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Julie

@4ever4love

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#41

brilliant idea.

brilliant introduction.

First part was also well written and moved the story along nicely.

I have never written a story though I have tried a few times. The ideas are always in my head but when I try to write it out, I fail miserably.

I am tempted to try here.

So, maybe it is time. Please give me a slot number. can u PM me the slot number?

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Julie

@4ever4love

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#42

Part 2 was great. We did need some history and background of the characters.

Also I am shocked the writer for part 2 has never written anything before. You did an amazing job! I never would have guessed this was your first piece of writing.

This is giving me some courage to try writing myself now.

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Kawan

@Kawan

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#43

PART2
loved it..

geet father wanted her to get married her to freind son so that her future will be secure..
so in order to cancel the wedding she told him her fake love story..
nd that too with maan singh khurnana.

his father is probaly very happt to notice her tension..
wanting to meet him as soon as possible..

awesome update

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POOJA

@pj2012

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#44

Part Three

With apprehensive fingers she tapped on his cabin door, and when there was no response she squeezed herself inside his cabin, by opening the door a bit.

"Maan Sir?"😕 she squeaked feeling all nervous.

The room was all dark and silent.

And the chatterbox that she was began her chattar-pattar even before finding anyone.

"Sir, I know, I should have asked you first...par main kya karti...woh mere pappa ne achanak se mujh par shaadi ka bomb daal diya ... and I didnt know what to say. Sir, main darr gayi kahin...kahin..."

"K-A-H-I-N😡 K-Y-A??? CHUP BILKUL CHUP😡"

She shuddered feeling his breath on her even from a distance. She didn't dare to turn back, as she knew his anger.Her boss is angry, when is he not. But she was sure like every other time, this time also shell succeed in calming him down.

"Sir, aap bahut naraaz hai na? Hey Babaji...main bhi na...Sorry she pouted.

"Shut UP!!"😡

She shivered hearing his harsh sound and saw his red eyes boring into her meek ones.

"Waht do you think of yourself? And what do you think of me? I am your boss, not your toy...Tumahri har bewakufi ko maine maaf kiya ... jab ki Maan Singh Khurana apne aap ki bhi galti nahi maaf karta ... but ab paani sar ke upar ho gaya hai...I will not forgive you this time."

Her eyes tear up ... not because she was hurt, but strangely she somehow felt his hurt.

She knew he was hiding something ... that made him this brute businessman and a human being.

"Sir, aap chinta mat kijiye, main apne Pappa se kah doongi that it was all a lie. And that I am ready to marry anyone he chooses. Please apne aap ko taqleef mat dijiye."

He pounced on her, clawing into both her arms,

"Kyun ... tumhe kya farak padta hai ... tum ladkiyaan sirf dard de sakti ho ... apne inn aansooon se hame bewakoof bana sakti ho. You are no different Geet. Jabse aayi ho...mujhe pareshaan karne ke sivaye kuch nahi kiya... Khilona samajh kar rakha he mujhe...Kabhi shaadi karni hai...kabhi nahi...I HATE YOU. Chali jao yahaan se."

And he pushed her...but before that she saw something in his eyes that pulled the strings of her heart...

She closed the door silently and left the office...

She walked down the road ... strangely, smiling to herself😳... What was happening to her ...

"Jo maine Maan sir ki aankhon main dekha ... kya woh mujshe pyaar karte hain? Then why was was he so angry before? Babaji yeh aadmi ek paheli hai😡 par dil ke bahut acche hain tabhi toh har musibat main mujhe bachate hain ... har mod par hum ek doosre se aa takraate hain ... Yeh mujhe kya ho raha hain?😕 Kya main Maan sir se pyaar..

Suddenly her phone rings, and it is her father...

"Geet mujhe sab pata chal gaya hai. You were lying to me. I am coming there to bring you back home. Your marriage is fixed, and it is going to be with the son of my friend."

She gasped in horror, and the phone slipped from her hand.

-o0o-

Edited by pj2012 - 10 years ago

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Dona

@Donnaa

Trailblazer

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#45

awesome idea tania di

prologue n part 2

hilarious...

geet is calling maan bacha 😆

the MSK vs The Don lol maza aayega...

maan is not taking geet's word seriosly about her dad being don 😆

geet dhamki nahi chetavni de rahi hai how sweet of her 🤣

geet remembering how she dragged maaan's name in this mess...

her father fixed her marriage with his friend's son for fer secure future...

n in order to avoid it she blurted out she in in love...n at that exact moment maan's calln voila 😆

a bigg MU geet dad thought maan is geet's lover 😆

ab kya hoga 😆

Edited by CrazyEyes - 10 years ago

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priya

@priya111111

Stunner

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#46

nice concept.

its so hillarious. maan ki dialogue he is maan singh khurana the great businessmen and geet's dialogue her father is don who kidnaps bade log😆😆😆poor maan ab kaha phass gaya. geet tho bohut ache se maan ko phasadiya😆

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Mitu

@Mituag

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 10 years ago

#47

Originally posted by: CrazyEyes
awesome idea tania di
prologue n part 2
hilarious...
geet is calling maan bacha 😆
the MSK vs The Don lol maza aayega...
maan is not taking geet's word seriosly about her dad being don 😆
geet dhamki nahi chetavni de rahi hai how sweet of her🤣
geet remembering how she dragged maaan's name in this mess...
her father fixed her marriage with his friend's son for fer secure future...
n in order to avoid it she blurted out she in in love...n at that exact moment maan's calln voila😆
a bigg MU geet dad thought maan is geet's lover😆
ab kya hoga😆

Hehheheh chatavani bhi uski .., jo blunder kudh uska kiya hua hai
And here bossing over maan
Sach mai don ki beti 🤣

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Mitu

@Mituag

Rocker

+ 6

Posted: 10 years ago

#48

Originally posted by: priya111111
nice concept.
its so hillarious. maan ki dialogue he is maan singh khurana the great businessmen and geet's dialogue her father is don who kidnaps bade log😆😆😆poor maan ab kaha phass gaya. geet tho bohut ache se maan ko phasadiya😆

Maanshocked and Geet rocked 🤣
Mai jaldi mai thi warna ... ek du dialogue or add karti aise hii 😆

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Dona

@Donnaa

Trailblazer

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#49

Originally posted by: -Mitu-

Maanshocked and Geet rocked 🤣
Mai jaldi mai thi warna ... ek du dialogue or add karti aise hii 😆

baad me edit kar deti na 😆

mast line hai maan shocked n geet rocked 🤣

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nishamna

@nishamna

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#50

It's amazing concept. N I am loving it. The most interesting part of this story is that each part will be written by different writers. Geet wants maan play her lover as she blurted out in front of her father that maan is her lover. Maan is only glaring her . but when geet said her father is a don than maan got more angry . I am very exited to read next.

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