New SS: Kya Wo Tum Ho?Updated Part 22 on Pg 104 23/9/2016

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Flame_of_Forest

@Flame_of_Forest

Dazzler

Posted: 10 years ago

#181

finished reading all updates..lovely story.

Geet wants to achieve something in life, but her parents decide her marriage..

Maan toh fida on her in the first meeting and is supportive for her future studies and career...

Geet likes Maan, but still confused..first because of her own priorities and second confused about if he is the right life-partner or the one for her..

and now her test and engagement on the same day..waiting to read what she will do about it...pls continue.

For the note: Yes for the twist...something matching the story-line and the title...but not a drastic one..😊

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khwaishfan

@khwaishfan

Elite

+ 9

Posted: 10 years ago

#182

hmm no twist...love hw the story is proceeding! Bt its ur choice as a writer!

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APARNA TAMBE

@aparna3011

Sparkler

+ 4

Posted: 10 years ago

#183

very nice updates

both r dreaming of each other

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Mayuvani5

@Mayuvani5

Voyager

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#184

no twist..please...

but at last its upto you

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Ash1991

@Ash1991

Rocker

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#185

Superb part...
Maneet going to get engaged In 2. Days n maan already going crazy fr geet...
loved the update...

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sparklingeyes11

@sparklingeyes11

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#186

Originally posted by: svani
me first
Beautifully written...

Geet's and Maan's thoughts are simply amazing..

continue soon

Thank you!!

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sparklingeyes11

@sparklingeyes11

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#187

Originally posted by: crazy_sweta
wow...

this was so amazing...
maan and geet thoughts are the same...they r trying to knw undertsand their new feelings for each other...

Nice update..!!

ill wait for the next part..

😭 i dint come first vani di ne phele post kar diya

Thank you!!

Yep they are trying to understand.

Koi baat nahi next time I update, then u can come first. :)

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sparklingeyes11

@sparklingeyes11

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#188

Originally posted by: love2_soma
are baba dono baat karlo aur clear kar lo...

superb update...

loved it very much...

thank u very much fr d lovely update...

waiting fr d nxt prt eagerly...

continue soon plz...

They will soon talk.

Thank you!!

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sparklingeyes11

@sparklingeyes11

Inactive

+ 3

Posted: 10 years ago

#189

Originally posted by: sporthy_smile28
Thanks yaar but that was much needed for such a story!
It helps in connecting with the plot...

Even though short its beautifully written!❤️

If not as separate part try n blend it with the current track/part...

It adds to the beauty of the whole chapter. ..

Now that's a reader's point of view. ..
rest up to you😊

Waiting for the next part!

That's true. Will surely try to clear their thoughts from now on.

Thank you. I am glad u liked it.