MG-SS~The Bliss~Thread-3~UPDATED - Pt 31/ Pg120 / 4th May.......... - Page 20

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Posted: 10 years ago

The Bliss



( For Banner credit goes to my dear Priya )


The simple things of life can be blissful, if you can take the time to enjoy it. There is love in the air, everywhere... you just need to feel it, embrace and enjoy all that life has to offer.

Every moment that is enjoyed, treasured and relished is a store house of memories, that you can draw out, enjoy and smile with love. It is bliss..


Oh sweet bliss how did you find me in the dark with all my troubles

collecting like copper pennies in a fountain,
under pain concrete form,
a flower breaks
through the crack of my once solid shell.

Stay with me bliss ,
never leave me again,
for my need is great and my patience is plentiful.
Oh lessons I need not learn again,
forget where I have been.

Let me walk in the sweet embrace of a Sunday's morn
and not forget it tender kiss of compassion
for God had granted me another day with you.
Hold me in the arms of your unfolding grace
and we will put back all the fallen stars in the sky...


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Note..

This a fiction , all incident , medical terms , professional terms nd places r imaginary ,, plzz don't relate them with reality .


Note... This is a fiction inspired by some facts and incidents from our surroundings . If someone find any resemblance in d title and story line , they r welcome to leave their comments on my page (plzz don't pm me)with d link . I'll try my best not to touch any body's work. Need ur love and support to make it an interesting SS.





Part - 23


Part - 24


It was an alarming thing for Maan that how Geet knew about him nd from where ,, She mention his friends nd their nature ,, she called them mean as well as him ,, how she came to know nd how much she knows ? He never allow anyone to talk about his past life in front of him ,, his past was a close chapter for him nd all ,, even in his family too nobody knew about that nd what had happened with him yrs back ? everything was buried under d durt of time then how she came to know ,, she said she read nd heard about him, but where ,, did she read in any newspaper or did DM told her about him , but DM didn't know about his those so called friends whom Geet was mentioning ,, he became restless nd decided to ask from her .

This was d 1st time that any outer person talked about his past nd specially regarding them ,, who wr d main reason behind his lifeless life nd somewhere he was also who trust them blindly ,, after that incident he never allow any known person near him except his parents , DM, ,,he never open his mouth related to his past nd choose to live a lonely life here only where he lost everything .

Geet entered with d tray of his BF ,, placed that quietly at d side table ,, adjusted bed table near him nd raised his head to have his BF ,, she set d tray in front of him nd he noticed that she brought north indian BF ... aloo paratha with curd nd green sauce ,, he glared at her ,, he gen eat pasta nd muesli in BF but this girl was going against his wishes .

She spread d napkin on his chest covering his shirt , looking now nd then at Maan who was glaring at her .

Maan: I won't eat this ,, who made this BF ? my cook knew what I like to eat ,, call him , i'll order her .

Geet: I told her to make this ,, u eat that everyday ,, this is good for a change ,, have it .

Maan: why u r trying to rule my life ? who r u ?

Geet: nothing for u ,, have ur BF then I have to take mine ,, bcoz of u I missed my mrng coffee.

Maan thought for a sec nd said : i'll but on one condition ,, u have to reply my Q 1st .

Geet: nd what was that ?

Maan: what u know about my past nd how much ?

Geet broke a morsel , dipped that in curd nd brought near his mouth carefully ,, she gestured him to eat but he nodded in a no .

Geet : O ,,blackmailing , humm,, 1st have ur BF then we'll talk mr khurana .

Maan: jo bhi samjho , I won't eat until u won't reply me .

Geet: do u really want to talk about or past ,, I heard u didn't like that .

Maan: I do, but tell me how do u came to know about me ?

Geet: promise me that u'll be co - operative with me .

Maan: reply .

Geet: promise .

Maan huffed glaring at her : I won't eat , if u don't reply .

Geet: I'll tell u , if u promise me .

Maan: I promise , i'll.

Geet: mr khurana I m in same lab where u wr .

Maan looked at her stunned nd mumbled ... u r in C**& * .

Geet: hummm ,, now have it , I replied u .

Maan: what u know about me ?

Geet : hum baad mei baat karenge ,, pahale ye finish karo , u promise .

She gestured him to have that morsel nd he quietly took that staring at her shocked ,, He was eating mechanically nd Geet was feeding him ,, he silently finished d BF like he promise but he wanted to know all d things she knew about him nd he has to stop her not to say anything to DM ,, that cd hurt her nd his parents if they came to know .

On d other side Geet got d chance to talk him regarding his work if he was ok but she was not sure about him how much he wd like to talk , she wanted his help for her work nd for that she had to bring him close to his work which cd pained him .

She was keeping things back when her phone rang nd that was from DM ,, Geet put that on speaker nd brought that near Maan .

Maan: hello DM ,

DM : Maan , hi beta , r u fine , had ur BF or not ? don't trouble Geet nd Adi .

Maan: Ji DM , don't worry , this Dr devil made me to eat aloo paratha nd I took silently ,, happy now .

DM: really , ye to kamaal ho gaya ,, thanks beta ,, I thinks hume kuch din yahan ruk jana chahiye ,, Geet tumhe acche se handle ker legi .

Geet smiled at DM's remark nd he glared at her , showing his big eyes .

Maan: enough DM ,, try to come TM ,, I m missing u .

DM: i'll beta , we all r missing u ,, Geet se bolo baat kare humse .

Maan: ji , ( he gestured her to talk )

Geet : ji DM .

DM: Geet beta , aapko koi prob to nahi ho rahi ?

Geet: nahi DM , plzz aap yahan ki tension matt lo aur family gathering enjoy karo.

DM: thanks beta , it's all bcoz of u ,, I don't know when I'll get d chance to see this lil bundle of joy , thanks a lot ,, Geet if u want something from Delhi then tell me , i'll bring that .

Geet: thanks DM , I don't want anything .

DM : fir hum khud le aayenge , aur aapko lena padega.

Geet smiled : DM , ur blessings r enough for me ,, bas mere liye pray kijiye mera thesis pura ho jaye . ( she knowingly said this to hint Maan nd he looked at her )

DM: sure beta ,, OK , bye nd take care .

Geet Bye DM nd don't worry about ur akdoo pota , he's fine .

Geet was getting a beep of another call so cut d call nd received that that was from Adi ,, Geet replied looking at Maan ,, who gestured her to make him talk .

Geet placed d phone near Maan's ear .

Maan: hello Adi , have u reached there ? how is ur Mother ?

Adi : it took one more hr sir ,I m on d way ,, r u fine sir ?

Maan: OK , i m fine Adi , u nd DM fix a good replacement for my help .

Adi: I m s s sorry sir , but that time it was only Geet ma'am whom I cn trust ,, sir I think I have to inform DM now ,, I feeling bad living u without informing her .

Maan: not now Adi ,, nd if DM call u don't pick d call ,, ok , don't pick d call ,, i'll inform her after few hr nd may be she'll be here TM ,, i'll handle that nd if u want more money then told me , DM send u , OK.

Adi: thanks a lot sir , thanku so much .

Maan: bye Adi, nd inform me after reaching there .

Adi: fine sir.

Maan looked at Geet: humm ,, ho gaya , thanks .

Geet: thanks ,, u r saying me thanks ( she rolled her eyes mocking him)

Maan: I need to talk u Doc .

Geet: same here , if u don't get angry .

Maan: fine ,, sit .

Geet pressed d bell to call d servant , dragged d chair nd sat near him .

Maan: have ur BF .

Geet: don't worry about me ,, u filled my tummy with ur poisonous words.

Maan looked at her ,, he realized that he said her really bad words , but to keep her away he behaved rudely ,, he didn't like to be miserable in front of her nd her touch was disturbing his mind .


Precap --- Maan&Geet's talk ...Maan shocked..



Part - 25


sorry for mistakes ...


Edited by singh24 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
😃
hi Babbie

travelling back today so net on/off hai

kal milti hu😃

Happy Sunday🤗
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome part
Loved it
Maan was annoyed with geet's presence but he didn't have another option so he let her do her work with the help of servant she attended him...maan was feeling her touch she is awakening some feelings in him ...geet gave him back her words made him think how she came to know about him and his friends
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome update . maan ke rude behvr ke baujud geet apni decision se hati nehi ...maan geet ki care kahi na kahi enjoy bhi kar raha hai par uska ego yea manega nehi . apni helpness pe maan frustrated ho raha hai n ISSI ke chlte usne geet ko bhi hurt kiya :( but sherni geet ne toh kya khub sunaya...waah waah !! Maza aagaya ...maan ko uski dose mila . now waiting for next
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Posted: 10 years ago

Donnaa thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago
ye abhi se updating status kyun??!!
aap to off laine chali gaye..
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Posted: 10 years ago
Geet answered him really well
Continue soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
WOW!! beautiful update dear...loved it
singh24 thumbnail
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Posted: 10 years ago


😆😆 Hi Dona...
bada naach rahi ho...😃


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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: singh24



😆😆 Hi Dona...
bada naach rahi ho...😃


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ha aaj fb pe maan ki inni pics dekhi dil garden garden ho gaya hai
maine socha aap off hone wale ho kuch dino k liye...
kal ja rahe ho na ghar??

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