MG~ SS ~The Bliss - UPDATED Pt 8 / Pg 130 / 24nd Mar.................. - Page 5

with new concept wow !

Congrats for new story...
Nice Prolog
Waiting for the updates..

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Nice start...Congratzzz for the new SS...

lovely prologue interesting characters waiting for ur update

Congrats on your new story. I loved the prologue. So here every character are Doc, its nice. I really want to read your stories cos I feel Geet in your FFs are very strong.

But can I ask you a question? I hope to get a reply from you despite not liking my comment.

I have read your two stories so far n have loved n enjoyed them throughly. The Punishment n Mist 1. Both the stories were amazing n Geet was strong in both stories. But when I started to read the next story I notice one thing which was very common n now is really getting repetitive in all your stories character sketch n that is Maan's character.

Why in every story he is shown in love with someone else but they either cheat on him or the girl he loves doesnt loves him back (Mist 2 talking about Pari) or get marries with someone else? (Talking about Nayantara here though I'm yet to know if here Maan's love was one sided like Mist 2 or Nayantara too loved him)

So dont you think this is getting very repetitive? I remember reading Mist 2 character sketch but seeing again that he was in love with Pari n Pari dint loved him n married someone else I just couldnt go ahead with the story feeling a lot of similarities with Mist 1.

Then next I remember reading The Torment's prologue n even there Maan was in love with Sam. In The Jinx too his lady love was Sam again, so after just reading same character sketch of Maan in every story I couldnt go ahead with all three stories despite liking Punishment n Mist 1 so so much. It made me feel that your stories are getting same seeing Maan in love already in every stories of yours.

Not only Maan but even Geet's CS are quite repetitive specially when it comes to her family. In almost every story her family is shown greedy, selfish n heartless people. And she despite shown so educated n beautiful living or shifting in aboard never had affairs or fallen in love with someone else.

So frankly speaking when I opened this thread I was fearing to read the same CS for Maan n that is what has happened. Even here in this story Maan is shown in love with Nayantara. Why cant his first love be Geet or why cant Geet have an affair with someone? I mean if I remember correctly then in every stories Geet was never ever shown in love with anyone. She ultimately has shown falling in love with Maan only. So if Maan can fall in love with somone else in every stories of yours why cant Geet? Why she has to fall for Maan only when Maan can be shown n accepted by readers showing him loving someone else every time?

I'm just saying this cos the background of the stories are getting monotonous. So try something new with both Maan n Geet's characters na? It will be something fresh for your new readers like me who really want to read your stories but the CS stops them.

I never came forward to put my views on the Mist 2, Torment n Jinx cos I dint wanted to hurt your feelings n thought to better keep shut if I'm not continuing the stories. But this time I really wanted to read your story but the same character sketch is stopping me again. I'm confused if I should go ahead this time or not. I would have kept quite this time too but I just couldnt resist it.

I'm really sorry for my comment has hurt you. I just wrote what I observed n notice in all your stories n thought to tell you this so that it doesnt feel repetitive.

-Sanjana!

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