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nish285

@nish285

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Posted: 10 years ago

#201

oh my god dis s getting so amazing...!!!!!...part 8 was wonderful...!!!!! its wonderful to see how the story is getting tagged along...!!!dis s so much fun...,..
Lynn...the update was very well written...and v have our bad guy vIvaan here...!!!!...since you made him the bad guy ...I am excited to see wat he does as a villain. ..!!!!..I actually had nt expected vIvaan s entry as the bad guy...but villain always makes the entry at the climax...!!!!so that has created so much anticipation as to what would be happen... .and geet ...guilt is another thing added to her stress list now...!!!!!...poor soul...!!!and the show begins.
I am awaiting the meeting in the next update...!!!!!!!

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Heema Somani

@heemasomani

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#202

Part - 8

Vivaan and rudr are planning to take revenge from handas

geet feels bad to involve dadimaa and maan into this

maan is little bit nervous

waiting for sameer handa and maan's meeting

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nadia khan

@nakh5683

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#203

lovely update there is an old saying jaisa baap waisa beta vivaan may not be a don but he is exactly like his dad ruthless selfish he wants to teach geet a lesson for rejecting him bhai aakhir baat ego ki jo hai aur yahan rudra wants to take revenge with both father daughter on the other hand msk is nervous THE MSK IS NERVOUS OMG!!!!!!!!!!😲 wow ye to headlines honi chahiye news paper ki geet tells him to calm down where she asusual gets his glare lets see how their meeting turns out to be

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Karamjeet Kaur

@karamjeet

Dazzler

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#204

Superbbb updates...
Dadi plan is Outstanding...
loved d way geet ignored Maan...& he is restless...
part:8 R u sure vivi is good one in his family ...i feel he is Egoistic & Attitudy ...He didn't liked Geet rejected him...
Maan is nervous...
Excited 4 next part...
Continue soon...& make a Big update next time it's too short dear...

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DimaagKaKeeda

@DimaagKaKeeda

Sparkler

+ 5

Posted: 10 years ago

#205

Part 8

So Vivaan is the bad guy now. He and his dad are going to plan something to take revenge for the insult Handas did by rejecting Vivaan.

Geet is in guilt for lying to her dad and dragging Maan and dadima into this mess.

Maan is restless as well as he is still clueless why he has landed himself in this problem in the first place.

Also Sameer Handa has finally come to meet Maan. Lets see what is coming next.

Updates are getting interesting.

-Sanjana!

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InkedImagination

@Queen0fDarkness

Dazzler

+ 13

Posted: 10 years ago

#206

Hey Nish,

Part 7 was brilliantly written, I liked this part and loved the bonding you have shown here of Geet and his dadima.

So happy you've shown their characters as they are. 😳

Interesting that Maan has quickly agreed when she'd revealed as to why she needs help.

Enjoyed this part. 😃

Edited by Jannat-Fictions - 10 years ago

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InkedImagination

@Queen0fDarkness

Dazzler

+ 13

Posted: 10 years ago

#207

Part 8

Firstly being a new writer, I am pleased that you've participated and it's brilliantly written. You should really consider writing your own story. Even writing one shots as a starting would be great plus Geet Forum will have more writers.

Aww Lynn you made Vivaan bad 😒 😆

Kinda confusing as Geet mentioned in the previous update that Vivaan is unlike his father.

Maan Singh Khurana tensed with the meeting of her father, or is he tensed for some other reason.

Sameera and Maan's face to face, wonder what's going to be coming in the next part.

Edited by Jannat-Fictions - 10 years ago

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...RIDDHIMA...

@...RIDDHIMA...

Inactive

Posted: 10 years ago

#208

Part 7 &8

Wah dadima

Her plan worked :P

By ignoring geet made maan tensed :P

N now maans concern made him to act her bf :P

Lolzzz

Well rudra n his son would create huge prob now :O

Both r also feeling insulted by rejection :|

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fabiyamg

@fabiyamg

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#209

fab update geet giving maan a hard time , she gives perfect answers to maan ,omg geet and shasha friends ye to miracle ho gya 😆 hope dadima help geet in how to tackle maan