THE LOCKET REPOSTED (3) Ch 59-62, p 118 , new thd link pg 1 *****

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kalabhas

@Hanamisuki

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Posted: 10 years ago

#381

Originally posted by: dqno1
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Thank you Kala. Your comments are very soothing to read esp. right now as I am struggling for time on personal and professional front. I am wondering whether I should even write anymore.

Reading your comment just made me stop thinking that way. 😃

hi avi,

dare u think of quit writing .

u r a born writer,have natural talent..and have the capacity to drag ur readers into the story..

so pls,don't in this context ..

its my pleasure that i have this opportunity to read ur awesome work..

i wish you should take this great talent to the next level,i want u to shine like a star in the writers world..

my best wishes to u avi👍🏼

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BloodDiamond

@BloodDiamond

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#382

Thank you for the pw 😊will read soon

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Susmitha

@susm

Voyager

Posted: 10 years ago

#383

Chapter 49:

Beautiful update. Dev trying to make tara fall for him. Making every possible by showing his body to by talking nicely n be a gentleman n have a dinner. It become difficult for tara to resist him. Tara making him wear unusual shirts geet laughing. Tara feeling bad when dev said to change. Dev telling what he wants to do when he saw her in that nighte she ran to change. Tara is in love with Dev n when dev pretend to ignore her feels bad n cries.

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kalabhas

@Hanamisuki

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#384

chapter 41

i really loved this part so much..

maan character at its peak i think..how caring and loving this guy,that too in his unique subtle way..

i always would see maan's love on geet like a cool pleasant breeze caressing me smoothly..

ur naration and dialogues play a vital role in creating that magic..

everytime i am reading the past of maan and geet..i drown into the story and felt as if i am watching them closely like a shadow.. living and travelling together with them..and adoring the couple,admiring the way how beautifully their love has been shaped up ..

it is truly magical...

geet got hurt by pinky's babhi's words and maan'a reaction to it was amazing...u have brought that scene in front of my eyes..

the story of humayun's tomb was very new,atleast for me because i didn't hear it anywhere..the lines from maan to geet were,i would say u have carved with care..such a nice words ...impactful one..

"It is not others who define us and our actions Geet. It is us who leave our mark on the world. It is us who are the controllers of our destiny. Never let someone else tell you who you are and what you are capable of."

these words are not only for geet,it is suitable for every human being ..

it has a great impact on my own personality too..u r such an influential writer..and i can realize that how much effort u have put for every part..hats off to u ..

i love maaneet's untold,understanding,serene love a lot..it would remain in my heart forever..

it is poetic..i will say..as i don't know any other apt word to describe this part..

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kalabhas

@Hanamisuki

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#385

chapter 42

omg !tara in trouble..

it was like watching a thriller movie while she was escaping from the goons..ur words transmitted the tension into us..i think the stalker is a deductive agency person appointed by dev..

after the hairline escape ..NT hugging dev was sensational one..very effectively u described that scene..NT's inner turmoil has been described very well,

NT's past was heart wrenching one..how much this small girl had gone through in life.because for the demons in her life ..she is really a brave girl ,roll model for many girls of these days..

i liked her even more now..

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shree2

@shree2

Explorer

Posted: 10 years ago

#386

Part 50

Oh no.. Maan mistook the absence of Geet in his farwell party as Geet reject his love😲... And the letter he wrote to her was stolen by some theif... Due to this they are suffering so much for the last 2years...

Atlast Adi phone call gave life to the lifeless Maan , who is now eager to see geet... Thanks to Adi👏...

Avi all the parts are superb👏... I thoroughly enjoyed all the parts...

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kalabhas

@Hanamisuki

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#387

chapter 43

omg!

before releasing a sigh of relief after NT' escape..other bomb has been blasted

"geet is missing"

my heart thudded while brij stalking her ..thank god u brought kabir at the right time..

while he was beating that rogue...i said aloud.."hit him hard..in the name of mine i gave two tight slap to him in mind lol)

dev and NT's care was very nice..kabir's lines to dev

If I was here at the right moment for her today it was God's way for me to lessen my debt to her. It is a debt I can never repay in my life"

i like this guy more and more..

while NT was planning to leave to face her fate ..dev's entry was in perfect timing..

i had blown a whistle for our hero's entry of course in my mind only...😆

quoting lines in her favorite rule book..was very funny...

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kalabhas

@Hanamisuki

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#388

chapter 44

wow very nice passionate ,romantic..emotional ,comical..and what not..

very fulfilling chapter for me..

dev's tackling NT by throwing the challenge of one month..is very interesting..and NT's conditions were expected one..but i was curious about dev's ..when he said his conditions i was surprised..

really unique and the precap gave me a hint of what he was planning actually with NT ..😆😆

i really pity her now..how she is going to restrain herself ..or should i say how long..?😉

it going to be interesting tug of war...all set to watch the fun..😃

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kalabhas

@Hanamisuki

Rocker

Posted: 10 years ago

#389

chapter 45

here again my favorites..

maan becomes greedy that he tents to steal as much as time of geet before he go to london..

but he forgot to tell that to her..may be this may create a rift in between them..😭

maan fulfilling geet's wish of eating parata was so nice..girl's like these kind of surprises..

this part reminds me of such surprises give by my hubby.😳😳

love is in air..geet now feels so ease and comfortable around maan...and maan holding her hands casually..

it shows they have stepped ahead in their relation..mutual understanding and trust..are the base of their relationship..it was not sudden or unreal..very natural and smooth flowing love story..

heart stealing one..

tail piece..

while maan grabbed geet's hand and encircled around his waist..i was blushing here ..😳😳

and this line...

"#Haiyee, Yeh Ji'. Meri jaan le kar chodegi yeh Ji, Giit ji.#

i was blushing one more..😳😳

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anime_gal

@anime_gal

Navigator

Posted: 10 years ago

#390

Chap 49

Good wake up call ..wish I had too.. Too bad I have to see my sisters face ..

The daily chore .. I think I get wat Dev is trying to do .. Making her call him morning and night .. He is making it a ritual .. Most common one .. Like an intimate thing between them both ..

She chose pink for him .. Lol who I the world would keep something like that in the wardrobe ..

Dramatic Dev .. Truly .. Loving Dev is gonna be a chore lol ..

Loved the normalcy .. Wch doesn't occur often .. The dinner .. The masti nok-Jock ... Dev really cares for Geet ..

Lol Tara is tormenting him with that dress..and that Tara is trying her all .. To frustrate him ..

Lol loved the way Dev teased Tara .. Woah she was jealous alright .. Sure wear waiting for that future too ...

OMg .. Y are the precaps soo hot and interesting .. Can't wait for more

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