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sorry for not coming ystrdy..
😆😆 kabhi-kabhi chutti banti hei...
updating now...
lots of love,,,,





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(For banner credit goes to my dear priya)

The Jinx

An object or person that brings bad luck.

It can take you days, months, even years to better your life but it only takes a second for you to ruin someone else's.


Prologue
No one is ever created to be perfect we all have some kind of flaw that makes us unique and make us who we are ...
Many times we curse our flaws and look at them with shame .
But , sometimes for d most blessed of us , God use these flaws to soften our spirit and turn us
into a kinder more beautiful and compassionate
soul ...

Note... This is a fiction inspired by some facts and incidents form our surroundings . If someone find any resemblance in d title and story line they r welcome to leave ur comments on my page (plzz don't pm me)wit
h d link . I'll try my best not to touch any body's work. Need ur love and support to make it an interesting FF.





Part - 84


Part - 85

They all sat there nd had a lil talk ,, Geet gave her excuses for living like this nd why she want to keep lil distance ,, her solid reason was U&A Sam's comfort nd her solo responsibilities for them which she want to take .

Geet: Uncle ,, they did a lot for me nd I cn't ignore them ,, they won't feel free in KM bcoz they didn't know u all nd to live like a guest for long is not comfortable for them ,, they r elder ppl nd have some habits which they cn't change ,, plzz try to understand ,, it's a matter of 2-3 mnths not for 2-3 days.

Yash got some of her points but he was still feeling bad that she was living separate .

Yash: fir bhi Geet mujhe ye accha nahi laga , ki tum esse OH mei raho .

Geet: KM mei to mai pahale bhi nahi thi ,, dur hi thi ,, aur OH bhi to guest house type hi hei ,, I m happy there ,, aap sabke samne to hu ,, let me manage plzz.

Yash: keep a servant there for help ,, u won't do anything.

Geet: uncle ,, mai wahan bhi to kerti hu ,, even aapka beta bhi ab cooking kerty hein,, ask him .

Yash looked at Maan nd he just gave a smile : not all d time dad ,, only BF.

Yash: I don't know ,, keep Satish there for help nd for manu.

Geet reluctantly accepted ,, seeing Yash lil relieved Geet nd Maan too got some relief ,, Rashi brought coffee for all nd now they started other talks ,, they asked where was her new office located ? When was she joining her office ? How she'll go ? For how long mr & mrs Sam wr here ? Geet replied all nd then excused to go back .

Geet: uncle/aunty ab mei chalti hu ,, uncle ko bhi kafi office work hoga .all got up to go nd Maan took Manu in his arms .

Maan: Geet manu ko mai chod dunga kuch der ke baad .


Manu: yeah mommy ,, we play .

Geet nodded nd Maan went with Manu in his room ,, his started playing with him in corridor in front of his room ,, both met after whole day nd enjoying ,, Maan was throwing ball nd Manu was hitting with a small unbreakable kid's bat ,, (Maan kept all his games secure in d room which he bought for manu's last visit).

Geet spent few more min with Rashi nd then excused ,, she took Manu's bottle bag nd went to hand Maan ,, she was going towards them with a smile lost in their game nd Manu hit d ball nd that straight Geet's forehead ,, aauuch ... Geet ,, mommy . Geet placed her hand there ,, d boll was very light but it was hard plastic nd made d skin red .

Maan: Geet , dikhao , zor se lagi kya ?

Manu: mommy ,,, solly .

Geet: it's OK baby ,, it's ok mr Khurana , I m fine ,, chota sa to ball hei .

Maan: ,, fir bhi ,, show me .

Manu held Geet's dupatta ,, Geet ruffled his hair to make him easy ,, Maan checked her forehead, caressed that with his thumb nd blow on d red mark ,, ooops ,, this lil gestured shuddered Geet ,, she looked at him nd their eyes met ,, d emotions which she saw in Maan's eyes stirred her heart ,, he was very close to her holding her shoulder with one hand nd caressing her forehead with his other thumb ,, their moments broke with Manu's words .

Manu: mommy ,, me kissi .

Geet knelt nd Manu kissed her forehead on her red mark , where a lil bump appeared .

Geet: don't worry baby ,, it's not paining ,, now go n play .

She got up nd forwarded Manu's bottle bag to Maan .

Geet: this is manu's milk bottle ,, make him drink before he sleep ,, there is cold outside so covered him when brought there .

Maan took that bag ,, he was staring at her thinking that she was not distancing manu from him nd thinking about their happiness ,, his heart pleased .

Maan with a smile : thanks , nd i'll take care ,, tum bhi ruko na .

Geet: nahi,, I have some work ,, have fun , u wr missing him ,, be good baby , OK.

Manu: OK mommy .

Geet left from there nd Maan was watching her holding bag nd Manu's hand ,, he so much wanted to stop her but cdn't .

Manu: uncle Maan ,, come , play .

Maan: yeah baby ,, come ,, let me keep ur milk in room .

They started their game again nd Geet went for OH ,, Rashi nd DM noticed that Manu was with Maan ,, both came there nd watched them playing ,, both d ladies wr surprized seeing manu nd Maan's attachment ,, Maan who didn'd come out from his room after dinner nd spent hrs in files nd work now playing with a kid ,, it was really a big surprise for them .

Rashi: Maan , from when u started playing with kids ? U spent this time in work .

Maan passed a smile throwing ball to Manu ,, Manu hit nd jumped with joy shouting ...fol (four) ,, Maan smiled nd said ,, yes ,, four ,, v good. Manu ,See both d grannies come to meet u .

Manu: glanny ,, u play with me ?

Rashi smiled: sorry manu baby ,, I cn't .

Maan: mom , DM , kuch kaam tha ?

DM: nahi bas esse hi dekhne aa gaye ,, MSK ko aaj bas Maan ke roop mei dekha .,, this child changed u a lot .

Maan smiled : yes ,, he changed me a lot DM. both d ladies exchanged d look nd took their leave ,, DM patted Maan's cheek nd ruffled Manu's hair nd Rashi knelt nd pecked manu's cheek.

Rashi: go nd enjoy sunny ,, Maan if he want something for manu then call me .

Maan: thanks mom , i'll manage , u both take rest ,, GN.

Both d ladies retired in their respective rooms ,, Yash was busy in his study nd Maan played few more time with manu nd then took him in his room settled him in his bed after refreshing him nd removing his shoes ,, covered him with blanket nd switch on d tv setting his fav show T&J .

Maan: Manu, baby now u watch ur tv show quietly nd I m doing some office work ,, OK.

Manu: OK , uncle .

Maan sat near him nd started reading his files ,, he was amazed that manu was obeying nd didn't disturb him ,, after an hr Manu felt drowsy nd started rubbing his eyes with yawns ,, Maan took out his milk bottle nd gave him to drink ,, he was caressing nd patting Manu's head to make him sleep ,, his mind went towards Geet nd recalled their close moments ,, he remembered how his heart titillated when Geet was close to him nd when he held her in library ,, he questioned himself .. Why he was feeling like this near her ?


Precap --- A doting Maan ...


Part - 86





sorry for mistakes ...


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😊 Updated ...Pg 77


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manu nd maan playing,,,,
both granies watching,,dm bhi mlt ho rehi hei
kab tak pta chalega manu maan ka beta hei,,??
lov de updtt,,
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hi babie,,
bohut thand hei yaar,,,,
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Originally posted by: LILY111144

hi babie,,

bohut thand hei yaar,,,,



🤗 Hi lily dear..
kahan gayab thi yaar...?
missed u ..
haan yaar bura haal hei
😃 do din off tha,,
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Posted: 10 years ago
Lovely update
maan and manu playing
I loved the update
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Originally posted by: singh24



🤗 Hi lily dear..
kahan gayab thi yaar...?
missed u ..
haan yaar bura haal hei
😃 do din off tha,,

anserd dis at priya s thrd
cofee pine ka dil karing bnane ka nehi,,,,😆😆
babie mera cmntnehi pda pg 68,,,,,
Edited by LILY111144 - 10 years ago
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amazing!!!
wanna see more maneet now!!

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