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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome part
maan is changing a bit but use khud samaj nai aa raha

awesome one
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Posted: 10 years ago
Wonderful update...
Maan is trying very hard to control his desire... Geet calling maan papa is funny... Geet is becoming ziddi infront of maan... Loved it...
Precap seems interesting...
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Posted: 10 years ago
geet has become stubborn
and she gets her way with maan
maan is barely able to control his urges
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Posted: 10 years ago



PART - 28



GEET was going through a delicate time period and her harmonal changes brought lot of changes in her. Moreover no experienced elder was with her to guide and helped her in understanding. A complete new experience with new challanges every day. Neither she knew much nor Maan. He is worst in this matter. Only one thing is feed in his mind and that is not to hurt her and take care of her needs,but both were unknown with the actual demand of their situation. Her mood swings irritated her along with Maan. Or else it would gave more itching to Maan. The Geet he knew before this pregnancy was totaly vanished and the girl in front of him was completely new for him. Like he never met her before.


One side his libido struggle and on the other side Geet's new new tantrums. Some time she really react violent even that made him shocked and sometimes completely calm and silent like a stand water. She sat holding her little growing bump and staring outside. Not even listen his voice which made Maan annoyed. How can any one ignored him.


As a result his many punching bags become prey of his anger. Neither he scold her nor he touch her so what he do with her? His mind was filled with tangled thoughts.

Shounting and scolding was his daily routine but Dev noticed the duration increased from past few days. So he asked the reason of his frustration. "calm down bro. What happened?"


Instead of replying he torned the papers of budget into small pieces and threw in bin. "get out of my sight." He burst on the employee who made that budget. Scared soul made an escape before he would punished. Dev was concerned so he asked again,till he broke. Maan damp the table hard and glared him.


"ok relax just tried to cool down and please tell me. May be i have a solution of your problem." Dev tried to be polite as much he can. He was handling Maan like he handle his own kids.


"You... You are my problem. No actually all of you are my enemies,who dont see me enjoying my life." Maan pointed Dev and blamed him for his condition.


Dev was shocked a bit and tried to analyise what he exactly meant. "wait a sec bro,dont play games and clearly told me what i had done?" He asked while scanning his tired face.


"you made me confuse daily,giving me lectures on baby and Geet. And Geet usko to mann karta hai kabhi kabhi hospital me permanent admit kar du. She gone mad completely. Ek to itni jiddi ho gai hai ki meri koi baat nahi sunti. Moreover use woi sare kaam karne hai jinse mujhe chid aati hai. Do you know what she did last week? She put a plant in my room's balcony. Damn how can she. Cant she see my floor is getting messy with her weird intrest of planting. Jaise itna hi kafi nahi tha. She completely turned insane. She awake midnight and asked for some particular flavour of ice cream. And when she dont get she start crying like a kid and for next one hour. Damn she is so annoying. Never listen to me and doing all insane things. She knew i am allergic to vinegar but no why she cares. She love to eat those stupid things which irritates me." Maan burst out and poured out his heart. He was cribbing non stop and Dev only listening him,hiding his laugh from him. But as soon Maan done he scanned Dev and caught him laughing silently. "what? Main koi joke suna raha hu jo tume hasi aa rahi hai?"


"bro you are really cute. Cribbing like a small kid." he remarked and got glare shot as a reward. Before Maan burst he controlled his laugh. "ok ok take a deep breath and just relax. Bro ye sab jo Geet k sath aajkal ho raha hai na ise mood swings kehte hai,jo pregnancy me normal hai. Ab aap ise side effect keh lo ya kuchh or par ye har pregnant woman k sath hota hai. Whatever she is doing is not deliberate. Its just that she dont have control over her changes. Bro just try and understand her point of view. Everyday her body changes. Gradually your baby is growing which brought so many changes in her body. We males can never understand this thing,but atleast we can support our lady. Bro i can understand apke liye ye sab handle karna bahut tuff hai. Sply when its your first baby. Everything is new. So time lagega. Ye sab samjhne me apko. Bro geet k harmonal changes usse ye sab karwate hai. Infact these days... Ok leave it." Dev leave his words uncomplete. He wants to but stop himself as he was talking to his elder brother.


"what? Is there anything serious jisse mujhe darna chahiye?" Maan stared and asked suspiciously.


"no bro. Its nothing like that. Apko pata hai Meera ko kai baar itne bad mood swings hote hai ki meri band baj jati thi usko handle karte karte." Dev twisted easily.


"kaise moodswings? What she exactly do?" Maan sound worried. He was imagining that Meera got violent and running to kill Dev. He trembled with a jerk.


Dev saw his squeezed forhead and faded faces. "bro bro...chillax,she was not running behind me with a knief to kill me. Its just she turned upset without any reason and then usko cheer up karna bahut difficult hota tha." Dev replied quickly like he was scanning his thoughts.


"and what would you do?" he asked for himself.


"ye apko khud seekhna hoga. Geet k pas rahiye. Try to find out what she want?" Dev gave a devil smirk.


"Dev hold on and tell me what would you do." Maan commands him.


"sorry bro that was our private life and i dont share it." Dev was quick and left his cabin.


Maan fumed as he His mind and body needs to be relaxed. So he made a plan of outing on name of bussiness deal. He told her that he is going for a bussiness trip for few days.

Geet without even asking a single question done his all packing. She will make sure that he would carried everything of his need. Maan was all set to leave. Before this he gave instruction to each and every employee of his to take care of her in his absence and called him in case of emergency. All servants are more concious then his believes,so they assured him about her safty. Geet went outside with him. She wants to saw him as much she can before he vanished for his tour. Corner of her eyes carrying some wetness but she dont allowed them to leak out. Both stare each other. Maan's step turned heavy but he left in a pace before his decision go weak.


"i know aap apna promise todna nahi chahte isliye mujhse durr ja rahe hai." Geet was aware that in pretext of tour he went to enjoy his casanova life again.


Maan done his meeting and afterward he was free to do anything. Girl was arranged. In name sake clothes she entered in his room. Maan was enying his drink after so almost one and a half month. He was relaxed and seeing his prey his shaft provked him to raised. Girl come to him and soon both were in bed leaving all barriers. He compressed her body underneath him,to feed his starvation of ages. He kissed her insanly before he headed to final destination. But instead of geeting relax he grew more frustrate. That kiss fails to calm him. He brokes and scanned her face. Same time Geet's gloomed face and wet eyes swimmed in front of his eyes,which he saw just before leaving her in Canada. Maan leave that girl instantly and sat back. His mind asking questions from him and in reply Dev's words start disturbing him.


"bro she will not do it deliberately. What she is going through you will never understand." Each and every word of their conversation made him weltered and her image his eyes captured added more.


"dressed up",he commands to the girl.


"what? Are you serious?", she asked in both confusion and disappointment.


"dressed up and leave." he commands and moved out from bed without even glancing her back. He made a call and done all the arrangements. His private jet was waiting for him. Soon Maan reached and they take off.


Here,Geet was roaming gloomed. No doubts her heart missed him badly. She wants him besides her which was not possible as her mind told her. Maan was left her for 5 days and here only one day had passed. Her heart bleeds in his absence,but she wiped off her tears making herself strong. "dont cry Geet you are grown up. Waise b sirf 5 dinn ki hi baat hai. Or moreover is baby k alwa unhe tujhse koi lena dena nahi hai." She was trying but its just she trying to fooled herself. She wants him. Every ounce of her wants him. She wants him to absorb her in his warmth. Suddenly a sound of horn alerts her. She went to balcony and saw his car. Quickly a smile replaced all her gloominess and she run madly to meet him.


Maan entered in the premises. Servant reached to open the door of car for him. Maan come out and went inside,and found her running madly towards him. Maan's eyes popped out seeing her madness. Before anything bad happened Maan to run towards her. He hold her. "Geet stop tume lag sakti hai." he cautioned her but nothing is reaching to her.


Her heart bounced in a joy. He was back. Her all doubts vanished. Her love came back to her. In her happines she forgot everything,only gazing him lovingly before,raising and clinging to him. Maan to embraced her firmly,feeling so relaxed and calm in her warmth.





Both hold on each other like gripping their lifes. Though Maan still not know this feeling but he to felt good after returning to her.




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Posted: 10 years ago
looks like me first... 😃 😉

awesome update. so maan was frustrated due to geet's mood swing 😛 & he talked about it with dev. he said geet doing weird things cos of pregnancy but maan can't understand so in the name of meeting he went to tour & tried to lead his casanova life but he can't . he came back to geet . another side geet was gloomy due to maan departure but when she saw maan came back , she can't hold herself & hug him tightly 😉
waiting for next
continue soon
Edited by metromasti - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Maan was frustrated with geet mood swings n lash out the frustration at office. Dev gave some tips but the rest he have to learn by him self... I hate him for leaving geet in the name of business n try to make out with the s**t but he return to geet... Geet was well aware of his plan.. She is happy n I my self will kill him if he were to hurt geet. Hope he learn her value in his life.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awww its their first that why they both are going insane but Maan needs to put himself in Geets place and understand! Dev pulled a safe one lol cant wait for Parth to come in the mansion!
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Posted: 10 years ago
beautiful part, maan was irritated with geet mood swings and changes. he was pouring his frustration to dev.. dev was laughing at his plight.. maan was planning to enjoy his casinova image. but he was not able to.. so he returned to geet.. waiting for next part
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Posted: 10 years ago
hi richa
nice update ..
maan all frustrated not knowing the reason of his anger ..in this story dev is so nice ..he helps maan at every step ..maan left geet to enjoy his life but was back again ..hope he understands what he want in his life ..

thank u for update
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Posted: 10 years ago
Awesome update maan n dev talk were cute. Glad that ge cud not make a move back into his casanova lifestyle n saw geets face n gloominess. Felt so happy for geet to have had her maan back to her in a day

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