damp with the betrayal she felt right now.. She never thought that maan will
cheat her and right now she just wanted some peace she was feeling like
drowning in the pain that maan had given her..</font>

<font size="4" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif"></font>

<font size="4" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif">**********************************************&</font>

<font size="4" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif"></font>

<font size="4" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">From next part it will be on blog</font>

<font size="4" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif"></font>

<font size="4" face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">Within two three days I will put the PM list</font>

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<font size="4" face="Times New Roman, Times, serif"><font face="Comic Sans MS, Times, serif">Regular readers who commented will get the pms so no need to
worr</font>y </font>


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feeling upset with maan how can he cheat on her if any problems he can talk with her. Looking forward for story
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Posted: 10 years ago
this part was so emotional...maan wanted a divorce because he is having an affair and also shamelessly blaming her as the reason for the divorce...she hurt herself wanting to know what/where did she go wrong for getting divorce notice from maan...maan's character is so cruel...waiting to know more...do continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome update...
geet is so broken n asking where she lacked...what is her fault...
so maaneet had a arranged marriage...poor geet she is so broken...
geet saw maan with a girl next day who is asking when they can get married...so maan is having an extra marital affair...
oh maan is too much he had the guts to tall geet that she was never there with him n he didn't have anything in their home...
well maan got perfect answer that its him who is unfaithful not geet...
but still some where m having a doubt...is what we are seeing is true or not???bcoz they way he reacted after geet accused him for bedding another woman the pain in his voice it is something didn't match with his previous behavior...if its a year he is in relationship then why the pain in maan's voice!!!!
or m over thinking!!!

Edited by CrazyEyes - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Ohh god maan having extra marital affair. Geet is hurt. She wants him out of her life. Hii Dr m jasmine. Newbie..Looking forward to read ur stories. Hope u allow
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Posted: 10 years ago
MAaneet both r blaming each other for their broken relationship.
Geet is feeling low.
Maan is having extra marital affair.
Geet is also ready to divorce maan.

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