MG FF : A TORN RELATION #4 NOTE FOR UPDATES PG 162 JULY 25 - Page 65

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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: CrazyMaaneetFan

Finally searched it.
thank God u continued. I missed it.
hv actually read all parts again.

part36.
geet alwz fail to speak out abt dt day,n maan too stops, mayb doesnt want to push her.
talks wid radhika helps her lot.
hope maan n radhika togethr mke geet understand n to open up.

abortion of child is imp. if it endangers geet n childs life. Wat will be d use to save child if geet herslf loses her life? Making him a motherless child???? Big no



hi dear welcome back
glad to c u back
thanks for the review
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: CrazyMaaneetFan

In d meantime one query,3-4 parts back,u showed radhi n vicky buying gifts n mentiond radhika reached KM,but no meeting. Aftr dt maan made geet to talk to her.
hope i didnt miss in btwn



na dear u didnt miss this.. actually i shifted those scenes they will come too dont worry
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: CrazyEyes

part 41

awesome update...so painful...
maan is in so much pain n he is not able to tell antbody anything...
at office all are scared to see him n his anger...arjun tried to talk to maan as he knew him well but maan is not ready to share...
he thinks its his punishment for his sin...
there geet is too numb...she know in her heart that maan cares for her...loves her...he can do anything for her...but the way he behaved n his talks confuses her...
naina n dadima after trying make geet normal...
maan called geet's parents n tell them to take geet with them...the thought of leaving maan stirred something in geet...
maan's father blasted on him after knowing his with to abort...
poor maan all are blaming him...finally he tells the truth...geet's life is on stake...
ab dekhte hai geet aur baki ghar wale kaise react karte hai...




dona di glad u like it
will be updating today
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: taahir004

Part 41

Yes Geet been a mother is difficult for her but even she should try and understand what is more important in life .
Maan has really tried and even the sin he committed that was neither his or Geet's fault but circumstances .
now he wants his wife and later when she is healthy enough she can always fall pregnant but Geet just wants her baby not thinking even if she pull through gives birth the baby will not have a mother so why than give birth to child only to leave them .
Maan's family and Geet's family could not understand why Maan wants Geet to go back home and why he wants an abortion done , so when his father finally ask him he them all that he does not want his wife to die
now lets see what and how the family will handle the situation



thanks dear
the main point that maan is trying to make geet understand u have written so clearly
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: suhaaana




dona di glad u like it
will be updating today

see m stalking 😆
chalo me waiting
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: CrazyEyes

part 41

awesome update...so painful...
maan is in so much pain n he is not able to tell antbody anything...
at office all are scared to see him n his anger...arjun tried to talk to maan as he knew him well but maan is not ready to share...
he thinks its his punishment for his sin...
there geet is too numb...she know in her heart that maan cares for her...loves her...he can do anything for her...but the way he behaved n his talks confuses her...
naina n dadima after trying make geet normal...
maan called geet's parents n tell them to take geet with them...the thought of leaving maan stirred something in geet...
maan's father blasted on him after knowing his with to abort...
poor maan all are blaming him...finally he tells the truth...geet's life is on stake...
ab dekhte hai geet aur baki ghar wale kaise react karte hai...




dona di glad u like it
will be updating today
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: Hanishadevi

Emotional part..maan is losing his temper bcs there's no one to hear his inner turmoil.. Geet is willing to risk her life for the baby n he don't want to loose her bcs she is his life... Hope geet understand his pain too... Finally the truth about her health is out... Pls cont soon.




thanks dear
updating today
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: angeldream14

loved it

so the truth is out
now what will geet do she has to chose a life with her husband or death where she will leave a soul to suffer without parents



dear i agree and this is mainly maan's concern also
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: ashakavyam

Hai;

About the story till part 37 here

Awesome plot dear. Its really scary when thinking from geets part. It is really a nice plot but the thing is that only Maneet scenes are there So I feel it be more fictional. It happens in such conditions that we will be focusing only on the main characters.

Yes the plot is good Story is good and Interesting to read further. But there is no much interaction with the characters otherthan Maan and Geet. THins makes me confused.

Yes geet is a reserved person born and bought up that way only and need support.

Why don't He take her for a honeymoon ...

And yes what about the teddy bears of Vicky and Radhika...

Waiting to read more...

Kindly send me the acess...


Keep writing



thanks dear
yup i know that there is hardly any convo between other characters i will try to improve there thanks for letting me know
regarding rest of the things u need to wait
glad u like the story
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: tabby999

hi suhana

read the update
its painful ...maanin his remorse and geet in pain ..
i want maan to tell entire truth to his family and let all decide what they want to do ..
i hope after hearing the reason all will act sensibly feeling too bad for geet ..
all her happiness is going in vain and tears ...she deserve happiness ..hope drs find some solution ..
thank u for update
waiting for next



hi tabby
yup she deserve happiness but uske happiness ka rasta maan se hokar nikalta h she needs to know this

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