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Posted: 10 years ago
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Part 80

Awesome Update

Maan trying his best to make Geet understand but it truly is not easy for her too and this fact pains Maan yeah he again emotion blackmails
her but again he explains why he does this and right now I feel both of them are right in their places and its tough to get to an agreed point

I also fee U&A Sam should not go with Geet to India this way it can give
Geet and Maan a chance

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Posted: 10 years ago
#92
luvly ff..wid lots of emotions..
waiting 4 updat..
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Posted: 10 years ago
#93
Maan: no , plzz let me stay here in guest room ,,
I was away from last 3 days nd missed u
both ,,let me stay with Manu .

oved this line most...gd going...
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Posted: 10 years ago
#94
Nice part
Maan is trying his best to make her stay in KM.
at least now show some light moments between MG.
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Edited by singh24 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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(For banner credit goes to my dear priya)

The Jinx

An object or person that brings bad luck.

It can take you days, months, even years to better your life but it only takes a second for you to ruin someone else's.


Prologue
No one is ever created to be perfect we all have some kind of flaw that makes us unique and make us who we are ...
Many times we curse our flaws and look at them with shame .
But , sometimes for d most blessed of us , God use these flaws to soften our spirit and turn us
into a kinder more beautiful and compassionate
soul ...

Note... This is a fiction inspired by some facts and incidents form our surroundings . If someone find any resemblance in d title and story line they r welcome to leave ur comments on my page (plzz don't pm me)wit
h d link . I'll try my best not to touch any body's work. Need ur love and support to make it an interesting FF.





Part - 80


Part - 81


There Geet was restless ,, she was clueless where her life was driving her ,, d things which she was trying to avoid wr going to happen ,, she never thought to go again India but suddenly going for her job ,, d place KM ,which hurt her deep was going to become her destination again ,, last time she bore for Yash uncle but this time she was fearing coz of Maan ,, his awareness about d truth ,, his involvement in her nd Manu's life , nd manu's addiction with him cd create prob .

Accepting his mistake in front of all or his guilt was not d solution ,, d main prob was d result ... how wd all react ? What more had to come to bear for her ? Maan was in guilt nd ready to face everything but was she ... No ,, how cd she ? he was their son nd DM blindly support him ,, she deffo tried to protect him from uncle's wroth nd as she knew his parents too never think to be harsh towards him ,, for their family ,business, nd society they wd bend ,, it was their family matter that how they wd handle their son's misdeed, but what about her ?

Geet was tossing nd turning in bed ,, sleep was away from her eyes ,, she looked at Manu's empty cot nd got worried ,, got up nd went to check him in guest room .

The scene was d most cherished for any mom ... her child in d protective arms of his dad ,, Geet was standing near d bed nd admiring both ,, her heart was melting ... hope she cd stop d time .

Geet nearer nd adjusted d blanket over them ,, Manu had habit to throw d spread with his legs in sleep nd she covered him many time at nyt,, d slight touch awake Maan nd he open his eyes with jerk nd find Geet there.

Maan: Geet !! what happen ?

Geet: sorry ,, I disturbed ur sleep ,, I came to check Manu ,, he throw d blanket in sleep ,, sorry .

Maan smiled: it's OK ,, don't say sorry ,, it's mother love . So jao Geet , mai dekh lunga.

Geet: hummm. ( she came back nd sleep after few min )

Days started slipping ,, Geet's endless requests affect U&A Sam nd they agreed to visit India with her for some time ,, Geet arranged for their tickets too ,, Maan was also informed his co - director that he was going back to India,, Maan gave daily visits to site for a week to get all d info regarding d work ,, his main motive to come US was over ,, he was stretching d time for manu nd Geet nd when they wr going India then what he'll do here ?

After getting tickets nd visa Maan informed his Dad about him nd Geet's official visit in India with all ,, he told them to arrange Out house for Geet nd U&A Sam .

Yash: why OH Maan ,, they cn live in KM ?

Maan: Dad Geet didn't want to live in KM with U&A Sam but I forced her nd she agreed for OH ,, plzz tell mom to make all arrangements for them there .

Yash: for how much time she was coming ?

Maan: may be for 3 mnths .

Yash: Ok fine ,, i'll talk to her nd tell Rasshi to contact her for her requirements.

Maan: thanks Dad .

Yash was happy that they wr going to enjoy a family togetherness again nd informed Rashi about Maan's return nd Geet's visit.

Rashi became happy listening that but something hit her ,, Maan was saying to stay in US for more than a month but now he was coming with Geet ,, why he had changed his prog ?

Rashi called Geet who behaved very formal nd requested her not to take pain ,, in their talk Geet cleared that her Co. was ready to give home for them but Maan was forcing her ,, Rashi too insisted her to stay in KM rather than in OH but Geet didn't accept giving excuses of U&A Sam .

All d final arrangements had done ,, Geet already informed Prem nd Heer for her visit nd left a set of her car nd house keys with them to take care in their absence . Heer was preg nd shared this happy news with Geet ,, d day of their departure had come ,, Manu nd Maan wr super excited ,, there was no limits of their happiness ,, everyday they planned many things for them to do after reaching India ,, Geet was hell busy in packing for all ,, she had to look after of U&A Sam too ,, her office responsibilities nd work was increasing .

All landed early in mrng nd Yash was there to receive them ,, Geet introduced him with U&A Sam who wr like a guardian for her in US ,, Yash welcomed them wholeheartedly nd thanked them for taking care of Geet nd Manu ,, U&A Sam wr impressed with Yash's humble behaviour ,, all reached in KM nd met with each other ,, where Geet was feeling very odd to stay there like this Manu was over joyed seeing his darling Jojo again ,, he met with all nd filled d house with his chip ,, started playing with Jojo ,, who recognised him in a go nd licking her hands nd stood up on his 2 legs placing 2 on Manu's chest ,, Jojo grown up more in these months ,, all wr smiling at Manu nd his antics ,, d whole KM was filled with life again .

After spending some time with all Geet voice out to go OH coz d elderly couple need rest coz of jetleg ,, Maan called Nakul nd other servants to take d luggage in OH ,, Geet was impressed with d arrangements in OH ,, it was beautiful ,, in her stay she never come here ,, she saw that locked all d time ,, even U&A Sam too appreciated that ,, d entry/exit of OH was separate from main KM but from back side it was attached by a corridor ,,, there was swimming pool between d those units ,, Nakul showed their rooms nd went ,, Geet told U&A Sam to take rest nd they went ,, she checked few more things which she requested to Rashi to arrange there nd find them in d kitchen ,, she didn't want to be depend on them all d time .

Geet opened Manu's baby bag nd took out his milk bottles nd milk pack ,, warm water in elec kettle nd prepared his milk .

Geet : Mr Khurana ab aap bhi rest kijiye , baki mai sab dekh lungi ,, aap pareshan matt hona .

Maan: thanks Geet for this favour nd d happiness u gave me nd all ,, thanks a lot nd welcome home .

Geet: no need to thank me , I accepted ur condition nd hope u respect mine .

Maan: huumm ,, nd yeah ... Jojo is here ,, manu won't live him for few days ,, if u feel any prob call Satish ,, Ok Baby now take ur milk nd sleep for some time ,, Geet come i'll show u ur nd Manu's room .

He opened a room which was quiet big nd beautiful with royal touch ,, He pecked Manu's cheeks nd settled him in d baby cot attached to bed ,, gave him milk bottle nd bid bye ,, Jojo sat near a chair on carpet ,, he was not willing to leave his partner now .

Geet opened her bag nd changed ,,then manu's dress nd both sleep cuddling to each other .

Maan went back in KM nd find Rashi nd DM waited for him ,, they wr silently watching his happiness which they didn't notice in UK ,, though he was with d family members , but there they found him lost all d time .

Maan: mom , DM aap bhi rest karo ,, abhi to kafi time hei .

Rashi: hum tumhara wait ker rahe thy ,, at last u r back but I m surprised u planned to come so early beta.

Maan sat near Raashi hugging her side way : yeah , it is unexpected but when I came to know that Geet nd manu r going then I thought to come with them ,,, ku mera aana accha nahi laga , wapas jaun ..?

Rashi : no , I m just asking ,, I m so happy to see u here ,, now ur dad cn get proper rest ,, his big support is here with him .

Maan: why DM is so quiet ,, r u not happy DM seeing me here ?

DM : I m very much happy beta but I m witnessing a big change in u ,, I never saw u this much happy .

Rashi: yes , Maa is right Maan ,, I m glad that u started enjoying ur life nd work.

Maan: pray for me to keep me happy like this for ever , OK fine , i m going to take some rest nd then I'll go to KC ,, aahh,, after so many days I m going to work there .


Precap ----- Geet's rejections affected DM ...


Part - 82



sorry for mistakes ...




Edited by singh24 - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
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lovly update...
maan s makng lot of effort 2 keep geet n km. But geet s nt able 2 overcme the past @ stay n km..
lovd it..
continue soon vl b waitng
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Posted: 10 years ago
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hi thanks 4 da pm 4 Part 80 nw. awesome update! well written! Maan has no option n blackmails her! Geet upset! she needs time! update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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😃 Hi Avi...
kya chal raha hei..??

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Posted: 10 years ago
WOW!! brilliant update...loved it dear...

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