CHURA LIYA HAI TUM NE JO DIL KO ... MG * Ch 4,p 112, new thd link pg 1

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Sharmeen

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Posted: 10 years ago

#591

Originally posted by: singh24

😃
me too like this ..
😃 Fab comment Sheen...

Thanku Babbie 😃

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Sharmeen

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Posted: 10 years ago

#592

Originally posted by: dqno1

Thud!!!

Bohut khoob 👏

baat nikli hai
toh har ek baat karne ka iraada hai 😆

Isi baat pe ek shair arz hai 😲

Yahan tou har baat pe baat nikalti hai..
Yahan touuu har baat pe baat nikalti hai..
Baat na nikle tou isi tarah ke shairo pe Wah Wah nikalti hai 😆

WAH WAH WAH WAH 😆 😆

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Posted: 10 years ago

#593

Originally posted by: _SharmeenLuvsGC

Isi baat pe ek shair arz hai 😲

Yahan tou har baat pe baat nikalti hai..
Yahan touuu har baat pe baat nikalti hai..
Baat na nikle tou isi tarah ke shairo pe Wah Wah nikalti hai 😆

WAH WAH WAH WAH 😆 😆

😆😆

Oye Nauri ka kaam tum mat kiya karo😆 waise acchi thi😉

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priya

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Posted: 10 years ago

#594

😃hello avi,

hi sheen

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amu20

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Posted: 10 years ago

#595

woah!!!kahaani mein twist!!!!grt going!!waiting for more!!👏😊

Edited by amu20 - 10 years ago

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vrinda22

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Posted: 10 years ago

#596

Maan saved geet

He was angry that she put her life in danger for gold chain

He went as bg till her house

Maan flatterred with her one smile

Present...omg..itna kuch hogaya

Maans innocence lost along with his cricket

Geet has moved somewhere

N now she is there

N what he asked thinking as a hired girl

Joote mangetar

Nicepart

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Downhill

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Posted: 10 years ago

#597

thanks avi for the pm...
coming to the update
so our hero maan came at the nick of the time and saved his heroine from goons...
geet is very innocent which shows in her talks... she is holding on to the chain gifted by her mother, even if it is at the cost of her life..😭..
its sad to lose a parent at such tender age, or worse if you havent seen ur mother... just breaks your heart😭

the leap or rather the present was a complete turnaround... with maan having to grow up and take responsibilities and leave his love for cricket ... he had to grow up with the sudden loss of his parents and failing health of his dadi

am glad that despite him having searched everywhere for geet, when he had almost given up hope, geet landed on his doorsteps... though dut to compelling circumstances as his fake fiance...
looking forward to all the fun, romance, bickering and their sizzling chemistry...
bless adi for getting geet to his maan😆😳

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Ann

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Posted: 10 years ago

#598

A knight in shining armour... Maan ...

I loved when maan addressed her in mind... Jungli Billi to beegi Billi..

She is really a jhalli...

Maan is fully floored by her smile n innocence...

Its quiet sad when he had to take up the responsibilities altogether...

N geet n dardji,s disappearance ...

Nw fake fianc hunting to satisfy daadima...

N the twist is fantastic...

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fatema_007

@fatema_007

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Posted: 10 years ago

#599

o my my wut a turn of events 😕
Maan realized his feelings long back but was too late to take any action nd Geet was too young to think about her 'magnet' like attraction towards Maan 🤔
They got seperated by destiny nd now Maan is a totally different person..gone were the carefree days, my heart goes out for him 😭
just hope destiny brings his love back to him in the form of Geet again nd he can be the same Maan he once used to be 😊

Edited by fatema_007 - 10 years ago