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Posted: 10 years ago

(For banner credit goes to my dear priya)
The Jinx

An object or person that brings bad luck.

It can take you days, months, even years to better your life but it only takes a second for you to ruin someone else's.


Prologue
No one is ever created to be perfect we all have some kind of flaw that makes us unique and make us who we are ...
Many times we curse our flaws and look at them with shame .
But , sometimes for d most blessed of us , God use these flaws to soften our spirit and turn us
into a kinder more beautiful and compassionate
soul ...

Note... This is a fiction inspired by some facts and incidents form our surroundings . If someone find any resemblance in d title and story line they r welcome to leave ur comments on my page (plzz don't pm me)wit
h d link . I'll try my best not to touch any body's work. Need ur love and support to make it an interesting FF.





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Part - 61

This was d most complicated situation for Maan ,, he didn't have any option ,, he didn't know to whom he talk 1st .. his parents OR Geet ,, Geet cd hide this ,, she had d reasons but what about him ? Did he remain quiet thinking for his family nd parent's reactions ,, he knew that it was a hard blow for them nd hurt them to no extent ,, it cd brought pain nd prob for him nd all,, he made a mistake earlier choosing a wrong girl nd put his Dad's life in danger , he forgot his smile after leaving Geet ,, didn't know how he bear this shock ,, it was again related to her loving Geet nd this time his sin was not to forget ,, Maan's whole body shuddered with fear.

Maan got up with a jerk ,, d feel of a soft pat on his cheek ,, he opened his drowsy eyes nd find manu sitting near him ,, he was patting his cheek nd calling him .. uncle Maan ,, whele is mommy ?

Maan: manu Baby ,, u wake up .. mommy'll come today ,, let's go we'll talk to ur mommy ,, come my baby ,, u didn't wish me GM .

Manu sadly : GM uncle Maan ,, I want mommy .

Maan came out from bed nd took him to washroom 1st ,, he was talking to manu to divert his mind .

Maan: yes , we'll go to meet mommy ,, Manu'll talk to his mommy like he talked at night ,, u remember baby ?

Manu nodded : when we go to meet mommy ?

Maan: when my baby get ready ?

Manu: now ..?

Maan: OK , but finish ur routine nd get ready ,, like u did with ur mommy .. mommy wants to see her good baby Manu .

Manu: i'm a good baby uncle Maan ,, blush my teeth ,, took bath nd nd lealn poems nd counting ,, OK .

Maan pecked his cheek lovingly .. OK , my sweetest baby ,, lets go nd take bath.

Manu; no o o.. my milk ,, mommy give me milk .

Maan: OK ,, come .

He went in kitchen taking Maan in his arms ,, he was tickling him in his tummy nd making him laugh ,, Maan settled Manu on slab nd prepared his milk ,, made his coffee too ,, both had their milk nd coffee nd then started their rest of work ,, both took bath together ,, it was a fun for Manu ,, both wr throwing water on each other ,, rubbing foam on each other ,, they had a btful mrng ,, Maan came out wrapping Manu in a towel nd made him sit on bed ,, went to take his cloth from cupboard ,, he was searching his warmer nd got an album there ,, he opened that nd find Geet nd baby Manu's pics there ,, maan took that out to see later.


Maan called Geet nd asked about Manu's dresses ,, she told him nd then Maan handed phone to Manu to talk his mommy ,, manu made a puppy face talking to her ,, both wr missing each other even Geet was much worried for her child ,, Maan dressed up Manu , then himself ,, both mom nd son wr lil satisfied talking to each other ,, Maan put d phone on loud ns started to ask about their BF ,, they wr in kitchen nd like last night she was narrating nd Maan was preparing ,, even Manu too showing things to Maan ,, they had their BF nd then Maan secured d kitchen ,, packed Manu's baby bag ,, both wr ready to go hsptl ,, Maan settled Manu in car nd told him to revise his poems nd countings ,, all d way Maan kept him busy ,, they reached hsptl nd met with Geet .

Geet was in half laying form nd gestured Maan to made manu on her bed ,, her drip was off now nd she hugged Manu tightly ,, kissed him nd cocooned him .

Maan: Geet be careful , u have stitches .

Geet: esne tang kiya kya ?

Maan: nahi ,, bilkul nahi ,, bas tumhe miss kiya .

Geet: tumhe office jana hoga na ? Manu ke crche maine phone ker diya hei .

Maan: OK , but i'm not going .

Geet: i'll call a baby sitter ,, plzz u don't skip ur office .

Maan: there is no need to go daily ,, I cn check d things on lappy too , so don't worry about me ,, what about u ?

Geet with hung face: Don't know , I think dr won't discharge me today may be TM mrng .

Maan: don't feel bad ,, it's good for u Geet .

Geet: i'm sorry , I put u in trouble to manage my kid ,, it's so tough to handle a small child .

Maan: i'm handling him from last night but u r doing this before his birth .

Geet: i'm his mother ,, it's my responsibility nd love .

Maan : nd what about me ? m I nothing to him ? my love is nothing ? bolo Geet .

Geet turned mum ,, he again was dragging d matter on diff path ,, Maan was staring at her painfully thinking .. why she was not accepting d truth openly that manu belong to him .

Maan: ek bar kaha ku nahi deti Geet ,, kya chup rahane se sacchai badal jayegi ?

Geet : mujhe es bare mei koi baat nahi kerni mr Khurana ,, plzz .

Maan shied in pain nd sat near her on chair ,, Geet was hiding her eyes ,, she was feeling bad taking Maan's favour which giving him chance to mingle in her nd Manu's life .

Geet: manu baby did u trouble ur uncle Maan ?

Manu: no mommy ,, I was good ,, light uncle Maan .

Maan : yes sunny ,, u r a good boy .

Manu: mommy , uncle made dinnel nd he gave me bath ,, I blush my teeth , see ,, eee,,

Geet nd Maan smiled at his kiddish talk nd act ,, Geet kissed manu's hand lovingly .

Geet: good ,, don't trouble ur uncle Maan baby ,, OK , be a good baby .

Manu: OK ,,, come home mommy , hsptl is not good ,, manu don't like it ,, come home .( he made a puppy face)

Maan: Manu baby come to me ,, ur mommy has fever , so dr keep her here .

Manu: no ,, I told doctol ,, leave my mommy .

Geet felt miserable ,, her child was missing her nd so she but she cdn't go home ,, she chewed her dried lower lip nd few drops fell down from her eyes ,, Maan got up nd wiped her eyes .

Maan: Geet what r doing ,, plzz don't cry ,, Manu feel bad if he see her mommy in tears .

Geet: why babaji giving me nd my child this pain ,, i'm really very bad .

Maan: no Geet ,, plzz don't say this ,, u nd Manu r angles ,, who gave only happiness to all ,, it's a prob for few days nd u'll be hale nd hearty very soon to look after us ,, trust me Geet i'm not having any prob handling Manu .

Manu: yes ,, mommy I'm a good baby ,, mommy tell santa to give me a big cal .

Geet wiped her eyes nd gave a faint smile to Manu : yes baby i'll tell him .

Manu: mommy ,, we came in uncle Maan's cal ,, biigg cal .

Geet: really ,, good ,, mr Khurana r u comfortable in driving now ?

Maan: yes , don't worry , I drove slow nd carefully .

She nodded with a faint smile .

They spent their day together nd then at eve Maan nd manu went back home when manu slept ,, Maan needed baby car seat for manu but he didn't know from where he cd get that so he called cab driver Balwant nd asked him .

Balwant was 1 step ahead ,, he said that he wd brought for him nd handed him at his home ,, at night he did his job nd brought a baby car seat for Maan ,, Maan thanked him for this timely help .


Precap --- Geet back at home ...


Edited by singh24 - 10 years ago
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Hello priya nd JP..

singh24 thumbnail
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Originally posted by: chingaming

Superrrb ff!!! Loved each and every single update

Just finished reading all of them

Wow!!


🤗 Thanku dear..
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Posted: 10 years ago

Originally posted by: singh24




Hello priya nd JP..



aaj golu ke saath aayi ho😆😆
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Posted: 10 years ago
manu ko de do... kush ho jaye ga
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Posted: 10 years ago
awesome update...I felt really bad for maaneet when geet tried to deny in front of the nurse & maan about their relation...Loved how maan handled geet though it would have been impossible without geet...
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Originally posted by: Jeevana.

manu ko de do... kush ho jaye ga


😆😆


singh24 thumbnail
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😃 Hi Lakshu ,, badi flick ker rahi ho...
kahan busy thi..?
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babie mera gn. neend aarahi hai. kal main shadi pe jaarahi hoon. sun ko wapas aaongi
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Originally posted by: priya111111



aaj golu ke saath aayi ho😆😆


😆 haan ,, mona to bhool gai sabko...
socha mai yaad ker lu..😛

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