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singh24

@singh24

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Posted: 10 years ago

#51

🤗 Hi dear...

good idea..

a big hug to u ...

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Infinity.

@Infinity.

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#52

@Tanya Di SUPERB IDEA 👍🏼 Thank You, Really Appreciate it👏
Intro were Amzing...hahhah Geet ask maan to be her fake lover infront of her dad ..and he is Don😆😆 MSK to gaya 🤣

Part 1(Mitu)

Hillarious Update!!! ⭐️

"My Dad generally kidnapped all high profile men's"😆🤣
Just Can't stop laughing on maan's reaction 😆 Geet is one masterpiece 🤣

@Sanju Jaldi post karna next part..Can't wait to read more n moreee... and ofcourse urs first work 😉😆

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nishamna

@nishamna

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+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#53

It's awesome. So geet was trying to stop that marriage which her father fixed but fortunately or unfortunately she end with a story in which maan is her love interest. Chary on the cake geet's father get happy as msk is a very reputed personality. Now I am wondering will maan help her.

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Taahir

@taahir004

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+ 10

Posted: 10 years ago

#54

My Apologies As I Really Was Unable To Comment From Part1
And When I Again Logged Onto IF Parts2 & 3 Were Already Up .

In part 1 Geet tells Maan that he always helped Pinky so this time too he needs to help her and she blurts out that he has to pretend to be her boyfriend so that her father does not get her married .

In part 2 Geet sits with her father and speaks and he tells her about his choice as he wants her future secured and again out of nervousness
she blurts out that she is already in love with her boss Maan Singh Khurana and her father is also happy because Maan is a business man , a rich man and a decent man .
I liked the history about Geet's parents

Part 3

Geet goes to Maan but there he is super angry and Geet apologies and tells him that she will tell her father it was a lie but Geet has seen something in Maan's eyes and now she wonders if he loves her at the same time her dad phones her and says he knows that she was lying to him so now he is going to fix the marriage with his friends son

All Updates Were Brilliant And The Flow Of The Story With The Concept Is Just Marvelous

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Heema Somani

@heemasomani

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#55

Part - 2

Amazing part

geet's father has fixed her wedding with a don's son

geet blurts out that she is in love with maan singh khuraana

well geet's father likes maan as he is great businessman and a responsible man

well who would not like msk

geet's father wants to meet maan

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Mitu

@Mituag

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+ 6

Posted: 10 years ago

#56

Part 4

Pinky fumed to see Geet as madam is peacefully sleeping in her cabin after creating a mess in their life, here Maan Khurana turned out be disaster for all employees and many had celebrated their last day as Khurana employees but who is responsible of all this just sleeping and murmuring furiously something in dream.

Geet told pinky everything from the time of her lie to Maan's morning meeting and felt light. The poor had taken off her burden.

"Geet !! Utte... kya shaadi shaadi badbada rahi hai... pagal hu gayi" pinky shook her hard from shoulder and pulled her back to the earth.

Geet almost fall down from her chair and shouted ... "bachaoo.. bachoo" pinky rilled her eye to see her cartoon friend.

"I don't understand what Dadimaa found in her and made her a permanent employe and Maan's sir assistant..." pinky murmured but Geet is still in trance and spoke in lazy voice... "oyee mai tu road per thi... or meri shaadi usse ulle ke pathe se..."

"Madam hosh mai aayie ... you are such a pain in neck Geet... Maan sir is out of control..." but Geet is all lost to hear pinky's blabbering.

"Yupieee.. heyy baba jii thanku thanku... that was just a nightmare ok.. ok ... daymare types... but thank u haa.. baba jii... I wouldn't marry to that ullunka patha.. khota kahi kaa" Geet supernatural meeting made pinky groaned.

"Geettt"

"Kya hai.. pinky.. !!! Tune Maan sir ka jhoota pani piya hai kya" she whined and twisted her lips.

"Go and talk with Maan sir.., before he fired whole branch of kc today... the score is 8 in one hour" pinky widen her eye, so is Geet.

"Hey baba jii.. !!! Ye bhi naa... faltu ke kaam kara lu.., pata nahi... Dad ke saath meeting ka kya socha unhune..." She pouted and decided to go in his den... once again.

*****

Mitu

Edited by -Mitu- - 10 years ago

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Heema Somani

@heemasomani

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Posted: 10 years ago

#57

Part - 3

geet goes to meet maan

maan is angry on geet

geet tells that she will tell everything to her father and maan gets more angry

geet saw something in maan's eyes and she thinks it might be possible that maan loves her

geet's dad calls her and tells her that he has fixed her marriage as he came to know about her lies

waiting to read more

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Ruchita

@shruthiruchs

Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

#58

Dis is really intresting idea n concept

Start itself is really dhamakedaar

Geet exactly said her dad broke d bomb for her marriage

N forwarded it to maan lollzzz

Don ahaaan dats quitr intresting never read something like dis

Part 1 . Its really funny lollz

Geet khud toh phas gayi maan ko bhi phasa diya

N abv all dat itne funny dialogues lollzz

Goshhh still talks with babaji ab toh babaji hi maan ko bachaye lollz n upar se dhamki ahaaan bade logo ko kidnap

Part 2. So finally i get something to read frm sanjana i ve seen n read her conments always wanted her to write

N here she has proved dat she can make a great writer

She connected it so well with d previous part

No one can say dis her first try

Given a base to all d happenings

Wat dis idea makes it realky intresting is since all d part are written by different writers u ll b always surprised

Cant expect something in particular coz a single part changes d genre

N it really gives a different flavour n makes it exciting for d readers n writers as well kudos to tanya for dis idea

N abt d 2nd part superb dis shows all abt d father daughter relation

Even if he is a don he wants everything perfect for his daughter n secure her future

But geet is also right at her point she cant live all her life in fear

Really feel sad for her she was deprived of her mothers love at such a small age

Admire her dat she has stood on her onself without taking any favours

Ooppss but is gadbad aur confusion mein maan ko phasa diya lollz

But seems like her dad is really happy

N who wont get impressed with Maan he seriously us a gem of a person

Part 3 . Makes me feel dis can end soon plz i dnt want dat

soo maan already has some feelings towards her

But he is nt ready to admit it n feels bad dat she is using him according toh her own wishes

Confession must b really intresting

Ooppss do i sense danger her father got to knw abt her lie

Ab kya hoga

excited to read further

Great part

Curious if maan ll save her ab kya hoga

Great effort guyss

Keep rocking

All d writers are awesome

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InkedImagination

@Queen0fDarkness

Dazzler

+ 13

Posted: 10 years ago

#59

PART 5 TAKEN - Julie

Please don't post on thread as soon as you've typed. Read what is to be done before posting.

I've cleared and made things a little easier for readers/participating members.

Edited by Jannat-Fictions - 10 years ago

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Mitu

@Mituag

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 10 years ago

#60

Posted part 4 at page 9 taslima add in index

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