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(For banner credit goes to my dear priya)
The Jinx

An object or person that brings bad luck.

It can take you days, months, even years to better your life but it only takes a second for you to ruin someone else's.


Prologue
No one is ever created to be perfect we all have some kind of flaw that makes us unique and make us who we are ...
Many times we curse our flaws and look at them with shame .
But , sometimes for d most blessed of us , God use these flaws to soften our spirit and turn us
into a kinder more beautiful and compassionate
soul ...

Note... This is a fiction inspired by some facts and incidents form our surroundings . If someone find any resemblance in d title and story line they r welcome to leave ur comments on my page (plzz don't pm me)wit
h d link . I'll try my best not to touch any body's work. Need ur love and support to make it an interesting FF.




Part 53
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/4228650/mg-ff-the-jinx-thread-6-updated-pt-53-pg-136-30th-nov



Part - 54

Maan was sitting quietly nd passing a faint smile but he was hell worried for Geet nd manu bcoz he very well knew that Geet wdn't allow him to take care of them after last night incident , nd he cdn't leave them alone here in this big house ,, U&A Sam wr leaving all d responsibilities on him nd trusting him that he was here for them ,, it was going tough for him to face Geet nd made her to allow him near them ,, he was lost in his thoughts nd praying inwardly to help him .

They talked for few more min nd U&A Sam thanked nd insisted Maan for his support nd taking care for Geet nd Manu ,, Maan asured them ,, Geet was feeling very owkward ,, she was helpless to give her willingness infront of U&A Sam ,, to escape herself from that talk she excused to make coffee for all ,, Maan gave a deep look to her nd sensed her restlessness ,, he knew that he had to face a tough Geet in coming days .

Geet was preparing coffee nd as well as started for dinner ,, she was in a fix ,, U&A Sam wr insisting Maan to take care of her nd Manu nd Maan was accepting but how she allow him close to her now ,, she wanted to maintain a distance nd here situation wr going against her wish ,, U&Awent after some time but Maan remained there ,, Geet gave a blank look to him nd went in kitchen ,, a deep silence prevail there ,, Maan's eyes wr following her ,, wanted to talk her ,, but her avoidance nd cold mannor was fearing him ,, he gathered his courage nd went in kitchen .

Maan: G e e t .

Her hands stopped but she didn't turn ,, she was expecting this when Maan remained there .

Maan: G e e t ,, I ... I want to talk u ,, plzz.

Geet turned nd gave a cold look to him , him ... The Maan Singh Khurana ... a high headed person ,, always tried to dominate other , even he replied back his Dad when he was talking in Geet's favour ,, who never fumbled in life but today he was in short of words ,, requesting her to talk ,, there was pain nd regeret in his eyes .

Maan: plzz ,, G e e t ,, it's needed .

Geet: I don't think so mr khurana ,, I don't want to talk anyone about my very personal matters .

Maan: but that matter is related to me too .

Geet: but u cn't force me if i'm not willing .

Maan: i'm requesting Geet , not forcing u ,, plzz .

Geet: mr Khurana , u r making things more difficult for me ,, I don't want to be harsh , plzz leave , nd let me live in peace .

Maan: G e e t ,, i'm dying nd won't go without talk ,, my guilt is eating me .

Geet in a harsh tone: to mai kya karu ?

Maan: u cn punish me , u cn accuse me , curse me , so that I cn get some peace .

Geet: what ???

Maan: Geet , I won't request u to forgive me ,, I don't deserve that ,, there is only punishment , which u decide for me .

Geet: but for what ?

Maan: for my sin ,, for ruining ur life .( he lowered his head ashamed )

Geet: Mr Khurana , go nd live ur life ,, u have a caring family , responsibilities for them nd for ur business ,, plzz spare us nd let us live our life ,, I'm not peeping in ur life nd requesting u not to disturb mine .

Maan (painfully) : Geet , I don't have any life nd how cn I live with this pain , with this guilt ,, without u nd manu ,, it's impossible Geet .

Geet (coldly): go back to ur family nd forget about us ,, I don't want any shadow of my past near me ,, I don't want to talk about that too ,, plzz go .

She turned nd tried to move from there but Maan held her hand to stop her ,, came infront of her ,, held her sholders nd pulled her lil close to him ,, there was pain nd frustration on his face .

Maan: but I cn't do that Geet ,, I cn't ,, how cn I overlook all those things which happened between us ? Is that simple ?

Geet: which things mr Khurana ?

Maan: u very well know Geet nd I want to know d whole truth ,, what had happened that night .

Geet shivered nd turned her face : nothing .

Maan: don't hide Geet .

Geet spoke in an angry nd cracky voice : then go nd find out anywhere,, don't trouble me ,, i'm not ur slave who'll dance on ur tunes , leave my house .

Maan: no Geet ,, not today ,, u hide it from long but not now ,, i'm not troubling u but wanted to know d truth which u know but I m unaware.

Geet got annoyed with his pestering : there is nothing , plzz leave.

She tried to make her free from Maan's hold but he tightened his grip more ,, he wanted her acceptance verbly ,, he was provoking her to pour out her pain nd anger on him ,, he wanted to listen d whole truth of that night which was a mysetry for him .

Maan: if nothing is there then who is manu's father ?

Geet gave a hard look to him : it's none of ur business ,, I never asked about ur GF nd love life .

Maan: u cn ask anything nd I won't go from here without knowing d truth which scattered our life ,, I regret not to trust u Geet ,, I regret .

Geet I want to return all d happiness to my family ,, to mom nd dad which they lost bcoz of me ,, dad didn't punish me , didn't let me do anything but he was hurt deep inside ,, now u r not saying me anything ,, plzz Geet , share with me ,, plzz tell me .

Geet opened her mouth to speak but her words stuck in her mouth listening manu's voice ... mommy ,,,,, mommy ,, Maan too looked at that side nd removed his hands from Geet ,, Manu was standing there nd rubbing his eyes lazily .

Manu: mommy ,, i' m hung ly ,, uncle maan , u don't play with me today.

Geet took him in her arms nd made him sit in d chair .

Geet: sit here baby , i'm bringing ur milk ,, OK .( Manu nodded nd Geet left , Maan lifted him nd made him sit in his lap )

Maan: I missed u Manu ,, u went alone for shopping .

Manu: mommy blought me in childen palk ,, big palk .( he spread his arms)

Maan: really ,, nd u didn't bring me with u .( maan show a fake pout to manu)

Manu: soly ,, don't cly ,, I 'll give u chocolate n n we go again ,, OK .

Maan sadly: OK .

Manu : plo mise ,, what u bling for me ?

Geet heard that nd saddened thinking .. how her son becomes addicted of Maan's pampering ,, how she'll manage this ? She came with Manu's milk bottle.

Geet: Manu ,, no baby ,, don't be demanding every time ,, it's bad habit baby.

Maan: it's OK ,,, he has this right nd cn ask anything to me .( Geet gave a glare to him nd move back in kitchen)

Maan took Manu in his lap ,, took bottle from Geet's hand nd handed manu to take his milk ,, having manu close to him nd doing small things for him pleased Maan's heart ,, now he wanted to spend every min with him nd Geet but this was going next to impossible in current situation ,, Geet was hurt nd tough to handle .


Precap ---- outbreak ...


Part - 55



sorry for mistakes ...



Edited by singh24 - 10 years ago
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CONG ON NEW THREAD ...DEAR...👏
NOW EAGERLY WAITIN FOR NEXT PART..TO C HOW GEET GONA REACT WIT u&A GOING OUT OF CITY ND MAAN WIT DEM...
WAITN FOR MANEET AND MANU MOMENTS...

HOPE HE TRY TO WASH HIS SINS A BIT WIT HIS BEHAVIOUR ND LOVE AND CARE TOWARDS GEET AND MANU..
THOUGH ITS HARD..
BT STILL WAITN..


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awsemm update maan wanted geet to accept verbally geet not telling maan in guilt
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Congo for new thread...

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mein der raat tak nahi hoon

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