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Posted: 10 years ago


wow lovely emotional omg very sensational update..te way anni ki jealous burning her her and making her to cross her limits and insulting geet..bechari geet for tis only she was locked in her shell, after so much effect my maan have broked her wall but anni with in few mins she have shattered everything..omg my maan ki gussa seeing his geet and his son being humuilated and te way he fill her mang and announced to tis world tat his geet and manu belongs to him, msk shutting everyone's mouth was lovely emotional..te way anni ki shock and all were hurt and anger on her was lovely..i love te update so much yar
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Posted: 10 years ago
Emotional update.
Felt very bad Geet but Maan shat everyone's mouth.
Waiting for next update.

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Posted: 10 years ago
ANNIE WAS SO RUDE...DID SHE FORGET HUMANITY ALSO..KYA..
ITNA INSULT..BT DEN,,,,MAAN NE JO KIYA WOH ...
I TOO WAS SHOCKED...

BECHARI GEET CANT WAIT TO SEE HER REACTION..
LOVLY PART...ND EMOTIONAL TOO..\
WAITIN FOR NEXT PART...
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Posted: 10 years ago
babbie
am going out of town
aane ka baad milugi
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Posted: 10 years ago
nice update dear
poor geet always is insulted by khurannas annie should be taught nice lesson
i hate annie😡
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Posted: 10 years ago
congrats for new thread
awesome part

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Posted: 10 years ago

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u a lot my dear friends ...🤗

Updating


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Edited by singh24 - 10 years ago
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(For banner credit goes to my dear laksmi )

The Jinx

An object or person that brings bad luck.

It can take you days, months, even years to better your life but it only takes a second for you to ruin someone else's.


Prologue
No one is ever created to be perfect we all have some kind of flaw that makes us unique and make us who we are ...
Many times we cu
rse our flaws and look at them with shame .
But , sometimes for d most blessed of us , God use these flaws to soften our spirit and turn us
into a kinder more beautiful and compassionate
soul ...

Note... This is a fiction inspired by some facts and incidents form our surroundings . If someone find any resemblance in d title and story line they r welcome to leave ur comments on my page (plzz don't pm me)wit
h d link . I'll try my best not to touch any body's work. Need ur love and support to make it an interesting FF.





Part - 123


Part - 124

He looked at Rashi nd then at Geet who was looking lost at him with wet eyes ,, Maan held her hand nd moved out from there ,, he was moving fast nd Geet tripped but Maan held her ,, his heart was crying seeing Geet like that ,, she feared for this ,, Maan lifted her in his arms nd moved in her room ,, settled her in her bed nd sat near her ,, cupped her face nd wiped her tears ,, Geet looked at him painfully nd cried out hugging him .

Maan: Geet ,,, oh baby , I m so sorry ,,, u faced this bcoz of me ,, I m sorry.

Geet: Maan ,, she called my son a s s . .. .

Maan: baby I m sorry ,, plzz calm down ,, mujhe pata hota to mai tumhe yahan kabhi nahi lata ,, hum mrng mei uapas chale jayenge ,, shhsss , plzz shant ho jao ,, mai abhi ticket book kerta hun,, hum yahan nahi rahenge .

Geet parted nd with sobs: that's why I I told u to stay away from us ,, uncle , how uncle& aunty 'll face all this ? u u go there ,, manu ,, where is my manu ?

Maan: plzz , calm down Geet ,, i'll handle everything there ,, haann , I m going there nd bringing Manu ,, OK ,, u control urself ,, chup rona nahi , mai hu na tumhare paas ,, i'll see everyone .

Geet: Maan ppl will talk about us nd don't know how U&A nd DM'll handle them ,, I put all in shame .

Maan: it's not u Geet , it's me nd my sis ,, we r d accused not u ,, don't blame urself ,,, never ever ,, nd u don't think much about ppl , dad is much capable to handle all .

Geet: u go nd stay with Uncle ,, plzz .

Maan: 1st u stop crying ,, I m going to bring Manu ,, hummm .(he pecked her forehead )

Geet nodded with moist eyes ,, Maan went out ,, Annie's hateful words still hurting her deep ,, not even her words but Geet was fearing for DM, yash nd Rashi'd insult too ,, they wr facing d ppl there God knows how ?

There outside in d hall after leaving Maan nd Geet all wr looking confused at all d Khuranas ,, all wr eager to know why that happened ,, Yash was in shock nd feeling miserable for Geet ,, Rashi came near him with thudding heart ,, sobbing Manu was clinging to her ,, Rashi placed her hand on Yash worried .

Rashi: Yash ,, I don't know why this happened ?

Yash: hummm ,, hua wahi jo wo nahi chahati thi ,, essi baat ka darr tha usse.

Call Annie .

Annie herself was in shock now ,, Maan's action was like a slap on her face in front of all ,, he filled Geet's Partitions claiming her as his wife nd Manu as his son in front of all ,, r they really in love ? she gave a confused nd shocked look to Rashi nd Yash who wr looking at her disappointed ,, Rashi called her nd Annie dragged herself near them .

Yash: why u did this Annie ? if u r feeling any prob with Geet then u cn talk to us ,, why u insulted her when u didn't no nothing about her ?

Annie: bro never like her nd now u see how he was giving importance to her nd her son ,, why don't u react on this nd see what bro did ,, he he filled her maang nd accepted her nd her son ,, how cd he ?

Yash: he cn nd we all want this ,, he loves Geet nd we accept her ,, u cd ask us if u wr having any prob ,, u really disappointed us Annie .

Annie : u all knew this that bro loves her ,,how cd he love her ?

Yash: nd why not ? if u cn love Arjun then why cn't Maan love Geet ?she is my childhood friend's daughter .

Annie: dad Geet is a mother of a child .

Yash: didn't u listen clearly what Maan said .. manu is his son .

Yash took manu from Rashi nd kissed his cheek lovingly ,,nodded at him not to cry .

Yash: Manu is my Grand son , my angel .

Annie : I cn't believe this u all agreed for this relation .

Rashi: stop this argument Annie ,, we all love them both nd very happy with all this ,, u have to ask us before pouring out ur hatred for Geet ,, u did a very big mistake .

Arjun nd his mom-dad came close to them ,, they too wr feeling bad for this unexpected drama which Annie created .

A's dad: sorry Mr&mrs Khurana ,, we don't know what was wrong between Annie , Maan nd Geet ?

A's mom: Annie when Maan loves that Geet nd ur family is happy then why did u insult her ?

Arjun: Annie , if Maan brought her here nd ur family was happy then why u created this scene ? if u wr not happy then u cd talk after party ,, this was really embarrassing for all of us ,, u behaved very immature .

Annie was tongue tight ,, all wr accusing her for that Geet , but she became lil apprehensive after these accusations ,, she was unaware that her family knew about Maan nd Geet's affair .

Tongues wr wagging on this drama created by Annie in her jealous ,, few ppl asked why Maan did that nd DM nd Rashi clearly said that they both love each other but Annie used bad words for Geet nd in anger Maan took that step ,, they knew it nd wr happy with their alliance ,, after few hot & spicy gossips all scattered in groups .Yash was pacifying manu who was sobbing ,, Manu feared seeing Maan in anger nd blood in his hand ,, he wanted to go near Geet or Maan but Yash knew that they wr too very disturbed ,,Yash was diverting manu's mind talking to him nd telling him baby stories ,, he was worried for Geet nd when manu rant more yash came inside to leave him , but met with Maan in midway .

Maan: I m sorry dad , in my gush of anger I took that step ,, that was unbearable for me that Annie was abusing my son nd Geet .

Yash: it's OK Maan , how is Geet ?

Maan: very disturbed nd crying ,, don't worry I m with her nd just come to bring Manu .

He took Manu in his arms kissing his forehead ,, Yash sighed nd thought that it was better if Maan handle Geet in their tough phase ,, they have to stand together to face d reality now .

Maan: dad we r going back in d mrng ,, r u coming with us ?

Yash was hurt : hummm ,, OK , but we all'll reach US day after TM ,, there we'll talk.

Maan: Dad r u fine ? means ppl'll ask many Qs ...

Yash: Maan these Qs wr nothing in front of that which Geet bore ,, our family member insulted her ,, she was fearing for this nd refusing to accept ,, she didn't want to hurt us nd herself but see what she had faced ? be with her Maan , she needs u ,, go , I'll handle those ppl ,, for me my family is everything not these ppl .

Maan beamed : thank u Dad ,, thank u so much dad ,, i'll talk to u later .

Yash: huummm,, go nd take care of them .

Maan: ji.

Maan came in ,, yash went back in party nd joined rashi nd DM ,, now they wr there just for formality ,, their own daughter spoiled all d charm of function ,, DM was feeling very embarrassed ,, it was she who poisened Maan nd Annie's minds against Geet in prev yers.

Annie was shuning herself, her jealousful act created a drift between her nd her family ,, now all d ppl came acrossed with d fact that Maan loves Geet nd now he was out of reach for them who wr desiring to hook him ,, they wr only sighing nd cursing Geet inwardly for snaching this most desirable guy .

Precap --- manu got his daddy ...

uncle Maan al u my plince daddy ...?

Part - 125


sorry for mistakes ...

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Edited by singh24 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
hi babbie
love theupdate
aanie's insult proved a boon for geet..
maan filled her maang now she is mrs maan singh khurana
all r shocked there..
thank u for update
waiting for next
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Posted: 10 years ago


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🤗 i dear...😆

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