CHURA LIYA HAI TUMNE JO DIL KO (4) TEASER pg 128, new thread link pg1 - Page 104

lovely funny update i couldnt stop laughing it was so funny ful of confusions kon kisse ke chakkar mein hai kuch pata hi nahi chal raha hai maan proposes to her but jhalli geet ismein bhi grammatical mistakes nikalne lagi aur maan is bada dhakkan koi hoga nahi he is furious as she is trying to correct him and challenges her to give a better proposal than him aur geet pehle 2 states dekhe ke propose karne wali thi phir shurur iska doctor doctor ka khel thank god real ki dctor nahi hai ye geet dadi ko awaz laga rahi thi by darling maan ka phir self appreciation ye phir shuru hogaya but dil ke armaan aason mein beh gaye bechara just stomped out 2 states nahi dekhne diya geet ko geet cribbing taking doggie adis help making him more jealous ab msk ki help kase legi msk ne hi thi challenge kiya hai sasha is tired of male species she likes to work at kc as mk respects her but ye zyada der nahi raha maan is burning with jealousy whereas adi ne situation ka poora fyada hutaya by writing the worst proposal ever maan ko khud se geet s zyada pyar hai maan planning revenge for adi whereas maan wore glasses to woo geet par andhere ke wajah se sab ulta adi sat next to sasha aur apna proposal suna diya aur pit gaya 🤣 maan ne pinky ko geet samaj ke hand kiss kar diya whereas geet thought maan loves pinky haaye adi ka kay hoga ab geet will help adi getting pinky as she cant let adi sacrifice his love for his friendship hayyeee itna confusion 😕

Ch:2 - Aww.. the end huh! That was awesome. Maan was sooo cute in this update. Superb job with comedy too Avi :)

Chapter 14

Hello avi...let me introduce myself first...I am nishath...I am big fan of maaneet stories...and I came across your stories...a while ago when I was new on the forum...back den I was not a member so lost track of ur story..(the lockEt..)...but I am very happy DAT I finally got hold of our stories again...
My excitement gets doubled...after reading the first part...at the end of the update I was grinning...the fight now has a ""tadka"" of romance..."moti"...DAT was very funny...by far I have not imagined geet with chubby fat...But as I said it was so hilarious... !!!!...and I guess its going to be a very romantic yet a fun ss...!!!...
And I yea I know ur rule of comments... And hopefully me being a member now...I ll regularly give feedback for every part...and I hope I get to know more of ur stories in future...!!!!...
.I ll be waiting for our reply...:):):)

Oho maan misunderstood every thing but thats for gud now he will think every thing from geets point of view he will think for her too geet in danger but when maan is here nothing to fear

Very well written nice hp scenes finally geet falling for maan

Aha nice update geet attracted to maan physically but maan having misunderstanding no worries precap was owsem n maan demanding for nurse that wz hilarious panday g n romeo lolx

Nice uldate geeet is still in misunderstanding n dadimaa doing dolare dola lolxxxtgere wz no precap scene but maan is not having any geet dev mu any more so am happy