Barsega Saawan/ Updated prologue-plot /pg 1/ something bout story pg 4

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Manjeet Kaur

@manjeet6

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Posted: 10 years ago

#21

Awesome concept
Nice prologue
Waiting for update

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Sonia KN

@Sonia.KN

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+ 5

Posted: 10 years ago

#22

Something about story

Don't know why such a cold response ... May be prologue seemed boring...So little bit about the plot...I have dealt with a plot where disability of two people became their strength in " Kahe Toh Se Sajna" where Maan always respected Geet...what she did to him/ for him... he knew that was love...reciprocated her with more than that...

But if totally opposite happens...It can...when a disable person become a toy with whom other can play... how that person feels...and what makes other the normal one to do that...What might be the mentality of a normal human being...

What Geet did to Maan and if she is in remorse then why ?

If you think u will get blasting updates in the starting sorry it is not possible and if u think my work is boring you are free to leave my work...But please don't bore me with congrats nice update so n so...I want to here even criticization that I love most...so please bear with me for sometime...

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Taahir

@taahir004

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+ 10

Posted: 10 years ago

#23

Congratz on new story

Concept sounds very intriguing yet soulful and somewhere hold
elements of sadness

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Taahir

@taahir004

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Posted: 10 years ago

#24

So is this story about a disable person while the other uses or abuse
the disable person ?

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suhaaana

@suhaaana

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+ 8

Posted: 10 years ago

#25

will comment after reading
a bit busy now

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maneetarsh

@maneetarsh

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+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#26

Interesting concept, so this story about physically challenged person who is been abused or misused by other, who is what??? Eagerly eating to know

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suhaaana

@suhaaana

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+ 8

Posted: 10 years ago

#27

prologue the post where u wrote about hilly station is quite interesting..
I didn't understand the one above that post

and regarding the plot..
stories will have their own flavor so m waiting for something new now...

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turbulence

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+ 2

Posted: 10 years ago

#28

wow, sonia, great start. Plot is beautiful, story really sounds intriguing.

To larki ke dil ka pain chhupa hai barish ki droplets ke saath. Saawan ki usko akelapan de chuka hai pehle. Let's c how she finds her love along with the rainy showers. Bas aur aage padhte hai abb.

Very lovely story.

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Dona

@Donnaa

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Posted: 10 years ago

#29

interesting prologue..

eagerly waiting for its start..

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nostalgicmoon

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Posted: 10 years ago

#30

When i started reading tu meri zindagi he was because of its something different.,and hopefully the prologue also sounding different,will be waiting for the new story

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