THE LOCKET REPOSTED (3) Ch 59-62, p 118 , new thd link pg 1 *****

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honeygrape

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Posted: 10 years ago

#461

Aviii pls send me the next chapters...u have spoiled me now...i am not able to read any other story...not even chura liya...i am lockets maaneet waala land...i cant come out also...where are you??

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Posted: 10 years ago

#462

Originally posted by: honeygrape
Aviii pls send me the next chapters...u have spoiled me now...i am not able to read any other story...not even chura liya...i am lockets maaneet waala land...i cant come out also...where are you??

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net is really poor here so I usually am not OL

sent pm😃

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Jaggy

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Posted: 10 years ago

#463

wat way to celebrate geett b'day they had kiss ooops share a misti ...

aww geet missing so much to maan

loved the update

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Jaggy

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Posted: 10 years ago

#464

Amazing update ...tara-Dev chemistry awww superb

wat dev dreams , maan only thinks but one step ahead of his bro ...

dev-geet relation so sweet n lovely

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Jaggy

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Posted: 10 years ago

#465

Amazing update loved it ...maan First MU is cleared good he is cuming back to india

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maansi25

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Posted: 10 years ago

#466

Ch 43 44

Writing for both the ch

As they are intertwined

Both the favorite girls of Dev are in trouble

First the way Tara saved herself from the goons of suraj was frightening

After escaping she realised the worth of the love

She is going to lose

So when she found her Prince Charming on her doorstep she captured the opportunity to take whatever she will be missing her whole life

The first ever kiss from tara's side

But our Casanova was no less

He understood it as the good bye kiss

But the problem was dadima's amanat was also mimissing

He was worried about her

But on no time he we able to locate her

And at the otheside

Geet engrossed in maan took the wrong path

And as our heartbeat were rising

Wahi hua jiska darr tha

Brij ki nazar uspe pad hi gayi

Par jako rakje saiya maar sake na koi

Kabir ko god ne wahan bhej doya heet ko bachane aur idka ehsan chukane

Dev impressed with kabir like him

Next at home

Tara cooking and all three eating

Tara ready to leave the city

But not so soon mam

Abhi to aapko dev ka samna karns he

Love the caring side of both for geet

The way dev arranged for a car for her

Packing breakfast and all

Love the way dev made tara syay for a month

😲

Ch45

Our maaneet moment

Parathe wali gali

Maan taking geet with him

Both spending time with each other

Geet loving the spending time with him

Maan losing himself in her

Not able to disclose his plan for going london

Both are savouring the time spent with each other

And at y ride back

Naughty maan

Insisted geet to hold him tight from the waist

Geet loving the closeness with him

Now they know what they are to each other

👏

Loved all the parts so much

PS sorry for late comments

Please send me Link for C L part 12 also

I had commented for previous part as per the rule

Waiting...

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Muskan

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Posted: 10 years ago

#467

Part 43-amazing update it was,geet was in danger brij has kept his eyed on her for so long so glad that kabir saves geet,dev n Tara found her n kabir explains them everything.naintara feeling it is because of her geet has suffered n is guilty she decided that to leaves delhi for the safety of dev n geet.next day naintara confronting geet about her departure n tells everything about her past n luckily dev heard everything thankgod.

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Muskan

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Posted: 10 years ago

#468

part 44- nice update dev is being so protective about geet.another kiss between dev Tara n this time she is not resisting her feelings.naintara wanted to leave but dev confesses his feelings to her n she making him understand it was only attraction dev is asking for chance n to give him 30 days n he also assured her to solve her problem of sooraj.naintara agreed finally n decided to spend these days with dev n then she will leave.but dev has another plan n he is succeeded in trapping Tara by putting conditions.

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honeygrape

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Posted: 10 years ago

#469

Part 41:

lovvvly song...you always give out something informative in your stories...and i have got to read a loot of new things .. 😊😊

and maan has answers for everything...are you like that in real???

finally inki rail gaadi kuch toh aage badi 😊

Part 42:

wooo... very very intense part...that feeling , when you think about that person whom you wont be able to see ever again and at the same moment you see them right in front of u...lovely one Avi...

Part 43:

and the evil Brij is here...omg that look on dev's face...he looks sooo soo scary...how is she goin to manage him now...lovvv the bonding between geet and NT...

you have handled alll the relations here soo soo beautifullly/...the relation between Dev and geet s soo sooo lovely...sooo much warmth...beautiful one Avi

Part 44:

Loved the way Dev trapped NT with the challenge...and the game begins😃😃😃

very much exciiited...NT is in for a game which is definitely going to lose...

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Muskan

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Posted: 10 years ago

#470

part 45- beautiful update maan takes geet out to eat paratha,geet is getting so much affected by maans closeness,he wanted to spend as much as time with geet before going London n his time is nearing of going maan has still not told geet about his departure n is planning to say her.

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