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Posted: 10 years ago
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~ DIRTY REVENGE ( PURE LOVE ) ~


~ PART - 17 ~


Maan was going to leave office to attend his meeting when he thought to check his mails . He logged in and found many mails . He was going through all the mails and then he clicked on a mail named " a beautiful surprise for u " and it was sent by Mr.Grewal . He frowned opening the mail . He found a video and played it..


The video started with kidnappers dragging Geet from KC , making her sit in car , sealing her mouth and then entering barren factory , tying her on chair with ropes and the video ended with line " dead body will reach soon "..


Maan was bewilered seeing the video . Shocked would be an understatement . No word can describe his feelings seeing Geet like this . He immediately came in action..


" u are gone grewal..nobody can save u from me now..thats my promise " resoluted Maan with determined face . He grabbed his keys and strode towards his car continously calling Geet on her phone but it was coming switched off . He called his bodyguards and told them to find about Geet and inform me soon..

*****

Geet lifted herself a bit from chair to see kidnappers position . Only one kidnapper was there in other room and was sitting with closed eyes . She took out other sim from her jeans pocket . She always carry extra sim for emergency puposes . She thought to call her father but then shrugged the thought not wanting to tensed them . She smiled as Maan's name come to her mind and she instantly dialed his number..

*****

Maan was busy taking his bodyguards class as its been an hour and they hadn't found about Geet's location till now . His phone rang giving some relief to his bg's . He picked uo the phone without seeing caller's name..


" hello Maan sir " chirply greeted Geet over the phone..


" Geet tum " shockingly said Maan recognising her voice..


" haa mein " replied Geet..


" tum hu kaha aur kis no. se phone kar rahi hu..tum theek toh ho na " Maan going on with his questions without any break..


" uff Maan sir..thodi shaanti rakho..yeh choti si jaan itne jawab ek saath nahi de sakti " poutingly told Geet stopping him..


" aur haa mein bilkul theek ho..maze kar rahi ho..khaa-pee rahi ho..aap tention na lo " said Geet smilingly..


" tum kidnap huyi ho ya phir yeh log tumhe outing ke liye laye hai " amusingly asked Maan..


" jo bhi ho aap bas jaldi se yaha aajao..mein bore ho rahi ho " cutely complained Geet and Maan started laughing listening to her..


" why are u laughing " asked Geet with her baby anger..


" Geet..people in this situation says jaldi aajao..mujhe dar lag raha hai aur tum keh rahi hu ki tum bore jo rahi hai " laughingly replied Maan..


" but jo mein feel kar rahi hu wohi bol rahi hu " honestly said Geet..


" acha thik hai baba..tell me ur location " asked Maan opening his car door and signaling his bg's to come behind him..


" nahi pata " replied Geet making crying face..


" koi baat nahi..turn on ur GPS.. engage kidnappers in ur talks..I will reach there shortly " said Maan driving car..


" thik hai..bye aur haa jaldi aana " adieud Geet keeping eyes on kidnapper..


" hmm " hummed Maan in response and ended the call turning on his GPS and started following her location..


He was so happy on finding Geet totally fine . He was smiling remembering Geet's words . He can't believe that she was not at all freaked out . Instead she was enjoying there as if madam has gone for a trip . He was right now trying to imagine kidnappers state . She must be making them dance on their feets by demading some or other thing..


*****

" oye !! come here " called Geet after keeping her phone safely in her pocket..


" bolo madam..ab kya demand hai aapki " sweetly asked kidnapper coming towards her..


" kuch nahi..bas I was feeling bore..so thought to call u to do some chit-chatting " said Geet giving him her angelic smile..


" arey bhaitho na..lets talk " said Geet gesturing towards chair and kidnapper too sat as he was also feeling bore..


" what is ur name " asked Geet excitedly..


" Rahul " replied kidnapper leaning backwards..


" nice name..SRK type..shaadi ho gayi aapki " asked Geet . She was enjoying this..


" haa madam " replied kidnapper with not so good expression..


" aisa reaction kyu de rahe hu " questioned Geet noticing his expression..


" ab kya batao madam " sulked kidnapper remembering his wife..


" kyu aisa kya karti hai aapki biwi jo aap bata bhi nahi sakte " winked Geet at him..


" wohi jo har biwi karti hai..bahut dominate karti hai " cried kidnapper telling about his wife..


" acha..bahar toh bade kidnapper bankar ghunmte hu ghar mein bheegi billi ( scared cat ) " teasingly said Geet..


" ab madam sachayi toh yehi hai..bahar toh sab sher hote hai par biwi ke samne koi sher nahi hote " told kidnapper . Geet too nodded her head agreeing to him..


Maan's car stopped in front of factory . He descended from car with red angered face . He started walking towards entrance taking long steps . His bg's followed him with armed guns . He kicked door with his right leg startling Geet and the kidnapper who were engrossed in their intersting talks . Geet smiled widely whereas kidnapper was shocked with stalker..


After searching whole factory , Maan finally came to room where Geet was tied . Geet waved happily looking at him and Maan could only smile at her gesture . She is so sweet and brave . Not a tinge of scareness was there on her face . She was actually smiling . He shoot draggers at kidnapper and stroding towards him , held his neck tightly pushing him to floor . His bg's untied Geet . Geet stood up stretching her constricted body..


Maan was beating the kidnapper , kicking and punching him while Geet was cheering him amusing bg's . All bg's were shocked witnessing Geet's cheering . They thought that the girl will be crying but no she was smiling..


" Maan sir aur maaro..ache se " Geet was jumping . It totally looked like a filmy scene to her..


Maan finished beating leaving poor guy unconcious . He walked towards Geet and checked her properly to ensure himself that she is completely alright . He hugged her compactly heaving a sigh of relief . Geet was stunned with the hug but then she too hugged him..


" chale " asked Maan breaking from hug..


" haa par mujhe bhi maarna kidnapper ko " said Geet with cute baby face..


" nahi ab chalo..maine tumhare hissa ka bhi mar diya " Maan dragged her ignoring her worthless words..


" but I also wanna punch him " said Geet trying to release herself from his grip..


" Geet I said na no..so no means no " sternly told Maan making her sit in passenger seat and took driver seat and started the car..


Geet turned her face towards window grumply . She was angry on him for letting her hit kidnapper . She so much wanted to punch that kidnapper but Maan flopped her plan . Maan shaked his head at her typical childish nature..


Precap - Maan and Geet's pov..Mr.Grewal in Maan's custody


Thanks for all the likes and comments 😳


HAPPY NEW YEAR !!!!!




Edited by Preeti_Maaneet - 10 years ago
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Posted: 10 years ago
#12
OMG OMG!!
I so much love dis geet..
She's so adorable
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Posted: 10 years ago
#13
sooo cute di!!
lovely bubbly geet!!
wonderful update...
i think we too should carry extra sim+phone
coz true kidnappers will not take the sim and give us phone;)

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Posted: 10 years ago
#14
awesm update simran👏
maan got knw abt geet's kidnap nd he was in action😃
geet had extra sim card👍🏼 nd cald maan who was takng class of his BG's
geet tld maan cm soon as she is gettng bord 🤣 maan shockd geet rockd😆
maan tld geet 2 open her GPS nd got her location👍🏼
geet startd 2 talk wit d kidnapper nd maan came nd startd 2 beat him nd geet was chearng him😆
nw geet is angry on maan coz he didnt allowd her 2 beat d kidnapper😆
waitng 4 d nxt part simran update soon
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Posted: 10 years ago
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😆 ... Geet's so funny !

Nice part..



Happy New year:)
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Happy new year dear ...
awesome update
bichare kidnapers
smart geet ...
grt job sweety ..
waiting fr nxt
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Posted: 10 years ago
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maan is falling for geet...
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Posted: 10 years ago
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Nice update
Geet was Lovely
Happy new year
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Posted: 10 years ago
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awww..I can read on & on about our adorable geet...😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
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awesome update ...
lovd it, continue soon waitng
hapie new year...

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