DARK TEMPTATION 2 Updated NEW THREAD & PT 22 on 30-8-2015/ PG 139 - Page 70

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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice update !
Geet is still not satisfied !
Maan took full advantage of this situation !
He doesn't allow her to touch him !
He is enjoying seeing her plight !
Maan still playing wid geet !
Geet getting frustated & angry cz of maan !
She gets some guy & takes out her anger on him !
She goes home & gets drunk !
Maan came home find geet alseep & seeing her he aroused !
Waiting for next !
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Posted: 10 years ago
part 11-12
maan and geet both are typical antiques full of ego,big headed D...* and S...*, don't know any boundary in proliferated words they use.
both's parents did proper job, and now they forcibly stuck up with each other.
Maan make the plan and try to make her understand but junglee billi to use hi kat ne chali and akhir mein she realise and agree with him and they started to make physical love with each other.

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Posted: 10 years ago
That is one hottt update. Geet gives in to lust but can't seem to get satisified as she can't have her own way with Maan. Fantastic job as always and looking forward to what is in store next.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Nice update
Maan is making geet irritated
She takes her anger out on other guy but still she is not satisfied
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Posted: 10 years ago
DARK TEMPTATION 2
PART - 16


SUN dawn and set. She slept for whole day and no one disturb her. Curtains widened and her room filled with light beams. Her arms stretched wide. Eyes were struggling to open up. Hairs were tangled and lazyness enveloped her body. Gradually her eyes figure out one human figure. She pushed herself and leaned back at the bed post. One hand waving before her eyes,which irritate her and she slapped with full force on the hand.


"hww,why are you hitting me?",one mild voice hit against her ears and she opened her pupils fully. Sasha were looking at her with amusement.


"you?", She said in disappointment.


Sasha landed a glass of lime juice in her hands and sat next to her."yes me? Kyu kisi or ko expect kar rai thi?" She teased her nudging her softly and she push her away. "what's wrong with you?" she asked and told her that she slept for almost whole day.


"bring my drink." Instead of replying she commands her.


"Geet drink this ok. You still in hangover and demand for more drinks. What happened? Tell me. Is Maan done something?"Sasha scanned her face.


"he is a bas***d. But he dont know me." Geet breath hard.



"what he did?" Sasha asked. But got only silence from her. Geet drink a sip by sip. "ohk so he is out of control and you failed to tame him right?" Sasha directly hit on her nerve.


"shut up.",She hissed in anger. "he think he is ruling me. Just once i get him fully then i wont allow him to lay even his finger on me." Geet frowned and confessed before her.



"so you both...?" even before she completes Geet added.


"twice."


"what twice?" she was amused. "but Geet you never go for a same man." She was confused.


"because that bas***d play very smartly. Till i dont used him,i have to go for him. He hit my ego and i wont spare him. " Geet's voice is so hard. She stand crossing her arms on her chest and staring outside.


"any plans?" Sasha asked.


Geet smiled evil." sasha arrange stuff for tognigh." She was so contend now. Even Sasha was amused and scared to from her. She never understand what exactly running in her mind at several times. Geet was calm and composed and went to fresh n up.


Sasha obliged and arranged one bed warmer for her. Geet went with her date in Hotel. "excuse me sir you parked your car in wrong direction." Guard came and informed them to which he got glare from Geet.

"i will be back till hen you wait in room." He said and escaped.


Geet moving towards the way room but waiter stopped her. "excuse me mam please from this way. Our cleaning staff just washed the floor so here is slippery. So can lead from that way." he guided her and she walked away from the party hall side,where one party is going in full pace. Loud music and noise of the crowd. Geet walking from the corridor,when Maan met her there. He was came outside to answer his call. Both saw each other. Maan walked to her.



"you there?"he locked her between his arms and wall behind.


"again we are at same place. But dont come in way this time." She cautioned. "by the way you too here..."


He dont allowed her to complete. "we are here to celebrate Adi's b'day. This party is for him. By the way where is he." he refer and asked about her mate for tonight,glancing all around.


"he is coming." She was angry for his foolish behaviour but dont showed to him.


Maan leaned over her face. Glancing in her eyes like he trying to peep inside. Next is what she felt was his warm lips on her. Start with a simple peck but leads to passionate kiss. He only left her when he sucked all air from her lungs.


"Maan..." Adi calls him.


Maan caress her face with his fingers tips and left. Meanwhile her need for tonight came there and she moved with him to their room.



One week passed and none of them approched each other. Geet was holding herself for right time and Maan don't want to get her till she is full ready to submitt herself so he to behave indifferent. He knows very well once he give himself to her,she threw him to like her other bed warmers,so he to keeping himself in control.


Sunny morning and whole mansion lightened with it rays. Maan called his servant but got no reply so he slipped out of his bed and came down. His step moving towards kitchen area. He want water but his thirst raised seeing his seductress there and only in long top covring only her upper thigh. His eyes raking over her beautiful legs. Without his acknowledge groan escaped from his mouth.


Geet was so engrossed in her work. Some strings flowing fron her bun and when she moving her ass dancing in perfect rythem. He found her more attractive while struggling with her strings. Disturbing her work by distracting her. He smirked and went near her. Maan give a small bite on her delicate neck to grab her attention. His stubble grazed her lobes and she too smirk evil.


"just stay away. I am busy." She clearly instruct but Maan ignored her words and wrapped her from backside.



"you in kitchen? I think i am in effect of my hangover." he was sarcastic and in return got spoon on his nose whic leave some chocolate on his nose tip. "Geet..." his pupil widened. "what are you doing? As far i knew you dont know anything to cook. Your uncle told me." Maan added quickly and showed his doubt and curiosity both at the time.



Geet rotates. "he is right. I don't know anything. But i know how to bake cake and that's what i am doing." She explained.



"you are crazy." he laughed and she glared him. "no i mean first you want to eat cake early morning and also stressing yourself. Just command the cook and he do it. Why giving tension to your beautiful hands." Maan took and kissed on her soft palm. Geet smiled wicked and hit his nose with her index finger of right hand. Maan felt pain but seeing her licking the same chocolate syrup which was spread on his nose,he forgot everything. Her small gestures are so seducing that aroused him badly. His hardess struggling with his pants and stressing him.


Geet hold his arms and flinched off to free herself from his arm cage. "i only eat my b'day cake which is cook by me." She revealed and Maan knotted.


"today is your b'day? Then why you dont tell me?" He asked in a exicted voice.


"why so? Tume mera insurance karwana hai? Idiot. Dont behave like a good lovong husband. We are partners okay." she replied harshly. "and by the way what a stupid que is? Definitely if i am exist in this world then i was born some day and that day is today. What so spl in that." She replied and turned him mute. He was staring her silently.


Geet involved in her work again when her phone buzzed. Her hands were messy so she cant answer the call. "can you pick up? Its might be from my Uncle or Sasha." Geet asked from Maan to ans the call. She knew only two person exist who can call to wish her. Who knows about her b'day."



Maan who was staring her silently answer her phone. It was Sunjay on line. Hearing Maan he asked about his well being first, then show his desire to talk to Geet. Maan helped Geet in answering the call. He put it on the speaker so she call communicate. "Happy B'day beta." He wished her but as usual she replied rudely.


"pls dont show your fake concern. If you are so much care about me then you will not threw me in this marriage drama. You are the one who forced me to live with Maan." Geet as usual snapping and cursing her uncle. Maan hearing her silently. She sounds like him the way he talked to his step father.


"i only did what i found good for you." Sunjay said politely.


"oh really,thats why you trapped in that contract. But mind it,no contract can stops me to live my life. After one year both of will not force me to carry on this drama. I set free after that." Geet burst.


"i care for you beta. But right now you will not understand. Do what you want and stay happy. God bless you beta." he blessed her and cut the calls. Dont want want spoil her mood sply on her b'day.



Maan put her phone on platform and moved towards fridge. He took one water bottle for which he came there. He took his water bottle and settled on the dinning chair. Her words echoing in his ears. The way she beaved just now disturbs him. He was glancing at the bottle,how dews falling from neck to bottom. Images of his last b'day with his mother flashes. But it doesnt like that afterward the celebration stopped. Every year Samarth not only wished him but celebrate the day in a grand way. No matters how rudly and badly he treated him but Samarth never skipped his b'day celebration.



He was so lost when Geet joined him. He scanned her angry face. "calm down or else your cake to burst like you." he tried to lighten the air.


Geet gave him a deadly glare. " save your pathetic jokes for your bimbos ok. I was baking cake at the age of 8" she revealed.



His pupil widened. "at such a tender age. I was only troubling my mother." he revealed.


"mom...huhh... My mom and dad were the most busiest couple on the world. They dont had a time." She told and her voice is harsh and rude.


"then who teach you?" Maan's eyes narrowed. He wants to read her thoughts.


"my cook who else." she sipped water from the same bottle.


"you missed your parents?" He asked softly.



"not very much. I have no complaints with both. They fullfill my all demands. They earn money for me,which is necessary for our life. My parents love each other so much,i just dont understand cant they bored seeing each other faces all the time. My mother most idle wife on earth always stands for my father and support him in every matter. That's why she joined bussiness to help him. Ahhh this love drama. Atleast no one can accept this kind of stupidity from me. I dont want to be a door mat of some man's feet." She felt disgust about all the emotions and feelings her parents share.


Maan was so shocked on her thoughts. He never accept Samarth because some where his mind not ready to accept him as he is his step father. But he dont get why Geet felt so low for her parents. They were her biological parents still she dont love them. But Maan never ever snap his mom. He still miss her and love her. "are you upset with them for any reason? I mean they were your real parents not step like my dad." Maan glanced in her eyes.



"hello don't get emotional okay. I am not an unwanted child who deprived from love and affection. As i told they do everything for me. Its just i cant be like my mom,which my uncle expecting from me. He wants me to behave like her. She was an ideal wife and daughter in law. But why should i? Its my life and i want to live in my way. No one can rule me. I am Geet Handa,born to rule not to become foot mat of some man." Geet is very clear and made it clear to Maan even.

NOTE : GUYS I ALREADY CLEARED IN INTRODUCTION HOW'S MAANEET CHARACTER IN THIS FF. THOSE WHO ARE NOT COMFORTABLE KINDLY LEAVE READING THIS FF PLEASE RATHER THEN GIVING THEIR EXPERTISE
Edited by richa_kapoor - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
geet is really rude but i m amased seeing maan feeling bad at geet's words wasnt he the same
but why do geet hate her parents so much??
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome update. If Geet's parents were ideal parents than what is the reason of Geet's behaviour and lifestyle.
Geet is baking cake for her birthday. You updated this part on if.
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Posted: 10 years ago


Geet's ego hurt very badly by Maan's ignorance...how can he go to another woman after sleeping with her...that is her ego...and she is waiting for the day she take revenge on him...

she is planning to use and dump him same way as he did...

so the day is her b'day and she eats cake cooked by herself...

her mother was perfect house-wife but what about her father...was he also perfect husband...why Geet thinks that being a good wife or in love with ur husband means being a door mat...

very interesting update...

thanx for pm...



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Posted: 10 years ago
what is the reason of geet's rude behavior , maan felt bad for her words
nice update thank u
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Posted: 10 years ago
Excellent Update

Geet is still angry that Maan used her and certainly it hit her ego , basically she is angry because he did not allow her to touch him right
Geet wants a chance where she can get Maan while Maan is controlling himself as he knows if he allow Geet to get her way she will use him and dump him like her other bed warmers but now I'm little confuse with does he not want Geet to dump him , does he always want to come back to her .
Maan learning about Geet's birthday but she is not excited at all and here Maan thinks that his step dad always throws a party for him .
Geet tells Maan that she will never be like her mother that only loved one man her husband but she seems to dislike them
I'm sure something happened to her in her past that she feels her parents love for each was wrong .
while Maan loved his mum and still misses her .

It almost seems like Maan wants to get to know about Geet more
I'm not sure as yet but I get the feeling that he wants Geet to want and need him only

Edited by taahir004 - 10 years ago

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