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Posted: 10 years ago
#11

Originally posted by: priya111111



main tho do teen din se gf par nahi aarhi hoon. tho kaise dekhoon.


😆😆 I know...
all r busy...😊

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Congrats for new thread

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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: singh24


😆😆 I know...
all r busy...😊



busy nahi health teek nahi thi over heat ki wajah se motions horahi thi😭
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Originally posted by: priya111111



busy nahi health teek nahi thi over heat ki wajah se motions horahi thi😭


Oh.. ,, humm,, weather change ..
mujhe bhi 2 din palhle stomach pain tha...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: singh24


Oh.. ,, humm,, weather change ..
mujhe bhi 2 din palhle stomach pain tha...



climate ki change ki wajah se ek din teek hothi hoon tho dusre din kharab
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Hello my dear friends

Updating



Edited by singh24 - 10 years ago
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The Bliss



( For Banner credit goes to my dear Priya )


The simple things of life can be blissful, if you can take the time to enjoy it. There is love in the air, everywhere... you just need to feel it, embrace and enjoy all that life has to offer.

Every moment that is enjoyed, treasured and relished is a store house of memories, that you can draw out, enjoy and smile with love. It is bliss..


Oh sweet bliss how did you find me in the dark with all my troubles

collecting like copper pennies in a fountain,
under pain concrete form,
a flower breaks
through the crack of my once solid shell.

Stay with me bliss ,
never leave me again,
for my need is great and my patience is plentiful.
Oh lessons I need not learn again,
forget where I have been.

Let me walk in the sweet embrace of a Sunday's morn
and not forget it tender kiss of compassion
for God had granted me another day with you.
Hold me in the arms of your unfolding grace
and we will put back all the fallen stars in the sky...


.

Note..

This a fiction , all incident , medical terms , professional terms nd places r imaginary ,, plzz don't relate them with reality .


Note... This is a fiction inspired by some facts and incidents from our surroundings . If someone find any resemblance in d title and story line , they r welcome to leave their comments on my page (plzz don't pm me)with d link . I'll try my best not to touch any body's work. Need ur love and support to make it an interesting SS.





Part - 8


Part - 9



DM looked at him with awed ,, he never told her to sit near him ,,gen she herself sat there to divert his mind nd talk to him ,, he didn't response ,, it didn't matter to him ,, most of d time he remained shut nd looked only at d roof blankly ,, but today he asked DM to sit near him ,, she smiled nd nodded in a yes ,, Maan gestured her to sit near him on d bed ,, she packed on his forehead nd sat near him having his hand in hers nd caressed that lovingly ,, he smiled in return .

DM: what happened ,, I m getting love in spite of ur anger ?

Maan smiled painfuly: U forgot my love for u DM , see everything has finished nd now I m giving only pain to u .

DM: no Maan ,, everything is here , just keep faith ,, if God gives us pain then he'll give us power too to bear that.

Maan: u r looking so happy today ,, why?

DM: Hummm,, may be we met with a nice person after long nd feeling good .

Maan: who,, who met with u ?

DM: I m talking about Geet ,, she is a very sweet girl nd always help us when she meet us .

Maan: why not , u got someone like u to talk non-stop ,, what a stubborn girl she is ?

DM: nd u ,, what r u ? today u got someone higher than u .

Maan: DM , did she visit KC before too ?

DM: yes ,once , we collapsed in sai temple ,, that day Geet helped us , took care of us nd came here to drop me , but how do u know ? she went back from outside.

Maan: I gussed .

DM: I m sorry beta she came in ur room like that ,, I told her not to come but she came after listening ur voice .

Maan: it's OK DM , plzz don't say sorry ,, that was not ur fault .

DM : Maan ,I m feeling so good seeing u talking like this after long.

Maan: I m only troubling u na DM ,, I m sorry.

DM: nahi beta ,, u never trouble us ,, it's time beta ,, if bad time comes then it'll pass too .

Maan: all r in pain bcoz of me ,, u , mom-dad , ye adi .

DM : Maan u have ppl around u so think that they r bounded with u think about those who didn't have any body near them nd crave for a single soul near them to share their pains ,, u saw Geet , she is all alone .

Maan: what ? she don't have anybody ?

DM: no , her dad is on sailing nd bro who is far away from her in Germeny ,, nd today I saw pain in her eyes .

Maan remembered her words nd blankness in her eyes when she was talking to him nd now realised d pain behind those words ,, may be she had faced something painful , but she was not depend on other nd living her life .

Maan: hmmm ,, who cn say that she is a Dr ? stubborn nd ready to fight ,, devil

DM: I don't think so .. devil .. no she a cute girl .

Maan: oh really ,, why do u say her bad ? she is ur gappu partner .

DM: I talk to u too but u didn't , nd spent ur time with this net-geo.

Maan: what cn I do DM,, nothing ,, I have nothing to talk too ,,he sighed painfuly .

Dadima cupped his cheek lovingly ,, her eyes turned wet too realizing his pain nd helplessness .

DM: Maan beta u r near us ,, infront of us nd talking to us , that is enough for us ,, when u r then we have hope nd as d Drs too said that everything is fine nd in God's hands ,, Maan u did many experiments with hopes but sometime got success nd sometime saw failors but u didn't stop ur tries na ,, so keep hope for good.

Maan kept quiet ,, d air became heavy around them so DM decided to change d topic .

DM: OK today u r in mood so tell me what special u want in diner ?

Maan: nothing .

DM: not again Maan., tell me .

Maan: DM , I don't wan't anything ,,plzz.

DM: then I have to inform Geet ,, she took me promise to inform her if u refuse to eat .

Maan: no DM , u won't tell her , I don't want to see that monster again ,, who made her a Dr.

DM: who made u .

Maan: now i'm nothing .

DM: nd nothing is impossible Maan , hope u'll feel this soon .

Maan kept quiet nd Dadima came out after few min ,, she was very happy today ,, Maan talk normally after two yrs ,, it was a good sign nd she prayed to God for keep him calm like this ,, she thanked Geet too inwardly who came like a good lucky charm in KC ,, she prepared light dinner of his choice ,, called Yash nd Ruchi nd shared her happiness with them ,, they wr also surprised on this progress ,, they too thanked God nd pray for mercy .


Precap--- Geet decided to know about pendrive ..


Geet: if I m a monster then u r not less than a Bhasmasur ,, i'm sure still u r giving ur fav angry glares to DM ... 😆



Part- 10




sorry for mistakes ...





Edited by singh24 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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i'll be back after dinner di
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😃 Updated ...Pg...3


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