MG- Anmay-The Unbreakable- LAST Chapter Pg53 (30/09/2017)*NEW*

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Taahir

@taahir004

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Posted: 10 years ago

#61

Fabulous and Energetic Update

Arjun interrogating Raghu , while Maan thinks about Geet and she too
tells her mother she'll only marry Maan .
but Maan knows he has to concentrate on his missions to clear up the crimes as much as possible .
but now how did he get caught , hope he can save the kids and still get the crimnals

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nadia khan

@nakh5683

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Posted: 10 years ago

#62

awesome update so anmay will strike again tonight adi is worried for his son but saving innocent lives r far more imp for them everyone r so happy in their lives that they have stopped caring abt others but maan wants save them by being anmay everyone in maans team has lost someone is fighting against injustice no matter how hard it is arjun hated to be dominated he was a terror and blackmailed goon to spill or arjun wont leave his family he wanted to know who was the mastermind behind all the killing of innocent lives a new guy is recruited in maans team but he needs to be tested as trusting someone new is not easy maan was thinking abt geet he was scared of the new dream that was developing in his heart geet is dreaming and wising to marry maan but her mom is not sure geet was creating new sensation in maan which he was not sure he should feel as his life is unpredictable arjun finally made goons talk whereas maan had fallen in love but for her sake he choose to leave her he prayed to be with her everything was going as planned when he was attacked waiting for more

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kashish

@kashishk

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Posted: 10 years ago

#63

Hello guys, To be honest, this is one of the toughest story for me, I am not much into this genre writing wise as you can from my various work, so I am giving it my best go and it takes me time, thus please bear with me.

Here goes the teaser, I will give you all the next chapter as soon as it is done. Although I want you all to know, I will give short chapters, but with less gap.

Here goes the next chapter teaser:

Arjun looked at the kids and asked again, "who has saved you?

"Sir, he was an angel," a kid said with his face shining.

"But can you tell us anything so we can reward him?" Arjun asked them politely.

"No sir, they were wearing masks" the kids shook their head because they didn't know anything and they didn't understand much their actions. "But sir, angel was hurt, the bad goon had hit him with rose, angel was bleeding," he thought sadly.

Arjun's sharp mind caught the unseen by other, his mind took that hint.

Is Maan fine? And is he going to be caught?

So, what do you think guys? Leave in comments and press like button.

Loads of love<333

Kashish

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GBR

@bhanu_rekhag

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Posted: 10 years ago

#64

Awesome teaser. .good that mission is successful

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Krupa

@idunno

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Posted: 10 years ago

#65

oh! so mission is successful but maan is hurt and Arjun knows about maan and think him to be caught?

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deep002

@deep002

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Posted: 10 years ago

#66

wonderful update, lovely teaser dear

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chiki143

@chiki143

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#67

The dark knight will strike again 😉. Very nicely written. They all have suffered so much in thepast that they r ready to sacrifice their present endangering their own future. Wonderfully written dear. Slight insight into the pasts and present is very niuce. Everyone is a gem of their oiwn I suppise. Even arjun. In all these where will geet stand. Sheis a fresh breeze in maan's life but will he allow her? Not only the anmay but also now geet and arjun are puzzling me esp with the teaser.. but its awesome dear. Would be waiting for more ⭐️

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Hanishadevi

@Hanishadevi

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Posted: 10 years ago

#68

Nice tsr... Can't wait fr update...

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Taahir

@taahir004

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Posted: 10 years ago

#69

Fabulous Update

Maan decides to stay away from Geet for her own safety while Geet feels like this is the last time she is seeing Maan .
I'm just hoping that Anmay's true face is not revealed and also maybe Adi can get there before the cops come to save our Anmay