CHURA LIYA HAI TUM NE JO DIL KO ... MG * Ch 4,p 112, new thd link pg 1 - Page 90

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Posted: 10 years ago
Wow...2 updates in 2 days... thnx
So pinky made a boo boo😛... I was actually wondering - how come Adi dint recognize her - I mean - he would have definitely told Maan then that the girl in need is Geet... And Maan is going to take her to met Dadima as his fiance... lolz
just hope Geet doesn't mess it up in front of Dadima
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Posted: 10 years ago
So Geet was at farm house cos of Pinky's misunderstanding and over smartness. She was there for her job related thing.

Maan took Geet as the girl appointed to be his jhoothi mangetar. Yeh toh syappa ho gaya.

Strange thing was he asked her to be his fake mangetar when just in last update he was wishing her to be the girl he could introduce as his mangetar to Dadima. So why did he add jhoothi when Geet was in front of him?

Geet was as shocked as Maan to see him after so many years. Both went numb n silent.

Flashback scene was really really beautiful.

Maan wasnt ready to go in Navaratri but Geet ka naam sunte hi mann mei laddo phuta and he couldnt ignore his heart's wish despite she being ignorant towards him like always. Pura ka pura paagal hai.

He came there just to have his fill to look at her, awww that was so cute. He even got jealous seeing Rahul approaching her n trying to get her attention. But Geet dint even spared him a look n when he still kept going after her, she gave him a clear message of being uninterested.

Maan's gestures to call her over n she ignoring him too was really cute. She is really innocent n nave. But Maan still got her in a corner away from all eyes to tell her about her dress, but in process hurt her unknowingly earning a slap from her. The whole thing was super surprising. Both dint realize their actions. He was bound to get angry after that but yet he dint walk away n told her the reason why he was signalling her to come over. He dint let his ego come in btw them when it came to protect her. Admire him so much for that.

Geet did regret her actions n wanted to apologize but Maan dint came. He was hurt n angry but yet again he bend down in front of his own heart and went to see her for the last time as he was going away for his college soon. He really cant resist her at this age of 18 aage pata nahi kya hoga?

Maan managed to get her attention for the entite night by ignoring her. But him silently coming n standing next to her for the couple dance put a smile on my face. He so adorable. Kitna bhi gussa kyun na ho but he can never see her with someone else. He is so so possessive.

Her simple apology was enough to melt him. Uppar se hero smartly got all her attention only on him by challenging her. Good going.

If she was focused more on winning so hardly noticed anything about him. Where as he focused on her beautiful face n gorgeous features right in front of her without making it obvious. But after few moments she started checking him out casually n compared him with her favorite BW hero. She is funny.

Maan's darken gaze, wandering eyes did made her feel something alien but in her innocence she dint gave much thought to it n again focused on her winning. Their interactions here were cute. She directly told him his kala jaadu wont work on her, hilarious.

At the end he purposely lost to her, so sweet. But dil haar chuka hai toh challenges toh kuch bhi nahi hai. Uppar se he was being generous. Uski jeet ki khushi mei treat dene chala so that he get the chance to talk to her. But Geet declined as she was simply uninterested in boys then.

Her accussing him n then calling all boys stupid was really cute. His small kiss on her finger again made her feel something alien. The unknown feelings he is making her feel are confusing her nave heart n mind. She is still a kid to understand anything. So I'm assuming she dint go to meet him in the cafe as he requested. Uppar se you called this navaratri as their last meeting. So guessing he must have gone away for his college n in this time she left Mumbai giving no chance for Maan to talk to her.

This separation also must be one reason of his change.

Back to present mei Dadima seems to be hospitalized n Maan without thinking, asking or waiting for her reply to his previous question rushes with her towards hospital.

Now I'm so looking forward to see what happens when Dadi meets Geet. Also when Maan comes to know that Geet is not the girl who was asked to his mangetar. Ismei Geet bichari is clueless n confused. Lol

-Sanjana!
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Posted: 10 years ago
Chpt 3 Maan realises Geet may be in danger and rushes to her rescue. Luckily he arrives just in the nick of time. Poor Geet doesn't want to lose her mothers chain as it is a symbol of her presence in her life. Maan being older doesn't understand her emotional attachment to the chain and after scolding her tries to make her understand that had her mother been alive she would not want her to endanger her life. The incident also makes Maan realise how important Geet is to him and he is heartbroken when he comes back during college holiday to find Geet and her Darji have moved.

Chpt 4 Maan is a changed person. From a happy go lucky teenager he has become a hard but lonely young man who has lost his parents and trying to do everything to keep his Dadima happy. To the extent that he is prepared to enter into a fake engagement with someone, but fate has some other plans. Geet has arrived at his house misled by Pinky and Maan thinks she is there to portray his fake fiancee. He has already given his heart fully to her before he left for college how will he control himself in her presence. He knows what he feels for her but Geet was too young to understand what was happening to her during the festivities - will she able to understand now and how will she respond? Waiting to find out the answers to my queries.
Edited by Alpha01 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
Beautifully written part.
Loved it a lot.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Beautiful update. loved it so much, So simple but heart warming. Everything perfect , past and present and Pinki's disaster this time was awesome. Loving this story.

Thanks for pm.
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Posted: 10 years ago
Oh my
this was mind blowing!! Avi ! Girl u just melted my heart!! awesome flashback, how he met her for the last time before parting.. he , even at that raw age couldn't stand her being stared at, the button scene , her slap.. oops.. and then her sweet apology.. the way he laughed out loud when she accused him of doing kala jadu on her. haye
their dance, the eye stare and oh how he lost!!!
the present is too many incidents, Geet at the farmhouse, Maan rushing her to the ICU without much explaining or catching up
Pinky u disaster queen!! mwwwaaahhh !! 😃
thank you for the pm !!
waiting for next part !
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Posted: 10 years ago
thanks avi for the PM...
the update was cute... she being innocent and he irrevocably falling in love and wants to let her know his feelings...
her tender age makes her so innocent and leaves her confused about maan's actions😳
and what a royal goofup...
looking forward to see how the story shapes up
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Posted: 10 years ago
It was amazing chapter...loved it to the core
The present or part both are amazing
Well written
Waiting for next
Update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
Wonderfully written lovely part Avi dear... You portrait maneet in such a manner that I love them... Past and present both are so good... And pinky as usual disaster...
But Avi if geet can recognize maan then why not maan...
Thanks for the pm and this lovely part...
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Posted: 10 years ago
Di chapter 4 password... plzzzx

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