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Sonia KN

@Sonia.KN

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Posted: 10 years ago

#341

Its lovely Taahir ...Maan is in relationship with a girl for 5 months...he has a girlfriend...Rudra such a person ek taraf betiya dusri taraf Geet's lv interst ko khtam kerne ka keh raha hai lol ......lovely ur narration is awesome ...simply awesome.. ..language is really nice n perfect loved it dear

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Madhuri

@Madhuri53

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Posted: 10 years ago

#342

part 12 - Jannat-Fictions

I liked this part...glad that, for time being, vivaan;'s problem is solved...seems he will be back again...liked that he did not want any revenge or kept any vengeance on geet...maan saw geet hugging vivaan and assumed he could be her boyfriend...but he did not say anything...

so now her moti bua is in coming...geet hates her b'coss of her taunting for her mother and keeps her marriage issue... maan heard her one sided teletalk why her mother left but again he kept quite and impressed with her talking confidently

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Madhuri

@Madhuri53

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Posted: 10 years ago

#343

part 13 - taahir004

lovely update...twist pe twist...one maan has girlfriend but he don't want to rush in any relationship...and on the other side rudr threatened her to break off his love relationship with maan or he will kill him...

by lying geet was saved from Sameer but she pushed maan in trouble from rudr..

now she has no alternative to break off her fake love relationship...

geet is in real mess...hope she will talk to maan about this...

very well written taahir...for the first timer it was very good...keep it up

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Madhuri

@Madhuri53

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Posted: 10 years ago

#344

part 14 - idunno

so maan don't have any feelings for her but still he was loyal to her and wished to talk about get's problem...

sam want maan only for her impending success...she only using him for name & fame...maan will be more broken if he comes to know...in all this he still was thinking about geet & her problems...

dadi was not happy to learn about sam coming to India...she wants geet as her bahu..

geet is really in a big problem...lets see how she will solve this problem..

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Taahir

@taahir004

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Posted: 10 years ago

#345

Part 14

Brilliant and Lovely Update

Wow such an insight to Maan , so its clear that he is a man of principal however he is confused about his feelings but I'm sure he work through that .
Daadima really likes Geet so maybe that is also the reason she helped her to get Maan as a fake BF , maybe by doing this both will eventually realize their feelings .
and its clear Daadima does not approve of Sam ...now that great right .
Maan thinking again about Geet and Vivaan and their comfort level
I'm hoping that Maan can ask Geet directly but again he also does not trust her but likes her when she at the office because she tough and good at whatever she does .
I also do think Geet speaking to Maan this time first before she even speaks to her father maybe he can come up with a solution .
Geet also knows Rudra is a close friend of her father but she does not realize its about his son also and it simply seems that Rudra wants revenge for the rejection maybe that is the reason he approached her .
I really enjoyed your update it was fantastic

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Krupa

@idunno

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Posted: 10 years ago

#346

Originally posted by: Madhuri53
part 14 - idunno
so maan don't have any feelings for her but still he was loyal to her and wished to talk about get's problem...

sam want maan only for her impending success...she only using him for name & fame...maan will be more broken if he comes to know...in all this he still was thinking about geet & her problems...

dadi was not happy to learn about sam coming to India...she wants geet as her bahu..

geet is really in a big problem...lets see how she will solve this problem..

Thanks for comment

Edited by idunno - 10 years ago

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Krupa

@idunno

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Posted: 10 years ago

#347

Originally posted by: taahir004
Part 14

Brilliant and Lovely Update

Wow such an insight to Maan , so its clear that he is a man of principal however he is confused about his feelings but I'm sure he work through that .
Daadima really likes Geet so maybe that is also the reason she helped her to get Maan as a fake BF , maybe by doing this both will eventually realize their feelings .
and its clear Daadima does not approve of Sam ...now that great right .
Maan thinking again about Geet and Vivaan and their comfort level
I'm hoping that Maan can ask Geet directly but again he also does not trust her but likes her when she at the office because she tough and good at whatever she does .
I also do think Geet speaking to Maan this time first before she even speaks to her father maybe he can come up with a solution .
Geet also knows Rudra is a close friend of her father but she does not realize its about his son also and it simply seems that Rudra wants revenge for the rejection maybe that is the reason he approached her .
I really enjoyed your update it was fantastic

Thanks Tahir your comment is fantastic and your update was inspiration to write part 14, so I salute you for giving such a nice twist to story, this is my very first attempt to write something and was not confidant about that but your comment has given me strength to write further, keep on inspiring like this and thanks once again for your best comment.

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BelleFilleDD

@BelleFilleDD

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Posted: 10 years ago

#348

Part 13

Omg Maam has a steady gf for last five months 😲

Rudra threatened Geet to end her so called love story with Maan otherwise he will bring an and to Maan Singh Khurana😲 another shock !

wow loved both twists

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BelleFilleDD

@BelleFilleDD

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Posted: 10 years ago

#349

Part 14

Maan is involved in relations but not like serious ways . Here coming of Samara puts Maan in thinking that he definitely likes her but Geet's face popping up every now and then😆

Geet too perplexed again she is in neck deep trouble stuck between extreme situations . Nice part 😊😊