CHURA LIYA HAI TUM NE JO DIL KO ... MG * Ch 4,p 112, new thd link pg 1 - Page 117

I want to read part 3 plz plz plz give me a link

Chapter 1.
I was grinning to myself all the time while i was reading. So cute it was.
Moti ...rudy..
I remember when boys of our area used to play ...more than playing thety used to shout..ae ball de ball de...pakad ...pakad...out hai ...out hai..bowliiing bhai bowliiing...when i used to paas that area i used to literally run ki mere ko na lag jaaye...kitni baar toh ball khidki se andar..mummy nhi deti thi ball...sab rone gaane lagte the ...they grew up ...phir khali khali lagta tha...but now i am back in holidays..i see my brother's team has taken care of that khalipan.

Amazing beginning Avi..will want to read more !

I read it as pehli mulakat and then observed ki theres something wrong ...why does the word look so big and then when i read i couldnt help laughing. Pehli mukka laat...
Out of topic but remined me of the song naak mukka..:D:D

I just came across this story
The first is captivating
I wanna read the story
Can u pls send me your blog link
I wanna know what happen next

Interesting start omg geet and maan fight hahahahhaha

Nice concept story starting from childhood usually i like these kinda stories n as its ur story am sure it gonna be gud as well

Nice update maan fida on geet feeling so much attracted towardz her now new gang entry lets c wht gonna happen

Very nice update maan protect geet n then scold her for putting her life in danger so sweet geet moved o o but thats for gud
They meet again n seedha mangniii yipeee but jhooti no problem

Lolxxx no worries adi babu maan gonna luv this disaster luvly update tgere dance while ankho mein aankhein daal k was owsem scene luved it

Chapter 1