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Posted: 10 years ago
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for the New Thread dear👏👏
Awesome update!!!Maan want Geet to stay in KM but Geet's fear and her insecurities she denied it...Loved it so much...waiting for the next update.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Congrats for the new thread
HAPPY NEW YEAR
loved the update
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wow lovely emotional update..te way my maan heart crying seeing geet hiding from him and her ignorance was lovely emotional.te way geet decide to stay away from him and my maan pleading to her but geet was scared to face his family and thinking how they wil react after they know te truth and my maan ki helpless was lovely emotional.i love te update
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To emotional hope geet agree to stay in KM continue soon
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Nice part..
Congrats for the new thread..
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my dear friends ...


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my dear friends ...


updating





Edited by singh24 - 10 years ago
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(For banner credit goes to my dear priya)

The Jinx

An object or person that brings bad luck.

It can take you days, months, even years to better your life but it only takes a second for you to ruin someone else's.


Prologue
No one is ever created to be perfect we all have some kind of flaw that makes us unique and make us who we are ...
Many times we curse our flaws and look at them with shame .
But , sometimes for d most blessed of us , God use these flaws to soften our spirit and turn us
into a kinder more beautiful and compassionate
soul ...

Note... This is a fiction inspired by some facts and incidents form our surroundings . If someone find any resemblance in d title and story line they r welcome to leave ur comments on my page (plzz don't pm me)wit
h d link . I'll try my best not to touch any body's work. Need ur love and support to make it an interesting FF.





Part - 79


Part - 80

He was sitting there near her holding her hands ,, both wr hurt nd wounded ,, he was already bearing d guilt of his sin nd her fear was making that more heavy ,, it was not easy to bring their lives on a smooth surface , but he was determined to keep them close to him ,, Maan was not that type of person who run away from d truth ,, he was high headed but now he was very responsible nd caring he learnt form his mistakes .

Maan ran his mind to make her agree to stay in KM before she made excuses in front of his Dad ,, he was sure that she had some plan in her mind to stay away nd his dad wdn't force her much as U&A Sam wr going with her ,, his requests wdn't melt her but Manu nd his manipulation cd work ,, he didn't want to anger her so tried to mold her .

Maan sadly : Geet ,, tum pahale bhi to KM mei rahi thi waise ab bhi ruk sakti ho na ,, usme koi prob hai kya ?

Geet looked at him : tab mai aapke kahane per Uncle ke liye ek guest ki tarah se gai thi ,, lekin ab mera kaam hei ,, office hei aur meri life alag hei ab ,, U&A Sam mere sath honge ,, KM mei rahana theek nahi .

Maan: ku ,, essa kuch nahi hei Geet ,, wo bhi raha sakty hein koi prob nahi hogi unhe wahan .

Geet: mr Khurana ,, wo dono mujhe janty hei aur comfortable hei mere aur Manu ke sath lekin KM mei nahi honge ,, plzz aap jidd matt kijiye ,, we cn't live there .

Maan: Geet ,, how manu live away ,, he was going a chance to play again with Jojo again nd u r overlooking his happiness ,, plzz think for him ,, i'll manage everything for all Geet ,, don't think to stay away ,, I want manu in KM ,, that was his home too nd let him enjoy there with his family .

D word Jojo nd KM got manu's attention nd he stood up on sofa ,, looked at Maan nd Geet ,, Geet was unaware that manu was listening their talks but Maan got that nd spoke again lil loud so that manu cd listen,, he wanted to make team with his son.

Maan: Geet , u know that manu loves Jojo nd missed him , now he is getting a chance again then don't spoil that ,, u always give priority to his happiness then why not this time ,nd Geet I won't say anything to dad if u accept to stay in KM near me ,, I want u nd manu infront of me .

Geet: again u r blackmailing me .

Maan: u left no option for me Geet ,, it is straight forward Geet ,, if u want to hide d fact from dad-mom then accept my wish for Manu nd me otherwise I m ready to face their anger nd outcomes ,, now d ball is in ur court ,, ya to tum sab KM mei rahoge aur mai chup rahunga ,, ya fir mai dad ke samne confess karunga ,, fir jo hoga wo milker face karenge ... Bolo ,, aur waise yahi theek rahega , ku ?

Geet shoot an angry glare at him ,, she replied him curtly .

Geet : if u have decided to give pain to ur family then fine i'll tell clearly nd break all my ties with Khuranas .

Maan gulped hard with this turn of event but tried to manage : I left it on u Geet if u want my mouth shut then stay with us in KM otherwise let them face pain coz of me ,, I m really very unlucky nd giving only pain to all who r related to me .

Geet groaned in anger nd Maan held his ears mouthing Sorry nd pleaded plzzz.

Manu: mommy al u angly ? scold uncle Maan ?

Maan smiled : yes Baby , see ur mommy is angry with me nd not forgiving me .( he looked with a puppy face at Geet ,, Geet rolled her eyes nd huffed .

Geet: stop all this Mr Khurana ,, manu per kya asar padega , aap wahan chair per baitho ,, mere liye ye sab accept kerna easy nahi hei ,, mai U&A ke sath KM mei nahi raha sakti ,, ye 2-3 din ka stay nahi hei 2-3 mnths ka hei ,, wo dono pasand nahi karenge ,, comfortable nahi honge .

Maan: OK fine , I have another solution ,, u cn live in out house with U&A ,, that was lil separate from KM nd u all cn live there without any interference ,,at least ye to accept ker lo ,, mere samne to raho dono,, it's good for security reason too .

Geet became puzzled ,, she was fearing for this,, now how to avoid this situation ,, she planned to take U&A with her to make her shield but he put condition again nd she had to find out a smooth way without hurting anyone ,, her main prob was Maan ,, she wanted to shut his mouth .

Manu: mommy , no angel ,, uncle is saying solly .

Maan: yes baby I m saying sorry ,, Geet plzz maan jao na ,, I m sorry , I m not coercing u but it was for Manu nd for all's happiness ,, I m accepting ur condition na ?

Geet: God !! stop this drama , nd let me think ,, now go to ur home ,, it's getting late .

Maan: no , plzz let me stay here in guest room ,, I was away from last 3 days nd missed u both ,,let me stay with Manu .( Geet was staring at him ,, how freely he was expressing his feeling )

Manu: yeah mommy ,,, yeee ,, uncle Maan I sleep with u .

Manu jumped nd ran towards Maan nd hung on his back encircling his arms around his neck ,, Maan gave a wide smile securing Manu in his arms ,, this was really a tough time for Geet ,, her lil child was addicting to Maan nd maan was taking advantages .

Get was sitting there lost in thoughts nd Maan went in kitchen having manu with him for warming his milk ,, both wr busy in their chatting ,, Geet was feeling miserable nd annoyed ,, she was not finding any solution to escape form this prob,, she cd handle uncle Yash but this Maan trapped her again ,, She came in sence when she felt a pat on her shoulder nd turned her face ,, Maan was standing near her having Manu in his arms.

Geet: haann ,, kya hua ?

Maan: where r u lost Geet ? I called u 2-3 times .

Geet: manu so gaya kya ?

Maan: trying ,,he wants to sleep with me Geet ,, tumhe koi prob to nahi ?

Geet was helpless in front of her kid's wish ... Kya kahe ?

Geet: how u manage with a kid ? ,, he'll disturb ur sleep .

Maan: so what ? tumhari bhi to kerta hei ,,, mai manage ker lunga ,, 2 raat raha hei mere paas.

Geet reluctantly nodded in yes ,, Maan knew she is not happy , but doing this for Manu .

Maan: Geet dil nahi chata to rahane do ,, mai manu ko eski cot mei sula deta hu.

Geet: no it's OK .

Maan went in guest room nd made Manu sleep in bed ,, cover him properly nd moved to come out ,,he find Geet was there with water bottle nd glass in a tray ,, she kept that in side table then check Manu .

Maan : i'll take care him Geet .

Geet: hhuumm ,, wo I want to say some thing to u .

Maan: what ?

Geet: wo ,, I don't want to live in KM ,, plzz ,, it hurt me ,, her eyes turned wet.

Maan felt a lump in his throat seeing her in pain ,, nearer her ,, cupped her facend wiped her tears with his thumbs , made her see at him nd spoke in a cracky voice ... kash mei ateet ko badal pata Geet .

Geet: ateet ko bhool ku nahi jaty ,, ku khud ko bhi aur sabko takleef dena chahaty ho ?

Maan: ye to khud ko mitaker hi mumkin hei Geet ,, jeety jee to na...

Geet put her hand on his mouth to shut him : esse nahi bolo ,, mara saya waise bhi aap logo ke liye accha nahi ,, meri wajha se apne liye bura matt bolo .,, aap nahi samjhty ,, agar KM mei mere jane se kuch bhi galat hua ya kisi ko dukh pahuncha to mai bardast nahi ker paungi ,, mai us ghar ki khushiyon ke beech nahi aana chahati .

Maan held her hand : khud ko curse matt karo Geet ,, tum per mai koi elzaam nahi aane dunga ,, mai galat hu aur mai accept karunga sab ,, daro nahi Geet ,, aur ab us ghar ki khushiyan tumse aur Manu se hein .

Geet steped back noded in a No ,, nahi ,, mujhe uss ghar se dur hi rahane do .

Maan (painfully) : G e e t ,,, Geet mai tumhari baat maan raha hu na ,, fir ku darr rahi ho ? aur out house mei rahogi ,, wo to alag hi hei ,, mai dad-mom ko inform ker du ?

Geet: no ,,,,, not now ,, plzzz .

Maan: OK ,, fine ,, jab tum theek samjho ,, relax ,,, go nd sleep ,, GN n don't worry about Manu ,, trust me .

Geet : hhuumm ,,, GN ,, ,, cover him properly at nyt .

Maan: sure ,, GN . ( geet went out from d room with heavy heart,, Maan changed nd settled near Manu ,, cocooned him near him , pecked his forehead softly nd slept with a contented smile , but Geet's fear was paining him .


Precap ----- all r in KM ... Maan is blithesome ...


Part - 81



Edited by singh24 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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🤗 Hi priya ,, lakshu ki trd per aa..

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Posted: 10 years ago
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hello di's
how are you all??

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