MG FF : A SECOND LIFE #5 Discontinued Note page 110 , May 1st, 2018

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chavvi16

@chavvi16

Stunner

Posted: 10 years ago

#371

awww so cute
he is adorable hubby
hell yes he is
and his wife is just so cute
so innocent too
okay maybe not that innocent
or is she
arabian girl
yes that she is
but did he just say that or he thinks its her
he made her dinner
that was so nice of her
this is what made her sad
that he is so nice to her
but she always is mad at him
geet dont be silly okay

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Gudiyeet

@Gudiyeet

Rocker

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#372

maan planned make dinner for her in kitchen maaneet scene was lovely geet was guilt she did not match for him geet seeing maan surprised in terrace soon she forget between maaneet talking nicely maan was amused geet talking maaneet dance both are sensing some thing their closeness,finally maan foung his arabian girl lovely update awesome pics

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nadia khan

@nakh5683

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#373

lovely funny update both hubbies r confused as they arnt aware why their respective wifes r angry at them arjun takes arohi out giving maan a chance with his jaan seeing her cute anger he has decided he will move on and fakes a cute nok jhok with her he declared he will amke food for her making her shock and confuse with his behavior she thought maybe he is hungry her concern fr him makes him fall for her more seeing his care for her she felt guilty for being angry at him maan prepared a dinner date with his cuty who really enjjoyed and was like a kid which maan enjoyed she loved his cooking both had a romantic dance oth feeling something for eachother when maan saw geet and remembered his arabian girl could be he finally recognised her and will think as his illusion as geet still has to sghare her past with him

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simran

@Pumpkinseed

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#374

awesome part..maan arranged dinner for geet and geet enjoyed it and their lovely dance

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Sundari

@Param-Sundari

Stunner

+ 13

Posted: 10 years ago

#375

56/57

well firstly, very sorry for being late; i read it 2-3 days ago!

part 57 was quite loong, i loved it

both parts were fulled of their cute moments; but maaneet date stole it all!

really loved that scene.

what i like is their relation is growing at a proper pace,

no rushing but slowly building the bond with love, care and attraction.

the end of part 57 indicates the unfolding of the past,

n also the end of story;

waiting to see how it turns out.

another thing i would like to point out is the change in ur writing style,

pehle b i said ki it has changed since u returned to this after a break

n 2 things about it are-

1. the recent updates are involving me into the story more, compared to the past chapters.

2. while also the difference is noticeable, like a break in flow.

its just a view, nothing like u need to change or anything; just a readers observation. 😊

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tabby999

@tabby999

Trailblazer

+ 5

Posted: 10 years ago

#376

hi suhaana

nice update

maan taking so much care of geet ..prepared food for her ..

geet ki buk buk uff uff..

like the dinner date ..

last maneet danced on slow number ..thats lovely ..

thank u for update

waiting for next

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sobia4maaneet

@sobia4maaneet

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#377

read the last 3 updates together ..

loved them ..

so sweet n cute ...both Khurana brothers coping up with thr wifies ...lol

that was fun to read ..

The Maan Singh Khurana ..walking behind chasing his wifey ..haayee

but i still didn't get it ...Y GEET WAS ANGRY AT FIRST PLACE ..??

n what was in that document ..?? the MBA Entrance paper which she didn't wanted to do ..???

finally the Arabian Girl ...did he recognized her ..?? please tell me yes ...please

waiting for next eagerly ..

luv ya

sobia

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Akku

@akkub.92

Dazzler

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#378

Waiting for your update its 2 months now so plz update

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Geethanda87

@Geethanda87

Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

#379

it's really a very gud story I like it very much... plz next big n romantic moments wala dena maneet ka... plzzz
or mujhe nxt part ka link send karna mat bhulna I m appreciate ur writing dear :)