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Posted: 10 years ago
nice part
loved it maan tried to know the truth but geet didn't tell him anything
geet gave lift to him to his office. ..interesting precap...waiting for the update
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Friday hai aaj... phir kyun koi nahi hai...
mera gn bye bye
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Hello My dear friends...






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Edited by singh24 - 10 years ago
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(For banner credit goes to my dear priya)
The Jinx

An object or person that brings bad luck.

It can take you days, months, even years to better your life but it only takes a second for you to ruin someone else's.


Prologue
No one is ever created to be perfect we all have some kind of flaw that makes us unique and make us who we are ...
Many times we curse our flaws and look at them with shame .
But , sometimes for d most blessed of us , God use these flaws to soften our spirit and turn us
into a kinder more beautiful and compassionate
soul ...

Note... This is a fiction inspired by some facts and incidents form our surroundings . If someone find any resemblance in d title and story line they r welcome to leave ur comments on my page (plzz don't pm me)wit
h d link . I'll try my best not to touch any body's work. Need ur love and support to make it an interesting FF.




Part 45
https://www.indiaforums.com/forum/geet-hui-sabse-parayee/4228650/mg-ff-the-jinx-thread-6-updated-pt-53-pg-136-30th-nov?pn=24

Part - 46

Maan met Geet near her car in parking area ,, both settled with casual hi ,, It was Maan who gen started d talk he knew she won't cross that line which he drew yrs back ,, Geet only replied in minimal words ,, they wr at d crche nd Geet went to pick manu .

Manu: mommy ,, is uncle Maan coming with us ?

Geet: Yes baby ,, his office is near mine ,, for some days he'll come with us ,, why ?

Manu: I want to meet him with my flends ,, mommy I told Elia that my uncle blo ught many gifts fol me .

Geet: OK ,, I have a good news baby .

Manu: what mommy ?

Geet: i'm going to give u a good treat ,, muuaahh.

They wr near d car now nd Geet settled him in his seat ,, manu leaned towards maan nd maan pecked his forehead saying hi to him ,, he asked about his day.

Manu : uncle Maan , will u meet my fliend ?

Maan: ur friend baby , of course i'll meet .

Manu: come with me TM ,, OK .

Maan smiled : OK ,, done .

Manu: mommy ,, I want lots of choco in tleat ,, fol my fliend too .

Geet: OK .

Manu: one fol uncle too .

Maan smiled looking back at him : why for me baby ?

Manu: mommy is giving tleat to me ,, mommy give tleat uncle too ,, mommy he'll give me ice - cleam today .

Geet: why u need ice-cream from uncle now ,, i'll give what ever u want ?

Manu: mommy he plo mise me .

Maan: i'll manu ,, don't worry .

Manu; yiippee ,, mommy I got 2 tleat .

After an hr they wr in d cent mrkt area in their residencial locality ,, Geet parked d car nd all came in a big store ,, Geet had to purchase few food items for home nd choco nd ice-creame for manu ,, Manu was super happy in Maan's arms nd whispering his demands in his ear slowly ,, Maan was smiling at his cuteness when manu said ,, peezz ,, don't say to mommy .

Maan whispered : why ?

Manu pouted : she scold me .

Maan: Ok , I won't tell her ,, happy.

Manu kissed his cheek lovingly ,, Maan brought many things for manu .

Again he forced Geet to take money from him but she said that it was a treat for manu so only she wd pay today nd he cd buy for him any day .

Maan: Geet I need few things for my house too .. there wr very less thing ,, will u check my kitchen nd help me to buy ?

Geet knew his house is knew so agreed : OK , 1st let me check what is there nd what u want more .

Maan: plzz take some essential things for BF .

Geet: OK .


Geet went to take d items nd Maan nd Manu bought what they wanted behind Geet ,, manu became happy nd hugged maan's neck tightly in excitement nd jumped in his lap which pleased Maan ,, he enjoyed those moments nd pecked manu's cheek lovingly .

After shopping all wr at maan's home ,, Maan requested Geet to come in to check few things ,, reluctantly Geet went in ,, manu was happy in his uncle's home nd running all around ,, it was a big house as compare to Geet's .

Manu: mommy ,, see uncle home is vely big .

Geet: Yeah ,, Manu baby , don't spoil any thing , OK .

Maan: Geet plzz , let him play ,, will u show me how cn I use few items ,, I don't have any idea about them ,, I never went in kitchen ?

Geet: what nd why do u want to learn ? Where is ur servant ?

Maan: I told him to come TM ,, nothing was there nd what he'll do in kitchen ,, I don't know what to bring for cooking ?

Geet understood his prob : OK , show me ur kitchen nd other parts ,, we'll make a list according to ur requirements .

Maan: OK , then start with kitchen,, Geet i'm sorry i'm bothering u nd killing ur time.

Geet: it's OK mr Khurana .

Maan: then start with coffee , we need a good coffee too ,, tell me what we need nd how to make ,, I don't know how to use this cooking range ?( he made a puppy face )

Geet wanted to smile at him but suppressed nd started telling him ,, manu was enjoying his choco sitting on slab ,, Geet show him how to operate d things ,, made coffee for both ,, she took out some snacks nd placed them in plates .

Maan: why all these things ,, anything spl ?

Manu: uncle it's tleat ,, light(right) mommy ?

Geet: yes baby ,, come have ur fav pastry .

Maan: treat ,,for what Geet ? ( he knew it was not their Bdays)

Manu: mommy is happy .

Geet smiled at manu : I'm going to get promotion as manager .

Maan: wow!! Gr8 ,, congo Geet ,, in this young age u r doing well .

Geet: thanks ,, yes my son is very lucky for me ,, he brought happiness in my life .

Maan: mine too.

Geet: what ?

Maan fumbled : wo , I mean ,, i'm too feel good with him ,, he's such a cutie pai . ( Maan kissed manu's head who was enjoying his last bite of choco .. Maan took manu in his arms ,, washed his hands in sink nd then cleaned his face with hanky ,, they had their coffee with tasty snacks nd pastries .

Maan: Geet now dinner form my side .

Geet: no ,,not possible ,, I have to make for U&A sam .

Maan: don't worry ,, made here nd i'll learn ,, i'll go to give their dinner , u don't worry ,, plzzz.

Geet: we didn't change mr Khurana nd manu needs his milk .

Maan: OK then we'll go to ur home nd came back here ,,plzz ,, u r taking so much pain for me but today i'll help u nd learn to cook from u .

Geet : but u don't have all d things .

Maan: there r few ,, servant bought last day ,, check in fridge nd cabinet .

Geet cleaned d mugs nd placed them back ,, then checked his fridge nd cabinet ,, few main things wr there nd veggies n non-veg in frozen packs ,, Geet opened d packet which maan wanted for his home , told Maan to keep them at their proper places ,, she made him to do so that he cd do that later ,, made a list of few things according to his choice meals , along with some more things ,, then they went to take a stroll of house .


Precap --- Manu ...what u had done Sunny . ??


Part - 47



sorry for mistakes ...



Edited by singh24 - 10 years ago
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Me too..
😆 abhi se decide kar liya Manu is lucky

aur Geet ka kya Mr. Khurana😲

kitna pareshan kiya tha ussein

Lovely house and pastries..

Ab Manu ne kya naughty kiya hai?😆

nice😳
Edited by dqno1 - 10 years ago
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Originally posted by: singh24



Hello My dear friends...

not felling well ,, went to Dr nd for few tests..
i'm eating only Khichdi.. nd soups ,, no milk nd milk products...






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when will this flower blossom 2 update😆
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Originally posted by: vrinda22

when will this flower blossom 2 update😆


😃 giving yaar...

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