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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: vrinda22

just came from village
now i ll be free i think
2 daYS I LL BE REGULAR


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Good Night Dona, tabby nd Valli..
sweet dreams...
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di aapne daughters ki gift dikhayi jiju he kya diya?
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hood night babiefi Vallidi tabby...
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OMG.. What a dhamaka update.. every truth is out.. n Finally family knew that truth.. though DM is not believing yash believed that.. becoz he too joined dots together.. n he beat up Maan.. indeed.. Maan deserve that.. every parents should do that with their son.. who disrespect others dignity.. n here Maan broke everything.. now excited for next part..
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(For banner credit goes to my dear priya)

The Jinx

An object or person that brings bad luck.

It can take you days, months, even years to better your life but it only takes a second for you to ruin someone else's.


Prologue
No one is ever created to be perfect we all have some kind of flaw that makes us unique and make us who we are ...
Many times we curse our flaws and look at them with shame .
But , sometimes for d most blessed of us , God use these flaws to soften our spirit and turn us
into a kinder more beautiful and compassionate
soul ...

Note... This is a fiction inspired by some facts and incidents form our surroundings . If someone find any resemblance in d title and story line they r welcome to leave ur comments on my page (plzz don't pm me)wit
h d link . I'll try my best not to touch any body's work. Need ur love and support to make it an interesting FF.





Part - 96


Part - 97

We swallow greedily any lie that flatters us , but we sip only little by little at a truth we find bitter.


There wr many loopholes which wr forcing DM to protect Maan ,, she cdn't believe that Maan cd think like this for Geet ,, in all those yrs when Geet was in KM he never looked nd talked to her properly ,, he nd She always threatened Geet to stay away from Khurana family nd she had maintained that distance , then how cd that happened ? DM wanted to know d whole truth nd only then she cd blame Maan.

This is right ppl don't accept accusations on them easily nd try their best to get a weak point to protect themselves ,, DM was also behaving like that ,, though she was feeling guilty somewhere in her heart coz of that Sam's incident for not trusting Geet , but her blind love nd trust in Maan forcing her to think on all d possibilities ,, she was not ready to accept listening only Maan's side .

DM: Yash , I m not protecting him but wanted to come on conclusion after knowing d whole truth ,, u cn't blame Maan only listenting his side where he was not sure nd accepting his sin only on some doubts ,, let him say everything.

Yash: he is not a kid Maa ,, if he had some doubts means he knew .

Rashi: Yash , but Geet didn't show nd complaint against Maan ,, I m shocked why she hide this ? she didn't open her mouth for once ,, it was d matter of her self respect nd she was well educated ,, if she cd decide to give birth a child then she cd voice out against Maan ,, I cn believe that Maan misbehaved with her but it doesn't prove that her child belongs to Maan ,, she said that she was in love nd he left her ,, we cn't come on conclusion on doubts ,, we have to know d all facts ,, plzz calm down nd sit here .

She made him sit on bed lil away from Maan nd DM held Maan , wipe his blood nd made him sit on bed near her ,, she was also very tense nd shocked ,, Maan eyes wr dropping tears ,, he inwardly cursing himself for putting his family in grief nd pain ,, there was a fear in his heart for Geet too ,, she cdn't face Qs nd arguments ,, she clearly said that she cdn't bear any accusation on her nd manu,, his heart was sinking thinking about her reactions.

DM : Maan , when u r not sure nd Geet was rejecting then why on d bases of ur some doubts u cn say that it was all ur fault nd Manu is ur son ,, most importantly why Geet is rejecting it when u r ready to accept ? Why didn't she accuse u ?

Maan sniffed : 1st of all it it my request to all plzzz don't ask anything to Geet ,, I m here at face all accusations nd punishment,, this was her condition before coming in KM that I won't open my mouth ,, she'll leave this place at once if she come to know ,, she feared for alligations nd doubts for her nd Manu ,, u all cn say anything to me nd I m here to bear.

DM: what nonsense ..? after facing a betrial u again doing d same ..? how cn we trust anything on ur doubts ,, she is not accepting nd forcing u to hide this ,, Why? How cn we trust this witout knowing d facts from both of u,, Maan, we need to ask her too.

Maan: plzz,, it's my request ,, nd I don't have any doubt now,, I m sure nd accepting ,, plzz don't put her in any Q ,, I don't want to lose them ,, u cn ask anything to me .

DM nd Rashi wr confused but Yash's mind was believing seeing Maan's lower eyes with shame ,, he cdn't ask few things directly to Maan in front of DM nd Rashi ,, that wd be awful ,, those facts cd hurt nd humiliate Geet too that is why she was not ready to face any Q ,, it was like opening her wounds again ,, No , he wdn't allow anyone to question Geet .

Yash: Geet se koi kuch nahi puchega,, we have to trust Maan ,, he is not a kid nd accepting his misdeed that was enough for me .

DM: Yash , hum ek dhoka kha chuke hein ,, ek ladki kitna bada game khel gai , Maan tab bhi bacche nahi thy ,, aur agar Maan ne kuch galat kiya hei to Geet ko humse share kerna chahiye ,, at least ab to kerna chahiye jab Maan sabke samne accept ker rahe hein .

Maan: DM , mai kaafi koshish ker chukka hu , lekin wo es per baat kerne ko ready nahi .

Rashi : but why ?

Maan: she said that it cn ruin d happiness of our family nd all cn blame her , curse her like we nd her family did yrs back ,, it cd creat rift between d family ,, all felt ashamed nd hated me ,, she said that she wdn't accept anything in front of all nd cut all d ties with Khuranas.

Yash was listening quietly nd sensing Geet's fear nd insecurities,, she didn't trust him nd Rashi to share her grief nd pain ,, she feared that no one wd trust her nd cd blame her ,, sply Maan nd Maa ,, that was not a small thing ,, there wr many things which blocked her way to share her pain with us ... God !! how helpless was she ?

Yash: theek hi to kaha rahi thi,, kis se kahati , kaun yakeen kerta ussper ,, diya kya ess pariwaar ne usse ,, nafrat aur apmaan ,, aur mai bhi to apni responsibilities mei fail hi raha ,, mujhe per bhi viswaas nahi ker saki wo ,, kya soch ker laya tha usse apne sath aur kaisi zindgi mili usse yahan ,, ku humse koi ummeed rakhti wo ? Aur aage bhi kya soch ker rakhegi ?

Ab to Geet se poochne ka bhi koi haq nahi raha hume ,, kis muh se kahoge usse ki usne Maan ki shikayat ku nahi ki ? mai puchta hu tumse Maa ... agar wo kahati to kya tum yakeen ker leti uska .. nahi ,, kabhi nahi kerti aur na ye tumhara Ladla Maan ,, tum dono usse hi blame ker dete ,,aur tab kya Maa, tum to aaj bhi shaq ker rahi ho , aur afsoos ki aaj Rashi bhi tumhara sath de rahi hei.

Yash looked at DM nd Rashi painfully who felt ashamed at Yash's remark ,, DM was dumbstuck ,, Yash's accusations wr right .

There was deep silence in d room ,, Rashi nd DM exchanged a look ,, ashamed nd defeated ,, both looked at disheartened, ashamed nd broken Maan nd Yash ,, Rashi's eyes started pouring tears ,, she cdn't see them like this ,, she always supported Yash but as a mother she had many dreams for Maan nd this ugly truth broke her ,, her motherly love nd trust on her son made her week nd she didn't believe that he cd stoop so low nd cd misbehave with Geet ,, she gathered her courage , placed her hand on Yash's nd spoke .

Rashi: I m sorry Yash , I disappointed u , but I didn't blame Geet too ,, I want to know d truth nd Maan was accepting on d bases of his doubts .

Yash: nd from where these doubts come ,, somewhere he knew very well that he did something wrong .

Rashi: but why Geet is hiding now when Maan is accepting ,, we'll support her if she shares with us ,, we have to find out a way ,, if it's true then how cn she live away from us ,, we have to talk her Yash.

Yash: do u remember how she left this house ,, cn u imagine her pains nd sufferings , how she bore all that ,, is that easy for her to forget ? I M shocked now how she was bearing this Maan nd us nd accepted to live here after that? Tell me Maan how u made her agreed to come here ?( Yash glared at Maan)

Maan: last time I requested her for u ,, I knew u missed her a lot nd I was also feeling guilty to blame her nd to force her to leave this KM .

Yash: nd this time ?

Maan: I blackmailed her that if she tried to live away from KM then I wd tell u nd all that Manu is my son nd I misbehaved her .

Rashi: i m not getting , why she wanted to hide this if u r accepting ?

Maan: she feared that u all won't trust her nd it cn ruin d lovely bonding which she has with dad nd u ,, mainly she feared coz of DM's accusations , I accepted her condition bcoz I wanted to bring her here ,, I wanted to gain her trust so that she cn share her heart with me nd I cn't stay away from Manu ,, I cn't leave them away , alone,, helplessly I agreed not to open my mouth .

Rashi: now what ? Is this right to hide d truth ? We have to talk her nd she have to accept ,, there is no other way.

Maan : nahi mom ,, plzz let me handle myself .

Rashi: tumne kaisa handle kiya wo dekh liya ,, tum bhi to sach ko chupa hi rahe thy ,, lekin ye kab tak ?

Maan looked at her nd Yash helplessly ,, he was fearing for Geet ,, she was not able to face this situation all of sudden nd she wdn't accept nd that situation cd sour d relations .


Precap ---- Yash favoured Geet nd defied Maan ...

if u want Geet in this family then think to bring her in ur life 1st , with all respect nd love.

Edited by singh24 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
hi babie,,,,😃
4 u,,,,

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Originally posted by: LILY111144

hi babie,,,,😃

4 u,,,,

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lily dear lakshu ki trd per aa jao
Chai per charcha wahin karenge..😆😆



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Posted: 10 years ago
rashi dm accusion finaly yash opened his mouth and shut all
Edited by tamanna1391 - 10 years ago

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