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geet asking maan to come out of his guilt but he is unable to do so
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geet and maan🥺...

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wow lovely heart winching update..omg te way my maan drowning in they pain , one trying to forget and living with her furture but again her painful past came in front of her and other one , came to know his life ki biggest sin and repenting his sin was lovely heart winching..te way my maan asking her to punish him but wen she herself shattered, wat she will do to him..wat ever but geet ki innocent herat worrying for my maan was lovely emotional..wen my maaneet ki kashmakash will end..i love te update so much yar, with heavy heart
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Edited by singh24 - 10 years ago
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(For banner credit goes to my dear priya)
The Jinx

An object or person that brings bad luck.

It can take you days, months, even years to better your life but it only takes a second for you to ruin someone else's.


Prologue
No one is ever created to be perfect we all have some kind of flaw that makes us unique and make us who we are ...
Many times we curse our flaws and look at them with shame .
But , sometimes for d most blessed of us , God use these flaws to soften our spirit and turn us
into a kinder more beautiful and compassionate
soul ...

Note... This is a fiction inspired by some facts and incidents form our surroundings . If someone find any resemblance in d title and story line they r welcome to leave ur comments on my page (plzz don't pm me)wit
h d link . I'll try my best not to touch any body's work. Need ur love and support to make it an interesting FF.




Part 56



Part - 57

There in his home Maan was getting ready ,, physically he was there but his heart nd mind was with Geet ,, d talk of last night ,, her anger nd out burst ,, his guilt nd her consoling wr roaming in his mind ,, many things came out nd few remain disclose ,, now he was sure that in his fit of rage he crossed all d limits nd hurt Geet to no extent ,, there was no repair of that damage ,, he threw her in hell to bear all d pain of this world alone ,, alone with a child .. Manu ... Manu his baby .. his innocent baby .. oh God .. his heart cried out thinking about Manu .

His anger nd inner pain started overpowering him again ,, he hit d mirror with a strong punch cursing him ,, wounded his hand ,, blood was dripping from that he was acusing himself for spoiling Geet nd Manu's life ,, both wr alone in this world .. there was no end of his pain nd accusations ... Maan tere es gunah ke liye har saza kam hei .

He didn't know what to do next after getting d truth ,, though Geet didn't admit verbely in fornt of him that Manu was his child, but there was no second thought that he belong to him ,, tears rolled down from his eyes nd mumbled painfylly .. etna sab ho gaya aur mujhe kuch pata tak nahi ,, maine uski zindgi ujad di ,, uske sath jane kaise behave kiya hoga ,, kis hadh tak toda maine Geet ko mera accha sochne ke liye ,, kaise saha hoga usne meri hawaniyat ko ? Kaise ?

Mera ansh ko apne ander sahati rahi ,, use janam diya ,, usse pala ,, pyaar kiya ,, na jane kitni takleefe sahi hongi ,, etna sab hone ke baad bhi usne Manu ko mere pariwaar se jode rakha ,, din-raat us dard ko sahati rahi aur ab bhi sah rahi hei ,, mujhe apne samne dekhti hogi to kya guzarti hogi us per lekin chup- chap saha rahi hei ,, meri care kerti hei ,, aur ye sab Dad aur Mom ke karan ,, kunki wo un dono ko dukh nahi de sakti ,, mere pariwaar ko koi dukh nahi de sakti ,, aaj bhi uske liye mom-dad ki khushi sabse upper hei ,, chup hei hum sabki khusi ke liye ,, God I hurt nd ruined an angle ,, snached all d happiness from her life ,, kya karu mai ab ? Oh God ! plzz help me , show me any way .

He was lost in his grief nd came in reality with d ringing of his phone ,, which was from his Dad ,, he didn't call them at night so Yash called him ,, Maan composed himself nd replied him that he wd call him back after few min ,, he check d time nd got ready hurridly ,, he lost all d time in his thoghts nd now he was in short of time ,, heard d horn on Geet's car at d gate ,, took his office bag nd rush out he didn't get time to think about his BF ,, lock d house nd joined Geet nd Manu ,, his face lit seeing his lil cutie's smile who was saying him GM ,, Maan pecked Manu's cheeks wishing him back ,, Maan came in front seat nd gave a look to Geet who was quietly waiting for him to take seat ,, there was blankness in her eyes which pricked Maan's heart ,, he sat with heavy heart ,, Geet forwarded a box nd cane to him ,, Maan took that quietly nd opened d box ,, his eyes turn wet nd felt a lump in his throat seeing d BF for him ,, still she was thinking for him nd caring him ,, a painful smile crept on his lips ,, he gulped hard nd thanked her in a cracky voice .

Maan called to his Dad nd gave d phone to Manu after few talk then Manu talk for long with all turn by turn ,, Maan was smiling listening his cuties talks nd having his BF but Geet was driving quietly , though her silence was hurting Maan but he knew her that she was also in pain .

Geet dropped manu to his crche nd then she nd Maan went to their office ,, rest of that small distance both wr silent ,, at eve she find Maan near her car before her ,, he didn't call but sent a msg that he was waiting in parking .

Days started passing Maan was in dilemma how to start further talk to Geet nd what ..? He was not getting proper steps to go forward ,, her cold behaviour nd avoidance pricking his heart ,, he wanted to share all her pain , wanted to give all d happiness of world ,, wanted to keep them infront of him to pamper them ,but how ? He lost all his will power when he saw her cold face nd blank eyes .

There Geet was struggling with her mind nd heart , trying to find any way to distance Maan ,, there was a fear in her heart also ,, U&A Sam wr going nd she had to live alone with lil Manu in this big house for a week ,, she cdn't even ask any help to Prem nd Heer , both wr married now nd had their life ,, she cdn't even go to their house coz of her working schedule ,, working from home didn't work ,, main prob was living alone in dark cold rainy nights ,, she never thought that she had to face this type of situation ,, every passing day was going hard for her ,, pile on d egony she got d call form Heer that Prem's G Father was serious nd they had to move India urgently nd before U&A Sam both her friends too left for India ,, after yrs she was again in very tough situations .. One side Maan nd other side living alone ,, why life was this much tough for her .

It was d night nd Maan,Geet nd Manu wr with U&A Sam ,, both wr going next mrnig ,, they gave him toys , chocolates nd cake for Christmas ,, he was very happy enjoying nd showing Maan nd Geet .

Manu: uncle Maan what u'll give me ?

Maan smiled thinking that he cd give his life to him : what do u want sunny ?

Manu: I , I want ,, aammm,, don't know .( he pouted when didn't get what he wants)

All smiled seeing his pout ,, after few talk Geet got up to go nd maan to get d indication that he had to go ,, U Sam requested Maan to take good care of Geet nd Manu in their absence nd Maan assured them nd left after wishing them GN, HJ ,, he loved manu nd went out giving Geet a faint smile .

Geet too came back to her house there wr two more days for office nd then holiday for Christmas followed by sat nd sun ,, she cd manage d days but what about nights ? she prayed to Babaji inwardly .. Babaji plz send any Santa for her nd her child .

All night she wake up many times ,, next mrnig she wake up early nd prepared BF for U&A Sam too ,, she wake up Manu nd both bid bye to U&A Sam ,, she was feeling dull nd feverish ,, she hardly had her BF nd took a common tab for mild fever ,, locked d house nd went to take Maan who was waiting at his gate ,, as usual he wished her GM nd she replied casually, loved Manu nd sat ,, he find Geet dull nd tired .

Maan: Geet r u fine ?

Geet only hummed without looking at him ,, Manu gave him info that U&A Sam went in d mrnig ,,Maan felt that may be coz of their departure she was feeling sad ,, he knew she nd Manu wr very attached to them , Maan started talking to Manu ,, called to his dad on skype nd then he nd manu talked to all ,, Geet only sad GE to all ,, she was driving quietly ,, she left Manu nd then they wr in their office ,, her saddened face was hurting Maan ,, he was sensing that she was dull but she was not even looking at him then sharing her prob was far away ,, both went to their respective offices with heavy hearts .

After passing hrs Geet conditions starting going bad ,, she was feeling mild pain in her tummy nd vomited 2-3 times ,, her body was warm due to fever nd she decided to take half day leave nd informe her Sr about her condition ,, she her office bag nd laapy to go but felt sharp pain in her right abdomen ,,she sat on her chair clutching her tummy with a cry ,, d other staff in d next cubics heard her cry nd run to her ,, finding her in pain nd fever they informed d manager nd other sr ,, all wr there nd adviced to take her hospital ,, one called d hospital nd asked for ambulance ,, within half an hr she was in d hospital nd after seeing her condition Dr said that she had appendix pain nd had to operate ,, they admittied her ,, d 2 colleagues who came with her went back after setting her belongings in her room ,, d nurses started her work ,, put her on drip after changing her dress ,, Geet had medical coverage from her company so she was getting good treatment in a good hospital but her main worry was Manu ,, she was here in this condition nd U&A Sam had gone ,, Prem nd Heer too not there for her then who was there to call ... Maan .

Tears rolled down from Geet's eyes helplessly nd she complaint to Babaji why he put her in miseries ,, now she had to ask for help , with heavy heart nd difficult she informed Manu's crche about her condition nd gave details of Maan with his pic so that he cd pick him from there then she called Maan but he didn't pick d call ,, she tried again but no reply then she left a msg for him ,, nurses wr advising her to take rest coz she was in pain nd they wr doing their tests ,, dr checked her nd said that they had to operate her in few hrs so informed her family .

Geet felt a pang in her heart at d name of family ,, she had only lil Manu nd without her mom how nd where he'll live ? though she was not willing nd comfortable to take favour from Maan but in this tight situation he was her last hope to take care of Manu ,, time was slipping nd her operation time was coming close ,, Manu's face was coming in her mind again nd again ,, in her worst condition too she was worried for Manu nd her eyes wr sheding tears ,, she called Maan again but he didn't reply ,, lastly nurses took her to OT for operation ,, Dr gave her anesthesia , in her half conscious state too she was mumbling Manu nd Maan's names then all went blank .

It was afternoon ,, Maan nd d CEO of d Co came out from d conference room ,, they wr in meeting which stretched long one after another ,, Maan's phone was on silent mod in his coat pocket ,, he went in his office nd got busy in his rest of work .


Precap ---- a very tough time to face ...

Part - 58



sorry for mistakes ...





Edited by singh24 - 10 years ago
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main bhi aagayi hoon😆😆
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bachi gm keliye abhi time hai
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Originally posted by: priya111111




main bhi aagayi hoon😆😆



tum aise kyu chal rahi ho

neend mein ho kya?

babaji... kahi gir wir gayi tho... floor toot jaayega... khaayaal rakha kar priya😉😆

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