DARK TEMPTATION 2 Updated NEW THREAD & PT 22 on 30-8-2015/ PG 139

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crazydream

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Posted: 10 years ago

#841

part 17

Geet telling the story of their parents how they forgot their bday n so she is mad at them. But I think there is more to it. No one can get this much angry for forgetting the bday.

Even Maan can't digest this information. He will solve the mystery Geet.

Maan having his own chocolate. that was a hot hot part. Loved it. Passion is in the air.

Maan first time going to office.. He now understand little bit that waterer he has, how much hardwork Samrath has to do. Its actually good that he realises the importance of work.

Maan got his fav car without asking. N Samrath taunting him. this was needed as a wake up call..

Can i get the password for 18

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Shalini barman roy

@shalini28

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Posted: 10 years ago

#842

so Maan is slowly realizing the importance of his dad.

hope he gets to know the truth.

On the other hand Maan celebrated Geets budday in their own ways😳

eagerly w8ing for next update

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

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+ 9

Posted: 10 years ago

#843

hi thanks 4 da pm! Fab update! superbly written! Maan shows off his car! Vikram tells him he is so lucky! n explains n taunts! Maan angry! bt Vikram is right! Adi intervenes! Maan sees Geet at the club with a gut n stakes his legal claim! They leave! Maan planned something 4 her bday! he goes to her mansion given by her grand mom! Sizzling passionate celebration! possessive Maan! update soon

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jasika

@jasika08

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Posted: 10 years ago

#844

Awesome update

Maan dad gifted car

Maan friend taunts he changing

Maan and his friends come to disco

Maan saw geet dancing with someone

Maan jealous and take her to his house

Maan celebrate geet birthday

Maaneet passionate moment

Waiting for next update

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CookieMonster

@heycookie

Stunner

+ 12

Posted: 10 years ago

#845

Nice update
finally maan is realising how caring his father is..dats gr8
i hope he'll joing his dad in KC soon..
Geet seems tough nut to crack..she wont change easily.
Update next soon

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6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6

@6n6s6k6i6r6a6n6

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Posted: 10 years ago

#846

God it was so erotic...

Maan jealous to see her with some other man...he also himself now not desiring any other woman...

Maan to thoda bahut samajh raha hai...he still has some human values left in some corner...but Geet she has passed all limits...

awesome update...

thanx for pw...

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leena63

@leena63

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#847

Hello...I was on tour so I couldn't give comments on part-17,if you can give me pw of part-18,pls send

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Manjeet Kaur

@manjeet6

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#848

Part 17
Awesome update
Maan Geet se puchta hai ki agar uske mom dad ki aapas mai itna bonding hai tou wo apne parents se itna rude kyu hai Geet usse batati hai ki jab wo 8yr ki thi tou uske parents uska bd celebrate karna bhul gaye the tabhi se wo apna bd kisi ke saath celebrate nahi karti Maan Geet ke saath uska cake sare karna chahta hai but Geet smacked on his hand and Msk gets his own way to sare his cake
😉
Maan 's feeling is changed towards his father apne papa ke office jaane par usse ye realize hota hai ki uske papa ko apna status banaye rakhne ke liye kitna work karna padta hai
Beautifully written
Loved it 👍🏼

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harshu...

@harshu...

Stunner

Posted: 10 years ago

#849

Superb part .
maan ws happy with his new .
vicky's taunting ws mast .

maaeet's moment ws hot nd passionate .
finally geet got wht she wanted .
waiting for next part .
thnx for pm .

Edited by mskfan - 10 years ago

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jayshu17

@jayshu17

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Posted: 10 years ago

#850

Awesome update!!!Maan gets a new car and he goes to his friends to show his new car...Vikram is jealous and taunting Maan...now he realized slowly the importance of father's value...Maan can't tolerate to see her with another man...the way he made a small set up for her is quite different...he is falling for her...Maaneet are enjoying their day and drown for their passionate moments...Loved it so much..waiting eagerly for the next...Thanks for the PM dear...